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Posted: 17 years ago
Part - 31
We see a room where a girl is standing by the window...and we see tears are flowing down from her cute and innocent face.She seems to be in very deep thought.Her thoughts are interrupted by a slight noise of door being opened and we see she wipes of her tears and then enters sadaf inside the room.sadaf comes toward that girl and stands by her side.
Sa:kab tak aisey raho ge...us insan k peeche anso bahana kahaan k akalmandi hai jis ne tumhein kabhi kuch na mana...aur jab tumhien shayad us ki sab se zyada zarorat thi..chor diya...(yah tht grl is none other than manial...n shez at sadaf's place @ da moment)
M:us ne apnaya he kahan tha ..jo tum chorney k baat karte ho..aur mujhe tu phele se he maloom tha..mera yahi haal hoga..tum fikar mat karo..mein theek hoon..
Sa:nazar araha hai kitni sahe ho tum...manial meri mano tu..maan lo bhai k baat..it would be da best option..aur phir...kisi ko tumhare ghar mein maloom para tu u knw..k kya hoga..tumhien aur afshan baji ko le jayeinge..tab hum bhi kuch na kar payenge..bhai k baat maan k sab theek hoga..ab yahe sahi option hai..wid us..hum log sab tumharey saath hain..even all of them are shayan frnds..still they r helping u...bt..kab tak...tumhein faisla lena hai manial...speak up yaar...
M:sadaf plz..mein ab apni zindagi mein kisi aur ko koi bhi makam nahee de paoongi...aur tumhare bhai..buhat naik insaan hai..unho ney.merey liye aisa soocha...mein unki izaat karti hoon..par jo jagah mein shayan ko ik baar dede hai..woh aur koi nahee le sakta..mein ..janti hoon..meri wajah se..tum sab musibat mein par sakte ho..tabhi tu kaha tha..mujhe janey do..kahin chale jati..baji ko le k..magar..tum log yahan le aye..bojh baan jaonge..jane do mujhe..
Sa:shut up..ik lagoon gi..samjhi..koi bojh nahee ho tum..aur shayan bhai..kya samjha tha unhe..i had so much of respect for him..aur unho ne jo kiya..i hate him 4 tht..
M:nahee plz.aisa maat kaho..woh ache insaan hai..par..kab tak koi insaan acha banta rahe..unhe bhi tu apni zindagi jeni the na...mein kab tak..unka sahara leti..
Sa:kuch bhi..don say gud abt him..jo kuch howa..unki wajah se...aur tum unhe k side le rahee ho.mahan bana acha hota hai...manial par itna bhi nahee...waisay bhi...woh kuch aur faisla bhi tu le sakte the...woh tumhare saath bhi tu naye zindagi guzar saktey they..kitney logon ko unka pyaar nahee milta..matlab yeh tu nahee....k pyaar se he shadi karo..aur ab jab.kisi aur se hui..tu..usey dhaka de ke nikal he do...par tum nahee samjho ge..tum par unki..pyar k pati jo bandhi hai..u thnk of him as jus gud..thts it..anyways mein yeh bataney aye thi..k mahad bahir aya hai..usney kaha hai k....shayan bhai k baba..kal subah yahan pohanch rahe hain..n he wants 2 meet u...
M:par mein..unhe kyun batya tum logon ne...
Sa:he had 2 be tld...waisey bhi mahad ka he unse contact tha..aur usi ne bola..so stop shoutng on me..aur its gud..unse mil lo..tumharey chacha lagte hain woh..aur woh isi natey milna chahtey hain..he was v angry wid shayan bhai..
M:hmm..i hop..woh shayan ko kuch na kahein..
Sa:ik tu tum..kyun na kahein..acha hoga..unhe sunayein woh..
M:plz sadaf..phele bhi unhoon ne..zabardsati shayan se haan karwaye..nateja tumharey samney hai...ab aur zabardasti ka koi fayda nahe..yah chilaney ka..kyunki..zabardasti k bandhan nahe bandhte..yeh tu ik din hona he tha...
Sa:pata nahee..tum sab bhola sakti hogi..not me...ik baar unhon ne mur ke na poocha.kahan gaye..tum..aur tum ho k..unkey khilaf nahee sunti..ab bhi..dil mein tasveer sajai bethi ho...come on manial..come out of this..leave him..yeh faisla k..bas woh tumein divorce na de....baki jis se chahe shadi karey..naam na cheney...bewakofana hai..kab tak..uske naam ke saath jiyo..gi..zindagi..naam k saharey nahee kat te...my dear..zindagi..ik saathi k saath kat ti hai..samjhe..so think...mein apney bhai k waqalat nahee karoongi..k hez gud n all..par shayad...woh tumhein pasand karte hain..aur ajj.yeh jante huey bhi k tum..kisi aur k ho..woh help ko tayar hain...accept his offer...aur waisey bhi..acha hoga..u can leave this country wid him only after marriage...afshann baji ka bhi bahir acha ilaaj hoga...aur tumharey ghar walee..bhi dhond nahee payenge...soch lo..akeley..zindagi mein mushkilein hain..aur rasta saaf aur achi zindagi ka bilkul samney hai..now u have 2 decide...mein yaheen hoon..soch lo..achey tarekey se...n then let me knw...
