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Posted: 17 years ago

Part - 32

After One Year:
We see a big hall where lot of people are sitting and its decorated very beautifully,there is a stage in between and chairs are placed on it.Taking one glance of the hall we can say its wedding of someone being celebrated here. We then see a perosn moving from here and there and giving orders to servants who are still fixing the flowers and other things in the hall. Then the perosn stops by the stage where a servant is arranging flower ,the perosn is none other tahn mahad,
Ma:yeh kya tum ney abhi tak kaam khatam nahee kiya..ik tu tum log..ik number ke sust..dekh raha hai na..sab mehman agaye hain...aur tum..
Servant:ji saab bas ho he gaya hai..app fikar maat karo
Ma:theek hai.magar jaldi karo..aur bhi kaam..para hai..yeh khatam kar k..back side..pe...khaney k arrangments dekho..samjhe..
Servant:ji acha..
and then mahad walks away.He enters a room which is the part of hall but its in actual used for keeping stuff and all or getting ready.He sits on the chair there as if relaxing after a tired day and is blabering to himself,
Ma:ik tu koi bhi yahan kaam ka nahee hai..aur mein tu mano..sab ko muft ka naukar mila hoon..subah se laga hoon...gosh these servants also..ik ko bhi smajho..phir akey poochte hain..aisa karein..waisa karein..aur yeh ali ka bacha..hota k meri help karta...nahee...janab pata nahee kahan chupe bethe..hain..ik baar mil janey do..aisa seedha karonga k...sab se bar kar tu is umair k khechai..lagani chahye...mausam dekho..sakht garmi hai.aur in janab ko shaadi k pari hai...teen din se mein bechara..laga hua hoon...shukar hai k ajj walima hai..shaadi kahatam hui...maar dala tha warna is garmi ney..aur kamoon ne...ab aram mile ga..
just then we see..ali enters the room...mahad's head is down..so he can't see him..n ali sees him talkng himslef...n laughs...mahad looks up n when see him laughng..says in anger..
Ma:kya prb hai..kaam ka kaho tu gayab ho jata hai...aur ab batesi kyun nikal rahe hai..
A:woh tujhe aisey dekh ke yaar...tu waisey baatein kis se kar raha hai...yahan tu tera ilawa koi nahee hai na..
Ma:apni atma se kar raha hoon..milega..
A:arey waah..tu apni atma se mil chuka hai..mujhe bhi milwa na yaar..dekha nahee kabhi atma kaise hoti hai..ajj dekh he longa..(n he strts laughng again..)
Ma(gts angry more..n abt 2 slap..when ali runs away..):buhat hui ok..band kar hasna..warna..
A:warna kya..kya karega...aur yaar..apna nahee tu kaam se kaam..meri image ka dehan kiya hota...yeh tu main agaya andar koi aur ata tu..janey kya..
Ma:janey kya..matlab kya hai tera..
A:saaf matlab hai..mere bholey badsha..k woh tujhe pagal samjhta...kyunke..apne app se..tu baat pagal he karte hai...ab yeh na bolien..k tu apney app se baat nahee kar raha tha..kyunki..ab mein andha tu hoon nahe..
Ma:hai nahee..par hota na..su sukh hotey mujhe...aur wiasey bhi log pagal mujhe bolein ge na..tujhe..kis baat ki khujli ho rahe hai..
A:yaar..tu mera dost..tu pagal howa..tu log mujhe bhi pagal samjhe..gein..
Ma:waah..k logics hain...aisa meiney pehli baar suna..k pagal ka dost pagal he hota hai...gr8.
A:oye nahee yaar...par..dekh..log sochenge na..k yeh tu pagal hai..tu yeh ali bhi pagal hai..jisey is pagal k ilawa dosti k liye koi aur nahee mila..aur logon k tu parwah humein nahee hai..par kuriyoon k hai..wiasey bhi koi ankh bhar kar nahee dekhti..yun tujhe dekh leti..tu mera chance bhi...
Ma:tera chance waisey bhi..yun he rahe ga...aur tujhe fikar hoge..kuriyon k..mujhe tu fikar karney k koi zarorat nahee hai..
A:hai Allah gi..kya sitam kiya app ne...woh kya gana tha..haan..dost dost na raha..pyaar..arey nahee yaar..abhi pyar aya nahee hai so...haan..zindagi humein tera atebar na raha...aetebar..(before he cld complete..mahad..kicked him hard on his foot..n he fell on da floor)
A:zalim insaan..yeh kya harkat thi..
Ma:yeh harkat tum jaison k liye he hoti hai..acting band kar...bara aya..senti bana phir ta hai...
A:senti na bano tu aur kya..woh ik umair...use tu mil gaye sadaf...us ke tu lotery hoagaye..chalo..larkyion k agey peche..khat le k ghomney k bhi zaroorat na pare..par tu..aey dost..(actng..lik majno...one hand on head)tujh se mujeh yeh kataye umeed na the..mujhe tu laga..k tu..merey saath hai..umair gaya tu kya huwa..hum dono..mil kar larkiyan patayen ge..par tu...aur sitam yeh k mujhe..apne jigre dost se..bhi chupaya tuney...ja ajj se teri meri dosti khatam(abt 2 walk away..in actng..)
