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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey guriya! awsome part!!!! 👏 😊 😉 😛 😉 😊 👏 .....small but awesome,........coz shayan is confused as he can't understand wht he feel's for manial?😉 .......love the part when he's jelous seeing manial laughing at mahad jokes 😆 .......he was jelouse seeing that !!!!!!!! 😉 😆 😉......the car part was cute 😛 😊 .....both thinking abt what's going on their life 😊 !!!!!!!!..........continue soon plzzzzzzz........can't wait!!!!.............let's see what's gonna happen next !?!

thnx ..m updatng in a while...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
Part - 29

Its a beautiful morning and manial wakes up to get ready for college and when she comes out after getting ready...she was about to enter kitchen to make breakfast for both herself and shayan...bt she founds shayan is not in the living room...she looks around everywhere..bt in vain..and atlast comes 2 kitchen 2 have something...thinking he might went out 4 a walk...there she founds a paper on the dining table...she sits on da near by chair and reads out the letter...its by shayan..
Manial,
I am sorry..i had a very urgent matter to tackle wid...so i had 2 go early..i neva wanted to disturb u..as u were sleeping peacfully after many days of tension regarding ur sis...don worry...i hav called sadaf...n she will pick u up by sharp 8...i knw..u will be up...by tht..as u don sleep till late...
talk 2 u laterz...
Shayan..
Manial is relieved after readg da letter...bt da question comes in mind...tht where might he hav gone so ear;y...wht matter he has up at tht early morning...keeping at side da thoughts..as it was already 7:45..n sadaf would be here any minute she strted making breakfast 4 herself n sadaf...
On da other hand shayan went early 2 catch wid aaima..n to talk to her abt the matter...bt his fate u see..aaima did not came 2 college tht day...n his luck..tht an other day was wasted...now he had 2 wait for 2morrow...n who knows...wht comes 2morrow...
Both manial n shayan...spent rest of da day normally..attendng classes...n wid frnds...mahad had nt come..coz he was at home...taking care of afshan....after college...both shayan n manial..went 2 meet afshan...all 4 had good time...n afshan was lt better now..n was now progressing as tld by da doctor...da only thng she neede was more attention frm close ppl..family...n tht was wht they all were gvng her now...mahad n shayan were out in garden..while manial was inside..lookng at afshan...she was asleep now n manial was getting bore..she came near da window..n saw it was a very beautiful waether out...she always loved..rain's n such kind of weathers...so she came out...n saw...mahad n shayan...playng wid football...n havng fun...now it was raining heavily...manial was standng inside da roof...enjoyng seeing rain fall..n seeing both frnds..playng n fightng on ball...mahad..looked up..n saw manial standng..called her out..
Ma:come on manial...tum bhi aoo...its such a good weather..n plus i need a partner to help me out..yeh shayan tu do ke barabar hai..
M:no way..mai nahee arahi...app log khelo..
Shayan..looked at da side..where manial was standng...n he got lost in her beauty...she was lookng so pure..wid few drops of water on her face..because of da wind blowng..he himself had no idea..why he thought...this bt ...thought came 2 his mind...tht he should go n wipe away the droplets from her beautiful face..as they were touchng her face..n it was so pure tht..he thought..nothng shld touch her...innocent face...nothng..except..his hands...jus tht thought came n he heard mahad callng him...n he looked at him...leavng behind da thought...
Ma:shayan...this is wrong...hai na..
S:wrong..kia??(he didn't knew..coz he was lst some where only)
Ma:aray...yahe k...barish ho rahe ho uar..koi...aisey...(winks..)
S(gt wht he said...n then lookng at manial..n slowly moving toward her):manial..u knw...yeh tu zyadati hai..is mausam k saath k...koi us mein bhegna nahee chahta...
M(was fearng...tht y he was comng 2ward her):ais baat nahe..par abhi mera dil nahee kar raha(tryng 2 avoid...now he came v close..ws jus an inch close...she lowered her gaze...as his eyes was showng some other emotion only...n she was gtg nervous...n even was fearful in heart...tht she might nt show..her real feelng 2 him..shayan...did nt let her thnk more..n grabbed her hand..n pulled in d garden...n both mahad n shayan were..now at her side..n she in middle..all wet..she was wearng a very see through dress..so now she was tryng 2 hide by her duppata..whch she was wearng...mahad gt da shez nt feelng gud in his presence..so..)
Ma:aisey muasam mein tu pakorey ho jae..wht say..mein abhi...bol k aya andar..u guyz njoy..
after mahad left both were quite...still in same position..infront o each other...manial wa nt able 2 face her..so her eyes were on ground..n shayan...God knows what happen 2 him...bt he was continously lookng at her..nt blinkng an eye...she knew his gaze wa on her..n she was feelng...more shy...he came close...n made her face him..by holdng her chin..n making her face up..she saw in her eyes direclty...n both were like..out of words...lst in each other..eyes..sayng lovely..love talkies via eyes...at last..shayan spoke..
S:tu..tumhein barish se darr lagta hai..??
Ma(again..eyes on ground):nahee aisa kuch nahee..i luv this weather bt..woh..app log...they na...so..acha nahe lagta..is liye bus..
S:acha...wiasey..now u don need 2 be shy..4rm me..or u shld??
manial..jus looks at him surprisngly...n without utterng a word..runs inside..on da way..she saw mahad comng...bt she didn't stop by him..n runs away..mahad smiles..n is happy..tht he left both alone..4 some time..on other hand...shayan...loved da way..she ran..n was still rememberng..her shyness...her blushing red face...her eyes...whch were al da while..searchng somethng on da ground...n a big smile comes on his face...n he looks up..at da sky...rain droplets..now on his face...n hez enjoyng it...looks down..n then looks at mahad..standng wid a plate of pakoras...smiling...he knew..why he was smiling...n he moves ahead...n b4 comng under da roof...looks at da sky again...moves his hands..through his hair...n joins mahad...2 hav some pait pooja now...
While manial reaches...afshan's room...n closes da door behind her...coz of running so fast..her heart is beating very fastly....she keeps a hand on her heart...n then...infront of her is da mirror..n she looks up in it...n then moves away blushng...as today...she can't see her own image in mirror...bt someone's eyes...looking at her image...keenly...
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ok guyz this was da nxt part...hop u all hav liked it...do comments n tell me h it was...
nxt part:da feeling whch shayan is gng through..is jus 4 da day or is longlastng...will shayan be able 2 tell aaima da truth..will manial...gt her dream..or she will live wid wht she knws is her fate..??
2 knw da answers 2 these questions..keep reading...
wid luv..
guriya...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaar mere computer mein koi problem hogayi hai i cant read Comic... writing i had to copy it and paste in Word and then read it 😆 😆 even in my FF i was confused b/c i could notread a thing 😆 😆