sadaf went out of da room..where all..umair,mahad,ali n sadaf's family..including his brother were present...n she tld them...she tried 2 convince her..now..rest is up 2 her...n they all remain quite..n were waiting 4 manial's answer...
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Next day...
We enter into shayan's apartment...we see all iz mess...n dinner leftovers are still there on center table...n magazine's r here n there...2-3 coffee mugs r there..on da floor..n in b/w shayan on da couch...looking at rotating fan on da ceiling n is in deep thought....
Bell Rings...he gts up..n opens da door..infront of him..is his own father..
S:baba app..achanak..ayee..andar..(n he hugs him..bt his dad..pushes him at side..n come inside..placing mug from floor on table..n makes place 4 himslef 2 sit)
S(feels strange..by his action..bt comes..n sit near by him):khairait baba..kya howa..
Asif:mujhe tum se aisey umeed na thi shayan..theek hai..mein janta hoon..tum ne kabhi usey kabol nahee kiay magar..tum aisey....woh is shehar mein kisey janti hai..agar uski dost sadaf na hoti tu..kahan jati woh..socha tum ne..idea hai...kuch..kahan k thokre khate..apno k hotey huey woh..aur yeh bhi na socha..k uske saath..afshan bhi hai..tum shayan..mein ne..tum se aise umed na ki thi..
S:plz baba..app ghalat samjh rahe hai..mainey us se kuch nahee kaha...mein tu khud ghar pe nahee tha..aya tu woh gayab thi...saaman bhi nahee tha..bas ik letter chor k gaye..mein kya karta..
A:tum dhoond nahee sakte the...kya farz nahee tha tumhara..kahayal na aya tumhe..akili larki kidhar hoge..
S:woh mein..usney khud letter mein likha tha..mujhe dhondne k koshish maat karyega..app he bolye..mein ne tu kuch nahee kaha..usey..pata nahee woh kyun...
A:pata nahee kyun..shayan koi aisa bena wajah nahee jata..kuch tu how tha..akhir aisi kya baat hui k achanak..tum ne tu mujhe se jo..baat k phone pe..woh kuch aur thi..aur jo mahad ne bola woh..mein kya samjho..bolo..
S:jo mainey app se kaha..mein waisa he karney wala tha..mainey ghar akey us se is barey mein baat bhi karni thi..app se jab last baat k..apko bola tha mainey...sab theek tha...k mein ghar aya aur woh gayab thi..mein kya karta...dhondne k koshish k mainey...mahad se baat k tu us ne kaha k woh sadaf k haan hai..is liye mein..chup hogaya..k theek hai..kam se kam....woh khud nahee chahti thi k main miloon us se..is liye..main nahe gaya..
A:aur tum ne mujhe..itla karna bhi zaroori nahe samjha..
S:karna chahta tha..par himat nahe hui..mainey he mahad ko appko call karney ko kaha tha..
A:kuch tu baat hui hogi..socho shayan..kya kaha tha tumney...woh aisa..kadam..jitna mein janta hoon..woh itni bhaduri..nahee dekha sakti..kuch buhat bara hua tha...aur tum mujhe se chupa rahe ho..
S:baba mein apse kyun chupaoon ga...merey bahir janey se phele..aaima..aye thi ghar..usey sab pata lag gaya tha...aur hum dono baat kar he rahe they k...manial agaye..phir woh andar room mein he thi..jab tak aaima yahan thi...
A:theek hai..maan leta hoon...mein manial se milney ja raha hoon..aur shayad..usey saath he le jaoon...dekho jo faisla woh karti hai..mein call karke bata donga..phir tum ne jo faisla kiya hai..tum uski tayari karo...
S:ji..mein janta hoon baba..jo faisla mein ne kiya hai..woh app ke liye manna asaan nahe hai...mushkil hai.par..mein bhi majboor hoon...
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ok guyz this was da part...hop u hav liked it...comments n tell me...h it was..i will be waitng 4 ur response...nxt is da last part...so 2 knw..k manial kya faisla karegi..sadaf k bhai se shadi k liye haan ya na...shayan ne kya faisla kiya hai...uske dad manial ko saath le jana mein kamyab honge k nahe..aaima...ka kya howa...in sab k jawab ke liye..wait 4 some more time...
till then..njoy..tc..
wid luv..
guriya...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
manilal left 😲 😲 😲 what happened 😭 😭 did aaima say something to her 😕 awesome part yaar 👏 cont soon can't wait the raaz to unfold 😊 gr8 part again
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Posted: 17 years ago
guriyaaaaaaaaaaaaa..............tum mere sath aisa nahi kar sakti
........soch soch ke mera brain damage ho jayega.....bataooooooooo kya hua