Ma(hold his hand..n force him 2 sit again):bas kar bara aya..number 1 dramay baaz...aur mein ney koi ajj larki pasand nahee ki..aur tujhe pata hai..k kon hai woh...kyun bhol gaya...
A:oh tera matlab afshan se tha...
Ma:shukar hai...akal abhi bhi..kisi kul purze mein bachi hai terey..haan afhsan ka he keh raha hoon..
A:magar us ne tu..
Ma:haan inkar kardiya..par asif uncle aur manial...n haan karwa he di...so..now...paro..un logo k jnaye se phele..engagement hai..
A:baley bhaye..bale...congrats yaar..yeh sab se acha kaam hua..
Ma:haan yaar..m so realx now..itni tension k baad..ajj ik saal baad..jake..khushiyon ne humara dman thama..hai..
A:sahe kehta hai yaar..
Ma:aur kya..dad tu jaisey taisey maan gaye the..is rishtey k liye..par mama..tu janta hai na..kitna issue banaya tha unhoon ne...aur jab woh jake maan gaye tu...afshan...us ney he inkar kar diya..kitna tut gaya tha mein..agar asif uncle aur manial hosla na detey..tu shayd...ajj yeh khushi bhi na milti..ik umeed thi..
A:chor in sab ko..woh kethe hai na..jo hota hai..
Ma:ache k liye he hota hai..
A:right dude...
Ma:hmmm...bas ab tu bacha hai..sirf..chal hum sab mil ke tere liye..khojein ge..ik soni..kuri..
A:wiasey dhondne k zaroorat nahee hai..
Ma:matlab...ab bol..gon gadha..kon dosti k naam pe dhaba..mera tu fir tujh..maloom tha..apna..chupa gaya..salee...kon hai..woh larki..kahan mila..kahan tak baat bhari...bol tu aunti ko bolein..k rishta leke jayein..
A:aisa kuch nahee yaar..abhi tu..meri taraf se..haan hai..uske taraf ka tu..pata bhi nahee hai..
Ma:ahan..par mili kahan..office k koi hai..
A:nahee yaar..hoti tu bata diya hota tum sab ko...abhi kuch dino pehle he..mile hai..is shaadi mein..
Ma:oho..shaadi..mein ankh lari..kool..sadaf.k frnds mein se hai..bol tu..sadaf..k help le lenge..
A:nahee yaar..uski frnds mein se nahe hai..woh actually..umair k relatives mein se hai..
Ma:relatives mein se...naam tu pata hoga...na..
A:hmm..woh umair k couzin hai..yaar..naaz..tuney dekha tu hai..shaadi mein...(naaz is umair's kahala's daughter n v bubly fun loving grl a bit sharati by nature,n during whole marriage she had played lt of pranks on poor ali...mahad didn't lik her coz..she was after them only 4 no reason...played by charu of kth(surveen chawala))
Ma:naaz....tu..mazak kar raha hai..na...aur agar yeh mazak hai tu baar ghatiya hai...
A:no yaar m v serious abt her..phele he nazar mein fida hogaya..usey dekh kar...ghayal kar dala..uski adoon ne..uske..
Ma:naaz..woh tekhi mirchi...janta bhi hai...kisey chuna..hai..umair k sab couzins mein sab se zyada..tez tarar hai..balke..larka bolo...
A:jo bhi hai..jaise bhi hai...ab tu..bas..meri hai..
Ma:ur sure na...wohi naaz..jis ne..mehndi walee din...terey chere pe janey kon se desh ka naksha khencha tha..
A:haan..wohi..(dreamingly)
Ma:wohi..jis ne kal...baraat pe...teri sherwani...jala dali..thi..kyunki..tuney uska..duppata..nahee chunwaya tha...
A:hmm..bas wohi...(still dreaming..)
Ma:seriously wahee..na jis ne kaal raat...umair k saath saath..teri bhi jaib khali karwayi thi..
A:hmm...us k liye..tu mein...apna sara bank balance..lutwa doon...
Ma:yaar..nahee woh nahee ho sakti..wohi na...make its ure again.jis ne..ajj subah..nashte k table pe..tujhe...kachey unday..khilaye...
A(came out of trance):arey wahi na..samjh nahee araha bola tu..naaz...kitni baar bolon..aur yeh kya tu..uski...shararatein bata raha hai...
Ma:sharartein nahee mr...chalakiyain hain us k..ik no k chalo..hai...tu janta nahe...kaisey us ne..raj k tujh se he pange liye hain...aur tu..bhola bana..isey us k adain smjh k us pe fida ho raga hai...aur woh..tujh phele se bewakoof ko aur bewakoof bana rahee hai..
A:aisa kuch nahee woh tu bas aisey he..aur..yaar plz...m serious abt her..
Ma:chal tu kehta hai tu..will see through this...bas app tu duwa he kar sakte hain...k Allah tuje us naaz se bachaye...
a voice is heard..
Voice:kisko..kon..kis se bachai...??