The part was awesome, fantastic, mind blowing, superb , fabulous and too good (cant recall any other adjectives), The description was just too gud i love the way th story is progressing 😊 😊 keep up the gud work 👍🏼 👍🏼 hope Shayan realises his love soon 😳 😳 mahad is such a sweet heart 😃 😃 kitne acche acche kaam kar raha hai zaroor jannat mein jaayega 😆 😆 gud Aaima ko bhi aisay hee kaam karne chahiye 😉 😉 it will lead her directly to heaven. Continue sssooooooon plzzzz or as u say curiosity killed the cat 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesoem part di loved it tooo toooo goooood enjoyed it... dear your fic rox from the top to the bottom n if u continue the same way i m sure its going to rock more n more...abbh coming to the part balle ballle lagta hai shayan ki niyat badal gai lol aaaima nahin toh manial hi sahi lol..mahad is very naughty hope to see mahad n afshan's romance continue sooon can't wait more... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
the part was awesome.......but yaar it was very difficult to read, sare sentences are sort of overlapping each other......so it was kind of difficlut to read 😆 ......hehehe......but the party was coooool !!!!!

continue soon !!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwaria

yaar mere computer mein koi problem hogayi hai i cant read Comic... writing i had to copy it and paste in Word and then read it 😆 😆 even in my FF i was confused b/c i could notread a thing 😆 😆 ..i will in future change the font dear...don worry...

The part was awesome, fantastic, mind blowing, superb , fabulous and too good (cant recall any other adjectives)they were enough dear...thnx lt for da praise.., The description was just too gud i love the way th story is progressing 😊 😊 keep up the gud work 👍🏼 👍🏼 hope Shayan realises his love soon 😳 😳 mahad is such a sweet heart 😃 😃 kitne acche acche kaam kar raha hai zaroor jannat mein jaayega 😆 😆 ..app ke duwain rahhe tu jayega he...gud Aaima ko bhi aisay hee kaam karne chahiye 😉 😉 it will lead her directly to heaven. uskey abrey mein..zara difficult...hai kehna..Continue sssooooooon plzzzz or as u say curiosity killed the cat 😉 ..m tryng 2 cont soon...

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

awesoem part di loved it tooo toooo goooood enjoyed it... thnx lt hana 4 likng...dear your fic rox from the top to the bottom n if u continue the same way i m sure its going to rock more n more...abbh coming to the part balle ballle lagta hai shayan ki niyat badal gai lol mujhe bhi same lag raha hai...aaaima nahin toh manial hi sahi lol.aaima abhi picture seh hate nahee hai..dear..keep tht in mind...2....mahad is very naughty hope to see mahad n afshan's romance ...hmm..hez being gud frnd..n abt mahad n afshan...lets see wht fate has in store 4 both...as afshan still not so well...continue sooon can't wait more... 👏..will cont asap...

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

the part was awesome...thnx....but yaar it was very difficult to read, sare sentences are sort of overlapping each other..hmm...my sis was tellng same thng 2 me...bt i wasn't finding it out..each time i chked..was fine..dono..whts da prb......so it was kind of difficlut to read 😆 ......hehehe......but the party was coooool !!!!! thnx 4 likng...

continue soon !!! 😳 yah will..don worry...

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Guriya u said u will update regularly its been 4 days

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