wat r these faisle's

tumhe jail ho jayegi meri dead hone pe warna 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hy Guriya plz yaar jaldi suspense khatam karo main soch soch kar thak gayi hoon

Shayad manial ko koi misunderstanding hogayi ho plzzzzzzz continue soooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

manilal left 😲 😲 😲 what happened 😭 😭 did aaima say something to her 😕 awesome part yaar 👏 cont soon can't wait the raaz to unfold 😊 gr8 part again

thnx dear...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

guriyaaaaaaaaaaaaa..............tum mere sath aisa nahi kar sakti
........soch soch ke mera brain damage ho jayega.....bataooooooooo kya hua

wat r these faisle's

tumhe jail ho jayegi meri dead hone pe warna 😆

sorry dear..par....will post soon...wait 4 some more time...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwaria

Hy Guriya plz yaar jaldi suspense khatam karo main soch soch kar thak gayi hoon

Shayad manial ko koi misunderstanding hogayi ho plzzzzzzz continue soooooooon

will contionue soon...don worry...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guyz...m really...v v sorry..i was abt 2 post da part...bt...my bad luck...u can say...i had wrote the whole part....n it gt deleted....m sorry..bt now its v late...n i can't write again...so i will continue...tomorrow...hav 2 write...a long part...so...wait 4 some more time...
thanks..
guriya... 😊
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hey guriya !!!!!!!...........just caught up with the story 😊.......i can't beleive so much has happened 😲!!!!!.........mahad told ali n umair abt shayan n manial relationship 👏 😲 👏 !!!!!!! ..............they give him their advice n tell him 2 talk to aaima 😊 ........n tell her the truth 😊!!!!!!!!!................a shocking news 4 shayan that she already got to know it 😭 (i think mahad told her 😉......wht u think??????)....................i wanna know wht's her decision 😊 😭 ???..................manial n afshan living wt sadaf family 😭 😊 !...........i can't belive that sadaf bro wanna marry manial n sadaf against manial defending shayan 😭 😲 😭 .........i can't wait to know her decision 😉 😭 😒!!!!!!!!!!.....................shayan father come's n sclod shayan n ask him wht he did that manial left the house 😭 😭 😭 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....................he also said that he is taking manial n afshan back with him (if manial agree 😉 😭 )....................yaar awesome part'ssss!!!!!!!!!!...............can't wait to know what's going to happen next 😭 😭 😭 ...........hope everything goes f9!!!!!!.................what's aaima n shayan desicion ❓...will manial accept to marry sadaf brother ❓.......can't wait 😭!.................i can't believe that the story is going to finish 😭 😭 😭!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...............great story yaar !!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey guriya !!!!!!!...........just caught up with the story 😊.......i can't beleive so much has happened 😲!!!!!.........mahad told ali n umair abt shayan n manial relationship 👏 😲 👏 !!!!!!! ..............they give him their advice n tell him 2 talk to aaima 😊 ........n tell her the truth 😊!!!!!!!!!................a shocking news 4 shayan that she already got to know it 😭 (i think mahad told her 😉......wht u think??????)....................i wanna know wht's her decision 😊 😭 ???..........u will knw it soon..........manial n afshan living wt sadaf family 😭 😊 !...........i can't belive that sadaf bro wanna marry manial n sadaf against manial defending shayan 😭 😲 😭 .........i can't wait to know her decision 😉 😭 😒!!!!!!!!!!.....................shayan father come's n sclod shayan n ask him wht he did that manial left the house 😭 😭 😭 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....................he also said that he is taking manial n afshan back with him (if manial agree 😉 😭 )....................yaar awesome part'ssss!!!!!!!!!!......thnx dear.........can't wait to know what's going to happen next 😭 😭 😭 ...........hope everything goes f9!!!!!!.................what's aaima n shayan desicion ❓...will manial accept to marry sadaf brother ❓.......can't wait 😭!.................i can't believe that the story is going to finish 😭 😭 😭!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......it has to..n don worry..da lst part..will be i hope..worth ur all expectations...........great story yaar !!!!!!!

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