Ma(looks up..):shayan tu...(yah guyz its none other than shayan...shayan was out of town...so he has not attented rest of umiar's marriage functions...just came now back...n straight headed 2ward this place...during the whole year..umair neva visited his family...n kept his promise...whch he took when manial left...as she said b4 leaving she neva wana see him again..n umair's dad took after lt of pleading manial n afshan 2 there house..so shayan neva went 2 visit his family...after completing his education here...he gt a gud job in multi national company...he still had contact wid his family n especially his dad...y..tht will be revealed soon...even he had contact wid his frnds..all of them supported him v well in evry way during da whole year..n even 4gaved him...4 wht they were angry on him 4...)
S:hey buddies..whts up..??aur yeh kis ka zikar chal raha tha..(enter our hero...lookng dashing as always...wearng a shalwar kurta wid embroidery work on it..n was lookng 2 hot 2 resist..)
A:nothng much yaar..humari chor..tu suna...h was ur trip..
S:gud..jaisa humesha hota hai..
Ma:tht means...really boring...
S:true...(n three of them laughed hard on it...shayan..always hated his trips..coz tehy were really business type of meetings..n work n only work..was discussed there..so it always..bored him)
Ma:gud 2 see u back...umair se mila...
S:haan..abhi bhair se he aya..usi ne bola..tum log..andar he hogey..
Ma:ok..gud..they came on stage..
S:yah...
A:abey late hogaye..sab teri wajah se mahad....tu aur beth k batein bhagar..mujhe bhi dnat parwayega ab..
Ma:kuch nahee hoga..dant k tu dekha..aur waisey bhi..woh janab..apni newly mrs mein itney masroof honge..k...
S:sahee keh raha hai...meiney bhi bola..beta idhar udhar bhi dekh le..guest tere liye aye hain..biwi ko raat bhar..dekhta rahiyo..par woh dhet majal hai jo..
Ma:kisi k suney..aisa he hai woh..yeh sab chor..tu apni family se mila..sab aye huey hain..
S:i knw..baba ka call aya tha..aur sach pocha tu..aya bhi yahan bas mein us ik he kaam k liye hoon..par yaar mahad m scared..kahin..
A:relax buddy...hum sab teere saath hain...tu bas..jo socha hai..us pe..amal kar..now is da time..n u can't back out now..
Ma:kahin tuney mind change tu nahee kar liya..haan..
S:nahee yaar..aisa kuch nahee..chal mein jake..phele baba se mil loon..woh wait kar rahe honge..aur phir..
a voice is heard again...
A:app baba se nahee mil sakte..hum appki us s kataye..milney nahe denge..
shayan turns around n smiles comes on his face..as he saw..his lil sis alia..standng infront of him...she looked so big 2 him...he saw her like after ages though in real it was only after a yr...jus as he was viewing aliha..another voice is heard..
V:hum bhi yahein khare hai...humein bhi dekh lijye..tax nahe lete hum..apne dedar ka..
Shayan laughed on tht comment..n went foward n hugged da person..his cute bro...armghan...n ters came in both da brothers eyes...
Ar:arey yeh kya bhai...mujhe bhi rola diya..mein tu..is aliha ko bol raha tha..rona dhona na matcha dena..aur yahan app..no way..ajj tu khushi ka din hai..is cheez ka nahee..m i right...
S:true..yeh tu bas..khushi se he chalak parey...n howz my darling sis..(hugging her tightly..n she strted cryng..)shh...aliha..come on yaar..don cry..dekh main theek hoon..n tere samney hoon...chup ab..no rona dhona..
Al:sorry bahi woh bas..apko..anyway..i must say..my bro has became more smart..in past yr..
S:thanx 4 da compliment little lady...acha yeh sab chor mama..aur baba kahan hai..
Al:they r out..n waitng 4 u impatiently..
S:even m eager 2meet them..par..woh..akele hai na..u knw i mean.kahin..
Ar:don worry bhai..manial bhabhi..aur afshan baji..sadaf baji k saath hai..stage sid epe..so no khatra..
S(turning 2..mahad n..ali..):ok guyz..mein..mom dad se mil ke..ata hoon..tab tak...u guyz go ahead wid..plan no 1..of da plan...ok..
Ma:don worry..we will see..evrythng here..u come fast ..ok..
S:ok..bst of luck..
Ma & A:to u 2...
shayan then meets his parents...his mom gets emotional seeing him after so long,then he and his dad have a little conversation and he heads somewhere..even i dono...lets see where he is going...we see him coming into the car park and he sits in the cark n drives to....a farm house in between beautiful surroundings greenry all around...comes out of his car...moves toward the house...opens the main door and heads in...door is closed...no view guys..sorry can't tel u more...
ok lets see meanwhile what is plan no 1...n what are mahad n ali doing...after shayan left the room...mahad n ali came out 2...n went 2ward the satge..where...umair n sadaf were seated n beside sadaf was manial...looking as pretty as always..n shez wearng a white churidar with combination color embroidery work on it and is looking simple yet gorgeous...at hers ide..afshan is seated...n shez wearng a simple blue color shalwar suit with tilla work on it..n looking pretty indeed..she looks up...n see mahad..pointing 2ward her 2 come...shez confused..bt when seeinghim pleading..she excuse telling manial n sadaf she will be back in a min..she comes 2ward ali n mahad..
