Ek Adhuri Kahani-Starring S/K.Prt 11 pg13 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
hey babes

plz plz plz plz plz plz continue soon ma jaan

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
tooo coollllllllllllllllll............... 👏
please continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Next Day...


Kashish sleeping....
Knock on her door....
Kashish got up and opened the door...
Sujal - Oh hi um im sorry i hope i didnt disturb yoo did i..?
Kashish smiled..
Kashish - No no its okay..
Sujal - Woh ... um....i came to say um thanx
Kashish - kis liyeh..?
Sujal - Kaal raat ke liyeh...Im so sorry i was drunk aur tumne mera khyaal raka tha...thanks...
Kashish - Uff hoo sujal tum bhi na...Tum tou mere dost ho nah....?
Sujal smiled...
Sujal - of course...
Kashish - Im just going to freshen up..andaar aou..
Sujal came in and sat down..
Kashish went to freshen up ......
Sujal walked over to the balcony...
Kashish came out...
Kashish wearing a beautiful Blue saree....
Sujal stared at Kashish.....
Kashish smiled..
Kashish - kya...?
Sujal - Kuch nahiin...you look
Kashish - Look....
Sujal smiled...
Kashish - (laughs)..Aab chalai..
Sujal - Kahaan..
Kashish - Uff hoo sujal...Come on lets go shopping
Sujal - hmm toh tum kahan jaana chaati ho?
Kashish - mmm..theres a really big shopping centre near your hotel...wahaan chalai..
Sujal - Teek hain...
Kashish walked down the stairs(in the hotel)...
She tripped....
Sujal got hold of her..
Sujal looked into her eyes..
Kashish smiled...
Kashish - Um...
Sujal - Oh um sorry...
Sujal let go of kashish..
Sujal - Um..chalai..
Kashish and Sujal went shopping centre....
Kashish walked into a shop...
Kashish - Hmmm..this is nice..
(she pulled out a light green saree)
Kashish - What you think sujal..?
Sujal - mmhmm..nahiin..i like this one...(pulls out a lilac saree)
Kashish - Ye thats nice...
Sujal smiled..
After a while..
Kashish - Come on sujal lets come and shop for your clothes...
Sujal - Nahiin kashish its okay..
Kashish - Please sujal..
Sujal - Chaloh phir....
Sujal walked into a shop...
Kashish pulled out a black armani suit...
Kashish - Wow this is nice...
Sujal - mmm...
Kashish - Oh sujal please get this .... you will look soo good with this...
sujal - liken..
Kashish - Liken kya...acha teek hai
Kashish walked out the shop..
Sujal smiled and bought the suit..
He walked after kashish..
Sujal - So where we going..
Kashish - Mujhe kya paatha..
Sujal - Uff hoo..
Kashish walked faster..
Sujal walked after..
Sujal - Kashish tum bhi na..(he laughed)
Kashish turned the opposite direction..
Sujal went after her he ran infront..and stopped her..
Sujal - Sorry.....(he holds his ears)
Kashish smiled...
Kashish - Wahan Chalai?
Kashish looks at a saree shop..
Sujal - (sighs) acha..
Kashish smiled
Kashish - Aaapke sazaa..
Sujal - mmm
Kashish pulled sujals hand and dragged him over to the shop..
Sujal looked at her hand and smiled..
Kashish - Sujal yeh dekho...
Sujal stared at kashish..
Kashish - Sujal..uff hoo....what colour..blue..ya fhir red..?
Sujal continued staring..
Kashish - Sujal boloh nah....
Sujal - huh..?
Kashish - Uff hoooo...tum bhi na....blue or red..
Sujal - Pink..
Kashish - nahiin sujal mujhe tou yeh walah pasand hai..
Sujal - * picks out a pink saree*
Kashish -hmmm....Nahiin sujal...tell me nah yeh wala ya fhir yeh..?
Sujal - Noooo yeh walah try karo..
Kashish - Ufff....
Kashish walked over to the changing rooms..
She came out wearing the Pink saree..
Sujal smiled..
Kashish - Sujal maine kahan na!! mujhe yeh nahin pehna..
Sujal - nahiin kashish you look bautiful..
Kashish walked back into the changing rooms..
Kashish came out..
Sujal - Teek hai tumhari marzi..
Sujal walked out the Shop...
Kashish smiled..
She bought the Pink Saree...
" 2 men came up to Kashish they dragged her out the shop "
Kashish screamed...
Kashish - Choro mujhe....Leave me....
The men put her into the Van..
Kashish screamed - SUJAL!
Sujal looked behind and saw her being put into the van..
He ran....
Sujal - KASHISH......!

Please wait for Prt seven..

Sorry for this late reply..

I'll try my best to Cont a bit sooner..

thanks xxx

Edited by Shezzy12 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
please cna i ave sum replies..?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
omg kash kidnapeddddd nahinnn.......fab part....lol shopping scene was cute....cont soooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
thankx for the pm.. i wouldve commented sooner if i knew it w as updated but i havent exactly been in the fanfic section for a lil whileee

well great part.. wonder how he saves her and y they took kashish..

continue soooooooooonnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
fantastic....very nice..... 👏
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please continue soon.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
sorry couldn't comment 4 the other parts they were fabulous continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
Shezzy!! Come on yaar!!
Continue now!!
Its fab!!
You knw I love yor FF'S!!
Pleaseee!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
Shezzy where r u pls cont ur story

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