Hogaye Hai Mohabbat..RA Last Part (Pg:43) - Page 29

wow di awesome parts tooo tooo goood loved them yaaar i think whn shayan will tell aima the truth she won't agreee n maybe leave him.... heheheh i hope something like this happends continue soooon 👏 [/QUOTE

thnx a lt hana 4 likng...i hope 2 tht..ur hop comes true...😉

Originally posted by: aishwaria

hey great part 👏 👏 Mahad is so nice 😊 😊 wish Manial and Shayan come close 😳 and Aima gets out of the picture 😉 😉 continue soon pleeeeeeeeeeease 😊 😊

thnx...will cont soon...😊

Part 28

Shayan reaches home...n rest 4 some time...n then he calls aaima...2 talk 2 her..bt she was nt picking up da phone...n after tryng 4 many times...he gts frustated..as hez still confuse tht he shld do wht mahad said or...n he then leaves 2 pick manial frm mahad's place..as frm 2morrow she has 2 join college again..he reaches mahad's place...n when he enters da room...da scence is totaly different...mahad is talking wid manial and afshan both...n tryng 2 make them laugh on his silly jokes..while afshan as shez nt well is unable 2 thnk..whts happening arnd her..is jus quiet staring at mahad's stupid actions whch hez doing while talking...while on otehr side..manial is laughng lik anythng..on mahad's joke...when shayan saw tht...he was nt at all happy..he wanted 2 punch mahad on face at tht time..realizing in his mind wht he thought a min ago...he gt more confused..why he thought 2 punch mahad...why he felt bad..when manial was laughng on his joke..was he jealous...wht was da felling he had a min ago...he was jus abt 2 shrug off these questions frm his mind when...manial saw him standng on da door n she called him up...n he wid a fake smile enterd n soon they both left afshan...alone at mahad's place..as they had no choice...manial was hesitatng 2 leave her sis lik tht..bt mahad assured hez here n he would take care..she had no choice she had 2 go..as her exams were approachng...n she had 2 gt notes frm sadaf ..who only called n asked where she was.....why she was nt comng...as manial neva tld sadaf b4 leavng 4 her house..so sadaf was worried...there was silence all da way in da car...shayan's mind was again drifting 2 those question tht arose in his mind ..few mins back..n 2 avoid them...he pt on da radio...

Hey la la la la, la la la la, la la la la la la
La la la la, la la la la, la la la la la la
Dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya hua hai
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaaya kya nasha hai, haan

shayan was abt 2 pt of da radi ..when..manial stopped him..boths hand touched each other...there was silence 4 a while...lst in each others eyes..

M(spoke at last):laga rehney dein...its a nice song..

S:ok..

Hey la la la la, la la la la, la la la la la la
La la la la, la la la la, la la la la la la
Dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya hua hai
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaaya kya nasha hai, haan
(n manial gt lst in those words...n imagined..herslef..alone in a beautiful hill area..wid shayan in his arms...she moves away frm him...)

---Manial Sings----
Dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya hua hai
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaaya kya nasha hai, haan

--Shayan--
Mohabbat ho na jaaye, deewana kho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa, haan

--Manial--
Mohabbat ho na jaaye, deewana kho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa

--Shayan--
Dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya hua hai

--Manial--
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaaya kya nasha hai, haan

(wid a horn sound she omes back 2 reality..n looks at shayan..he smiles back..n then looks ahead....lst in song..as even he liked da song..he was neva a romantic song lover..bt he didn't knew himslef..why he was now at this moment likng this song...da car stopped at da signal...n he gt lst..in same area..whch manial was iimagining a min...b4..)

--Shayan--
Bheegi bheegi alkon se, chori chori palkon se(touchng her eyes n eye lids..wid his cold hand..cold coz they were arnd snow...)
Kyoon mera sapna churaaye(she blushes n lower down her gaze)
Jhunki jhunki ankhiyon se, dheere dheere batiyon se
Kyoon mujhe apna banaaye(taking her into his arms..)

--Manial--
Meri nazron pe chhaaye, khushboo ke jaise aaye(taking his colonge smell..in her..)
Mera tan mann mahekaaye
Saanson mein yeh pal pal jaane kaise halchal
Kuch bhi samajh mein na aaye
Sharaarat ho na jaaye(lookng up..kissing him on cheek..n running away), mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa

--Shayan--
Sharaarat ho na jaaye, mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa(frst shock at wht she did...then...running after her..n wid horn at back..he 2 comes back at reality...n then car moves ahead)
(manial..looks at him...n the looks out of da window..thnkng abt these lines...sung by da singer..whch were so true...jus same situation as was hers)

--Manial--
Meri hai yeh mushkil, ab to yeh mera dil
Bas mein huzoor nahin hai
Itna bataa de mujhe kaise samjhaaoon
Tujhe mera yeh kasoor nahin hai(looks wid hope in eyes 2ward him)

(shayan..looks at her...bt shez lookng at window at tht time...n then he 2 thnks abt da lyrics..same as wht he was gng through..now)

--Shayan--
Chaahe hum chaahe bhi to pehre lagaaye bhi to
Kaise din raat ko roke
Aag bina yeh jale, zor na koi chale
Kaise jazbaat ko roke
Yun chaahat ho na jaaye, mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa, haan(looks again..at her side..she at da same time..looks..n both eyes meet...both now lst...in each other)

--Manial--
Yun chaahat ho na jaaye, mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa
Dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya hua hai

--Shayan--
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaaya kya nasha hai, haan

--Manial--
Mohabbat ho na jaaye, deewana kho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa

--Shayan--
Mohabbat ho na jaaye, deewana kho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa

suddenly a voice comes frm back..n both come 2 reality..shayan..looks away immediately n then looks back...n saw tht..traffic was jammed coz of him...n then whole while till home..both were silent..

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ok guyz this was the next part...do tell me...h it was....will be wiatng 4 ur repsonse..till nxt time..tc..

njoy..

wid luv..

guriya...😊

No don't do it . . . just kidding. The beginning made it so much better than everything else I've read here.

Originally posted by: Dewayne2

No don't do it . . . just kidding. The beginning made it so much better than everything else I've read here.

thnx..😊

come on guyz...it wasn't tht bad..or was it..😭....comments....plz...😳

oops sorry for commenting late and Guriya the part was just awesome Manial and Shayan's imagination was just too gud loved it plz cont. soon 😊 waiting eagerly to knoe what hapens next 😃

Awesome!!!!!!! Loved both the parts,.......i just saw that u had updated twice while i was wondering y u werent updating 😆 ............enjoyed both the parts......i m liking the fact that finally shayan is feeling something for manial 😳 😳 😳

continue soon......love both of your other stories as well !!! 😳

Originally posted by: togepe30

Awesome!!!!!!! Loved both the parts,.......i just saw that u had updated twice while i was wondering y u werent updating 😆 ............enjoyed both the parts......i m liking the fact that finally shayan is feeling something for manial 😳 😳 😳

continue soon......love both of your other stories as well !!! 😳

thnx dear..will be updatng soon..😊

Originally posted by: aishwaria

oops sorry for commenting late and Guriya the part was just awesome Manial and Shayan's imagination was just too gud loved it plz cont. soon 😊 waiting eagerly to knoe what hapens next 😃

thnx dear..n no need of sorry...😊