Af:tum logon ne bulaya..kya baat hai..(avoidig mahad gaze..n he was..lookng keenly 2ward her...ali saw tht..n hits on mahad arm 2 let him coem back 2 this world..n hez sucessful)
Ma:woh..tum se ik kaam tha..will u help us??
Af:kya kaam hai..?
n then they tell her something..which we can't hear...n she doest nt agree at first but later she gives in..
Af:ok..mein jake apna kaam karte hoon..tab tak..tum log merey call ka wiat karo..theek hai..
Ma & A:thnx..
Af:iski zaroorat nahee..kyunki..mujhe bhi lagta hai..k yahe sahe hai..so..bye..
n she left...mahad n ali also left da place..n i dono..where they went..
ok now before going 2 see wht shayan is doing we will jus peek into..what manial did in da last whole yr..as u all knw..she was living wid sadaf..n sadaf asked her abt marriage 2 his brother..which all thought was a gud idea..bt manial was nt agreeing..so when shayan's dad came da next day..she agreed 2 gow id him..as in she can avoid da marriage topic in tht way..n manial n afshan lived wid shayan's family till now..they gt so much love 4rm them tht..both sis thnk they could hav neva gt such luv even frm there real parents...during thsi whole a news came tht manial mom was no more...was abig shock 4 her..her sis was nt well 2..whom she would share da loss wid..bt shayan's mom..huma..treated her lik a daughter..n it was coz of her love..tht da pain of loosing her mom..has been faded..after tht..she totaly cut off frm her family back home..as no one ever did good wid them..so why they bother them..it was heard tht...his big bro's salim's wife shazia was now ruling over da house..letting her beamma..suffer evryday...n raheela wife of rahim was nt in gud state to...gt really ill frm bad treatment by her husband..n her mom took her away..n now was charging 4 divorce as well as money...so rahim was in big trouble n pleading his mother in law..n all..mean while manial's dad gt what he deserved 4 ill treatng wid his daughters...he after his wife's dad n problems cause of his son gt a stroke..n is been paralyzed..they say..when u do bad wid others in this world..u gt da rewrad 2..here only...n so they all gt...
manial gt admission in college near by only...n now was completng her education...n she jus gave her final exams...n now was wiatng 4 result 2 come out...when sadaf called her up..4 her marriage..she neva wanted 2 come 2 this city again..whch will evoke her pain..bt..she came 4 all gud ppl..who helped her till day...afshan was admitted in a hospital n then with help of mahad n his dad..one of da best doctor was called..n she gt well in 5 months...n later when she was fine..da two sister shared a gr8 bond..she was thankful 2 manial 4 doing so much 4 her..n even sad tht..she was nt ahppy...bt she wanted her 2 be..n manial when gt 2 knw abt mahad..n afshan had refused..she still wanted her sis 2 strt a new life..so this time..she forced her 2 say yes 4 her sake..n she gave in...so all were here now...this was jus what happen wid them..in past yr..n how tehyfaced..da world..
Now lets see..where shayan is..bt whats this..near d afarm house...we see a car approachng..n it stops near shayan's car...we see a grl coming out of da car...n we can't see her face...she comes near the door..n abt da ring da bell..when door opens itself...she comes in..all is dark...only candles r let...
Grl:koi hai..
no response..so she moves ahead...n see a table in between da room..comes near it..still no one there in da room..
Grl:yeh sab kia hai..mein pochti hoon koi hai yahan...
no response...she saw a candle on da table..n lits da candle...n now..infront of her is a beautiful boquet...of red roses..wid a card on it...she picks it up..n then opens da card..there is a poem on it..she reads it out loud..
Grl:jab tum mile...
tu yun na the dil khile
na he the..gul khile
hum mile...tu bhi ajnabi se..
ghule tu bhi...sang na the
kahin pyaar tha..kahin inkar tha
kahin ikraar tha...kahin ehankar tha
khain darr tha...khain dukh bhi
lagta tha...hum ik hain..
phir bhi hum..kyun tab mile nahe
socha buhat..smjhaya buhat..
is dil ko behlaya buhat..
ik dil kehta tha..haan kehde..
ik dil ne kaha...durr reh
saal beta..par yaad na gaye..
na chora daman humara tumey
har pal socha tujhe...chaha tujhe
sapney bhi dekhe tu bas terey he
sab ne smajhaya buhat..
dil ko mein ne behlaya buhat
uljha huwa rehta tha..
phir teri masoom muskaan ney warghalaya buhat
ajj yeh faisla bare muskiloon se karke aein hain..
darr hai terey inakr ka phir bhi..
hosla rakh k aein hain
chahe tu haan karey k naa karey..
chahey tu thukraya
bas ajj itan kehna hai..
k is porre ik saal mein hum sadayan ji aye..
muhabbat ko humesha mana tha..
par pooja kabhi na k thi is k..
ajj jake yeh maloom hona..
k muhabbat pa lena koi baat nahe..
asal baat tu bas is ik lutf mein hai...
ik ehsas mein hai..k jab mein
yeh kehta hoon tujh se..k haan..
hoagye hai...mujhe hogaye..hai..
is judai k darr se...is tanhai k darr se...
aur tere na aney k darr se.
mujhe tujh se muhabbat hogaye hai...
Hogaye hai muhabbat..bas ik tujh se hoagye hai..
she was stunned after reading da whole poem..she neva expected someone 2 write something lik this 4 her...n suddenlys he felt..some one..kept hand on her eyes..
Grl(lil bit fear..her heart racing...):kon hai...
no response..
Grl:plz bolo..kon ho tum..aise chup nahee raho..n why u called me here..(in her heart..wid fera..)pata nahee kon hai..afshan ne tu bola tha..mahad..ka phone tha..usney yahan bulaya hai..engagement se phele uski mom n kuch imp baat karni hai..par yeh..Allah ji...khair rakhein..)
Person comes v close 2 her...held her waist from back...she wa abt 2 shout when...
P(comes v close near her ear):shh...don shout..pehchana nahe mujhe abhi tak...
n was stunned 2 hear tht voice..she could recognize tht voice in thousands...n warmth of his bretah..she knew..she had felt it before...da touch...she had felt before..n all were telling her about one person..naming one...n she spoke ..this time..wid fear in her voice...
Grl:shayan...(yup its our shayan...lets see who da grl is..)
S:kia baat hai..good u still recognize me...mujhe laga k...so kaisa laga mera surprize...
grl...removed his hands frm her eyes n frm her waist...n now was face 2 face wid him..
Grl:surprise kaisa surprise..aur app ne mujhe yahan kyun bulaya hai...mujhe tu..
S:relax manial..don be hyper..(yah its manial only..u all guessed it rite)mainey he mahad aur afshan ko aisa karney ko kaha tha..beacuse i wont 2 meet u..baat karni the tum se kuch..
M:baat kya baat..aur woh dono..merey saath unho ne..unhe tu...app ko ab kya baat karni hai..shayan..all is ova b/w us..
S:ahan..ur wrong...my till date lovely wife...yes...hum alag kab howey..tumhe ney tu request k thi..k don leave me...so..nothng is ova b/w us..i can still meet u..anytime i want 2..
M:par app kyun milna chahte..hai..aur haan mainey aisa kaha tha..par app..aaima..ji k saath khush hain..app ko mainey woh sab de diya jo chena tha..ab merey pass aur kuch nahee hai deney ko..
S:ghalat manial abhi bhi tum mujhe..buhat kuch de sakti ho...
M:kya dongi mein app ko..emin khud khali haath hoon..
S(comes close 2 her...v close..):apna app..apna saath..humesha k liye...wohi jo mainey tumseis nazm k zarya kaha..wohi mangta..hoon..tumhara jawab..kya tumhein bhi hoagye hai...mujh se muhabbat..
M(free herself frm his grip):plz shayan..mainey buhat mushkil se apney app ko sambhala.hai..app k liye sab asan hoga..merey liye nahee hai..plz..agar yeh mazak hai tu...maat karein aisa mazak jo meri jaan he le ley..
S(comng 2ward her...keeping hand on her lips):shh..aisa nahee kehte..tum agar margaye..tu main bhi kaha je paonga..
M:app yah sab..shayan .yeh ghalat hai...app ab aaima..k hain..aur..
S(gt lil irritated by her..aaima.raag):ik tu tum na..har baat..adhi sunti ho...aur bas..na..agay k bhi sua..kao..now..keep quite..listen 2 me..n then speak..samjhi..
M noded..
S:us din..jab tum aye..aaima...ko sab kuch pata lag gaya tha...
M(interrupts):mujhe pata hai..tabhi tu..main..us din..chale gaye..take app dono k beech an aoon..
S:chup...ik dum chup..ab is k baat ik baat bhi boli na tu...kaha na chup chap suno..par nahee..
M:sorry...app bolye..
S:haan..tu..us ne..inkaar kar diya tha..coz she can enva thnk i did had a realtion with anyone..fact was tehre was a realtion of only name..bt she neva wanted tht 2..usye laga..woh seond hand..piece hogi..whcih 4 fact..i thought was her stupidty..anyways..i was genuine wid her..bt she left..so..yah i was indeed heart broken..bt somewhere i was glad n realieved 2..so 2 sort out my feelings..i went away..n when i gathered courage..n decided..upon a thing...i came home 2 hav a talk wid u...bt u were no where..even baba..ko pata tha..k main kya karney ja raha hoon..meiney bola tha unhe..khair..i was worried..n thnks 2 ur akal..mujhe laga..pata nahee kahan gaye hogi..par thank god mahad ne bataya k tum sadaf k ghar ho..i was tension free atleast u were safe n sound..wanted 2 talk 2 u abt wht i decided..par tum ne milney ko mana kiya tha..is liye...baba ney agle din khob khenchai k...bt..bachat ho he gaye..n i was glad when he called n said..u agreed 2 go wid her..
M:hmm..jana he tha..woh sadaf...aur sab mil k us k bhai se shaadi karwana chahte the..par..
S:par kya(With naughty smile on her face..)
M:kuch nahee...so app ne kya decide kiya tha..us din..aur ajj aisa.ik saal baad..app kyun milna chahate the..
S:decide ye kiya tha..k mujhe lagta tha..k shayad..i m jus attracted 2ward u..aur shayad..tum dur jao ge..tu...sab theek ho jayega..baba ne yehi kaha tha..he will take..u par..woh tum ne..ulta kar diya..khair..when he took u wid him..still he siad 2 me to thnk..abt same thng...aur ik mahiney he mein mujhe pata kag gaya tha..k..its nt attraction..yaar..seriously..i missed u like hell...ghar ka haar kona katta tha...esp..i missed..ur cookng..aur kay kya bolon..
M:jab app ko realize ho he gaya tha tu..app aye kyun nahe ajj...itne arse baad...kyun?
S:aney tu kabse chahta tha..par halat...jab realize kiya tabhi akey le jana chahta tha..par mom ne bataya ur nt well..tumhari mom k bataya..so mujhe laga..its gud k tum..mama..k pass raho..kuch din..is liye..phir jab i thought k sab theek hoga..tu afshan baji..ka matter nikal aya..n phir ik k baad ik oi kabhi meri side pe..prb..some at ur side..par..ajj i decided..k bas..aj tu kuch bhi hoajye..i hav 2 tell u...k..
M(shy smile...tryng 2 look away..):k..
S:k..ab aur mujhe se subah subah uth k nashta nahee banaya jata..aur na woh sara howa bhair ka kahana khaya jata hai..so plz coem back..
M(bit sad..she expected somethng else na):acha..tu u just wanted 2 call me..2 cook 4 u..
S(now comng close 2 her...hugged frm backside...):humari aise majal kahan...madam..apse khana banwaye...hum tu...bas appka saath chate..hai..denge..app...
M not sayng anythng...shayan moved her n let her face him..
S:come on..yeh sharmana warmana nahee chale ga...n we r no strangers..m ur husband..so bolo..doge saath k..
M:humesha donge...mein tu..ik pal k liye bhi na..bholi thi..app ko he..zindagi mana tha..apney he jena sikhaya tha...sab kuch tu app he ne diya..tha..kis aur k saath ka tu soch bhi nahee sakti...umeed tu na thi..k app ko phir pa sakoongi..par..merey Allah ne meri duwa dun li..
S:hmm..chalo..saath..dena ka tu decide hogaya..par there is somethng more..wait here..mein abhi aya..
M:par kahan..
bt he was gone..n she was waitng ..after some time..he came wid a cake in his hand ..n palced on tabel..n held herhand..n both facing da table..
M(shocked):shayan yeh..
S(hugging her frm back..kissed on her ear..whch made her blush):Happy Anniversary My Dear Wife..
manial had tears in her syes.whch shayan wiped..
S:app koi anso nahe..ab se bas sirf pyar..ok..mujhe laga ajj se zyada best day kya hoga..to revive our relation..ajj se ik saal pehle ajj he k din hum ik huey the..par..naam k..ajj hum waada kareinge..k hum..ik honge..aur rahenge..dil se...ikd osrey k banege..
she noded in yes..n kissed him on cheeks...he was shocked..n looked at her..n she blushed..n looked down..
S:chalo..cake kato..jo beta woh kal tha..asal shadi tu humari ajj se huwi hai..dil se dil...k..i love you...manial...
n she was now unable 2 control her emotions..da words..she thought..she could neva hear frm his mouth..came atlast...n she hugged him tightly..n cried her heart out...he let her cry..n after sometime..he took her in his arms..n proceeded toward a room...room was decorate wid flowers ...move toward d abed..placed her on da bed...sat beside her..lookng at ehr wid love in eyes..evident...she looked at da other side..blushng really hard...he came closer...removed her hair at side..kissed on her neck...she moaned in pleasure...he came close 2 his ear..spoke..."mainey tu bol diya..par..i m still waitng manial"...she knew wht he meant bt she was unable 2 say tht..n he bite her ear..n came 2ward his face..kissed her...forehead...eyes...nose...cheeks...n finally her lips..n they sealed each others lip..wid a passionate kiss...n then...he took da blanket...n screen was blurred...
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After Two Years:
We see shayan...pacing around the hospital corridor...mahad n afshan who r sitting on da bench...laughng at his condition...
Ma:beth ja shayan...aise chakar katne se kya hoga..tu awain..pareshaan ho raha hai..doctor ne kaha na sab normal hai..nothng 2 worry..
S:worry kaise na worry karoon yaar..meri wife andar hai...mera bacha honey wala hai..tujhe kya probelm hai...tu mazay se beth aur hans mujh pe..
Af:shayan..relax..woh meri bhi behan hai...aur sab theek he hoga..so..plz..tum aise phir k humein bhi tension de rahe ho..
S:ok afshan..tum keh rahe ho tu..warna..is mahad k i neva listen..
Ma:haan haan..beth ja..bara aya..sali k maney wala..manial ko hosh aney de..tere watt lagwaoon ga..
S:tu chup karega.plz..afshan.kya tum..apne..husband se bolo..gi..k do minute chup rahe...mujhe aur tension hoti hai..mu fate..mainey bhi..call k tu kise..umair hota na..tu..tujhe tu kabhi call na karta mein..usey bhi abhi vacations mein jana tha....
Af:shayan..koi baat nahe..i promise..ab mahad..nahee bolega..mahad..plz..aur hum hain na..umair nahee tu kya howa..woh bechara bhi tu..abhi holiday mili..even he deserved 2 be with his daughter n wife 4 some time..
S:i knw..woh mein bus aisey he..
just then..we hear..some one..shoutng n comng..its none other than ali..
A:oye balle bhaye..balle..mubarkaan yaar...tu papa ban gaya..
S:ali..abhi doctors ne kuch nahee kaha...they still hav 2 tell us..tu..yeh mubarak tu baad k liye rakhega can't u see...m..
Ma:hez tense..phechle adhe gahnte se..yahe..word..sun sun..k pak gaya ..acha kiya tu agahya yaar..ali..a beth..
S:ik kaam tha...is dosre k kami thi..Allah..meiney kaisey inhe..dost banaya..
A:simple...jaise hum ne tujhe banaya..bina apna..bheja use kiya..kash kiya hota..
Ma:true yaar...tu ajj..kisi ache logon k suhbat mein hote..jo humari tarif kartey...yun baat baat pe galiyan nahee dete..
shayan was abt 2 respond..n afshan was abt 2 hit mahad..coz of his non sense talk...when doc came out..shayan ran 2 him..all at hsi back..
D:congrats..Mr.Shayan Khan..you have became father of a Handsome little Son...
S:son...omg...thank u..so much dotor...hz my wife..
D:shez fine..u can go meet her..nurse..will bring da child soon..
S:thanks again..
n all hugged in joy...n shayan..fell on da floor...n went down in sajda..n when he stood up...tears of joy were in his eyes...n he headed inside..ali n mahad were abt 2 go in ..when afshan stop them..n said tht..let them be alone..4 some time..
shayan came in..n saw...a pale..manial..on da hospital bed...he came close...n saw..wid da pale look..she had a smile on her face..n joy of being a mother.....he sat near her..n kissed her fore head..she opened her eyes...n tears..came out..of both eyes...n they hugged each other..4 some time..both were quiet..still there hearts were speaking..da nurse came in n they separated...she handed da boy 2 shayan..n touchng 4 da frst time..his own son..made him so proud...he was a father..frm now..feeling was so eap...he kissed him on cheeks..n forehead...n then...saw manial..who was askng..4 him 2 gave baby 2..her...
she held da baby...close 2 her heart...n felt so gud..toaday she felt she gt evrythng...evrythng she wanted..two yrs back she gt..her love..n it felt today..she was completed her love was complete..there was some emptines..n tht was filled today..she had fear of loosing him...evry min...2day..it vanished...
shayan came n both held da baby..
S:tu...madam..app shart jeet he gayein..
M:dekha na..i tld u..merey se shart nahe lagoo...mujhe pata tha...beta he hoga..
S:m happy ur happy..aur beta ho k beti..dono hotey tu hamarey he na..so..
M:true..m so ahppy 2day shayan..ajj sahe mano..mein...i feel..m complete..my love 4 u is complete...we r one..really one..soul..now..
S(kissed on her forehead):we indeed r..n thnx 2 this lil boy..arey naam kya soch hai tum ne..i knw..tum ne soch he hoga..
M:haan na..socha hai na..
S:kya..
M:shumail..
S:ahan..acha hai..waisey..yehi kyun..ki khas wajah..
M:hai na..kyunki..is mein..shayan ka sh bhi hai..aur manial ka ma bhi..makes him shumail..shayan aur manial k pyar ka aks...
S:i love u..u know 4 this only...tum nahee hoti tu pata nahee mera kya hota..thnx 4 comng into my life..n thanx 4 making my life..so good..
M:ji nahee no need 2 thank me...ok..wiasey look..even my son is sayng...don say thnx 2 mama...ok...
S:ok ji..jaisa app ma beta bolo..mein app dono ka ghulam..waisey..shumail...app k mama hai na.achi tu hain..par u..knw..yeh kehte hai..ajj humara pyar complete hua hai n..all..bt..nahe hua.u knw..liar hai..yeh buhat bari..m tellng u..
M:matlab..shayan..h can u say..m liar..meiney kya jhoot bola..sab sach tu kaha..
S:ik tu na..roney lag partein hai har baat..mein ik tip hai..my lil master..in ladies se panga kabhi maat lena..ok..anyway..ab apki mom k sawal ka jawab..tu bato bhala..pyaar kabhi..sirf ik bande k i love u..kehne se..complete hota hai..nahee na..look even my son knows that..bt nt ur mom..phece do saal se..umeed lagaye betha hoon..kabhi tu bolnge..par..kahir..shayad..marney k baad he..
n manial kept her hand on hsi mouth..n hit him..hard on his arms..
M:bakwas band karo..ainda aise bakwas k na tu...aur waisey ajj mein bolney walee the..par ab nahee bolonge jao..
S:oh no...plz manial yaar aisa na karo...plz..(he let da baby in cot..n sat near him..)come on yaar..yeh kaan kabse taras rahe hai..yeh suney ko..plz...boldo na..
M:ok par phele..tum apni eyes..close karo..
S:yeh kya bacpana hai..m ur hubby yaar..merey se kya saharam...
M:ahan..phele eyes..
S:ok karle..ab tu..
M(comes close 2 him...kiss him on lips..n says hurriedly):iloveyou..
S(with naughty tone):kya kaha..mainey clearly suna nahe...phir se bolo..
M:ji nahe...hum i he baar bolte hain..so bol diya..
S:acha aisa hai...nahee bologe..haan..
n he comes close n close 2ward her..n abt 2 kiss her on lip..when..
M:acha ok..i..
S:u...
M:love..
S:love..
M:u...
S:yahooo....n kiss her on cheeks..n manial blush ...n hugs him tightly..while huggng..
M:shayan...shumail dekh raha hai..wht will he learn..ab choro mujhe..
S:no way..dekhne do..he will learn k husband ko apni wife se aise he pyar karte rehna chahye..smajhe..
M:ji...
and then they lived a happy life till the time they were alive....there came sad moments...hard moments...painful experiences..but both went through them..with there power and strength of love...
Yeh thi kahani..us muhabbat ki...jo har do dilon mein basti hai...bas dair hoti hai tu is baat k hojaye...do dil mil jaye...aur phir jab ho jate hai..tu yeh keh uthey hain..hum..
hoagye hai muhabbat...
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ok guyz...this was the last part..hope u all have liked it..comments n tell me h it was...i will be waitng 4 them...Thanx 4 all being v good readers...n i loved writting this whole fic...n enjoyed reading the comments..u all gave me..during my writing...thanks 4 ur support...n wishes...n hope u will continue 2 give that..2 me..in future 2...
wishing u all...happy life...njoy it 2 fullest...tc
wid luv...
guriya...😊
Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome ending 👏 👏 👏 finally Shayan Manial together 😊 😊 sad it ended 😭 😭 but I really loved your FF it was really nice 😊 😊 there son was cute 😊 😊 your FF was really very fantastic and mind bowing, waiting for u to start your other FF 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi.
First of all, 👏
i was a silent reader of your fic and i just loved it.it was fantastic.
i am very happy that finally shayan manial are together and are very happy.keep writing such fantastic fics
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part yaar!!!! 👏 Gr8 ending!!!! But im sad that it ended.....Hope u will start a new story soon!!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwaria

awesome ending 👏 👏 👏 finally Shayan Manial together 😊 😊 sad it ended 😭 😭 but I really loved your FF it was really nice 😊 😊 there son was cute 😊 😊 your FF was really very fantastic and mind bowing, waiting for u to start your other FF 😊

thanks a lot dear for liking the ending as well as the whole ff..n thnx 4 da support given by u n my all readers through out my writing...😳

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: arunasri.m

Hi.
First of all, 👏
i was a silent reader of your fic and i just loved it.it was fantastic.
i am very happy that finally shayan manial are together and are very happy.keep writing such fantastic fics

thanks a lot dear for liking my fic and am glad to see your comment at the end and i hop you will like my future work too...😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Awesome part yaar!!!! 👏 Gr8 ending!!!! But im sad that it ended.....Hope u will start a new story soon!!!! 😳

thnx a lt dear...n thnx 2 u 2 for ur support...n i hav already strted new one...hop u will like tht 2...thnx again...😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

don't have words too decribe it yaar..........it's awesome, wonderful........finally shayan and manial came toghter 👏 😊 👏 😉 👏 ❤️ 👏 😉 👏 😊 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........so umair n sadaf got married n have a daughter 😊, mahad n afshan also married!!!.............love the surpise that shayan gave manial........although he scared her a bit 😭 😆 !!! .....shayan was in a really romantic mood 😳 😉 😳 ..........after two years they become parents of handsome boy 😊 👏 ...........yaar manial ne do saal tak shayan ko "i love you" nahi kaha tha 😆 😉 😆 ...........i going to miss this story alot 😭 😭 😭............awesome story guriya..........i just love the way you write 👏 😊 👏.............Congragulations for your story yaar !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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wow di omg ballle balllle m so happpy shayan n manial ek hogae....aur aiima lost..i hate her.... 😡 😆 tooo gooood awesoem romantic part just loved it.....hope i could say continue sooon.... 😭 😭 😭 but will in your other ff's... 😊
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Originally posted by: le_me_star

don't have words too decribe it yaar..........it's awesome, wonderful....thnx....finally shayan and manial came toghter 👏 😊 👏 😉 👏 ❤️ 👏 😉 👏 😊 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........so umair n sadaf got married n have a daughter 😊, mahad n afshan also married!!!.............love the surpise that shayan gave manial........although he scared her a bit 😭 😆 !!! .....shayan was in a really romantic mood 😳 😉 😳 ...yah i knw.......after two years they become parents of handsome boy 😊 👏 ...........yaar manial ne do saal tak shayan ko "i love you" nahi kaha tha 😆 😉 😆 .....hmm true..buhat trapayaya becharey shayan ko..lekin ant bhala tu sab bhala..atlast bol he diya......i going to miss this story alot 😭 😭 😭......n me gona miss it writing dear..bt gud thngs hav 2 finish at one point or da other......awesome story guriya....thnx again dear......i just love the way you write 👏 😊 👏.............Congragulations for your story yaar !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thnx 2 u dear 2...4 giving so much support through ur comments n i was able 2 complete my fic

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago

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