Ek Adhuri Kahani-Starring S/K.Prt 11 pg13 - Page 3

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😃GREAT!

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Part Four...

Sujal and Kashish go to office..!

Man - Sir..!!

Sujal - Haan..kya hua...?

Man - Aaj board meeting hai nah...?

Sujal - Oh s*** i forgot yes yes

Man Walked away..

Sujal went to his cabin..

Sujal - Kashish aaj ek meeting hai..!!

Kashish - Oh acha..

Sujal and Kashish talk about project.....

They walk to the meeting..

Suyesh Mehra .. - Hello Ladies and Gentlemen..I am Suyesh Mehra ....

Everyone clapped..

Suyesh - Mr.Garewal we all know that there is a compeptition for between mehra industries and R.G...

Suyesh goes on speaking about the project...

After the meeting...

Sujal and Kashish in Cabin.

Sujal - Kashish I need to go Dubai..

Kashish - Kyun sujal..?

Sujal - Every year we have a competition for all companies and we go there and present our project and idea's .. So far we have won it 2 years in a row and so has Mehra Industries..

Kashish - So its even..

Sujal - Yes..Liken kashish I will have to leave today. Kashish can you come with me

Kashish - Sure...

Sujal - If you can we wil be leaving about 7

Kashish - Haan okay..

Sujal smiled at kashish...

Seven o Clock...

Sujal comes to pick kashish up..

Kashish wearing a red saree....

Sujal wearing Black Suit..!

Kashish sat down in the car..

Sujal smiled..

Kashish - um wat time is the flight.?

Sujal - 8

kashish smiled.

Kashish puts the radio on..

Song : Jiya dhadak dhadak jaaye.....

Sujal and Kashish looked at each other..

Kashish smiled..

At the airport

Kashish and sujal take the plane..

In the Plane...

Kashish falls asleep..

Her head tilts onto his shoulder...

Sujal looked.....

Sujal - Umm..kashish..

Kashish didnt wake up.

Sujal smiled faintly...

DUBAI

At the Hotel..

Sujal - Hi, We um booked two rooms under the name of garewal.

Recep. - Yes i will check..

Sujal - thanks

Recep. - Sorry i think you booked just one room!

Sujal - No Its two here look at my confirmation

Recep. - Um will i'm sorry there must of been some techinal difficultuies and we have no room now to give to u sorry,,

Sujal - Oh umm..

Kashish - I'ts okay i will go and find another hotell.

Sujal - No Kashish, you stay here.

Sujal walks out the hotel before Kashish could stop him.

In Kashish's Room...

Kashish - thinking* Omg! Main Sujal ke bhaare mein kyun sochrahi hoon! !"

Door - "KNOCK"

Kashish - 😕 Come in...

Kashish - Sujal!

Sujal - Kashish i just came to check on you. You okay??

Kashish - Erm....haan...

Sujal - Kya hua? Tum pareshaan laghrahi ho...

Kashish - No No it's okay...

Sujal - So...shall we go out for dinner?

Kashish - Haan sure!

Restaurant....

Sujal and kashish sit down....

sujal - What you want to eat....?

Kashish - Umm..

Waiter - Heres the Menu...!

Kashish and sujal looked at the menu..

Sujal - Um get me the chef's special..

Kashish - Same for me.

Sujal - and get me um coffee.

Kashish - Water for me thanks

Waiter walked off.

Sujal - So um..tell me a bit more about yourself i heard you got sisters..?

Kashish - Yeh I got 4 sisters..They are all younger than me ..

Sujal - Awwh sweet

Kashish - What about you...?

Sujal - Just one brother..My other brother 'Piyush' passed away...

Kashish - Oh im sorry

Sujal - It's Okay..

Kashish - Can i ask you something..?

Sujal - Yeh..

Kashish - Um *wonders poochon ke nah poonchoon '

Sujal - Boloh..

Kashish - Woh um uff main bhool gayee.

Sujal laughed.

Waiter comes with food.

Kashish and Sujal eat.....

Kashish doesnt eat much..

sujal doesnt eat much...

Sujal - You finished.?

Kashish - Yeh u?

Sujal - yeh shall we leave..?

Kashish - Yeh okay..

They walk out...

Sujal - That was awful..

Kashish laughed..

Kashish - Yeh i know..

Sujal - Chalo lets have some proper food.

Sujal went to one of the stalls outside..

Kashish - Omg i will have spicy purri,

Sujal - Spicy for you!! can you take it,,!!

Kashish - Ohh really..!!! Mr.Sujal

Sujal - Lets have a competition..

Kashish smiled...

Sujal ordered 10 purris...

He secretly ordered sweet ones for him and spicy ones for kashish..

Sujal - Yeh lou paani you will need it..

Kashsih - We wil see..

Sujal and Kashish begin to eat..

On sujals 3rd purri it becomes spicy as da man mixed them around..

Sujal - Paani!!!

Kashish Laughed..

kashish - cheet!!

Sujal - Mein aur cheat kyun kya hua!!

Kashish - Sweet puriyaan aapnai aapke liyeh aur mere lieyh spicy hmmmm..cheater..

Sujal and Kashish laughed..

Sujal - Okay okay you win..! Lets go now....its getting late...😃

Sujal and Kashish go to the car.....

Sujal - challo...I need to drive fast..

Kashish - huh

Sujal - Otherwise sinha saab mujhe dhaatai geh..

Kashish - Kya matlaab

Sujal - Its past your bed time nah

Kashish hit sujal

Sujal laughed..

Next Day...

Kashish went to Sujal's room

*Kashish dressed up in waiter*

She wore a scary mask.....

She knocked...

Sujal - Come in..

Kashish came in..

Sujal - Put it over there,,i will pay the bill at the recep.

Kashish * changes her voice slightly*

Sujal - yes sir..

Sujal's back faced towards Kashish so he cant see her...

Kashish closed the door....

she locked it..

Kashish turned around..

Kashish -AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Sujal wearing 'shaving foam'

Kashish - OMG!!!! tum. bhi..!!! you also wearing a mask..

Sujal - yeh aur mask!!!

Kashish began to laugh....

Sujal laughed with her....

Sorry for late reply.

I hope you liked it..

Part 5 coming soon..

thanks for replyin luv yoo x

Edited by Shezzy12 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 coool part hun..... 😆 😆 luvd da scenes between sk....cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
hahaa!! cute scenee!!!!

contine sooooonnnnnnnn

i guess she decided to help eh..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
very nice parts..keep up the good work going.. simply veryy gooddddddddddd....... 👏
please post the next part soon..me waiting... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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eeeeeeeeeek ma sis cont soon

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain 😃 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part FIVE...

Sujal - Acha sunoh kashish ... We have to get ready for the event there is a party at 'ICE' Club...We need to get ready... Tum tiyaar hogau i will come to your room in an hour...

Kashish - Teek hai...

Sujal wearing - A Black suit....

Kashish wearing - A Pink Saree....

Sujal went to Kashish's Room...

Sujal knocked...

Kashish opened the Door...

Sujal smiled..

Sujal - You look beautiful..

Kashish - Thank you .. Hmm you dont look bad..

Sujal - Chalai...

Sujal and Kashish went to the party....

At the party

Man and Lady walk up to Kashish and Sujal...

Man - Hello, Mr garewal..

Sujal - Hello Mr Kapoor..

Man - Oh, Where's MRS Garewal..? and who is this beautiful lady..?

Sujal - Um...

Lady - Have you divorced MRS garewal..?

Sujal - No um..

Kashish - Im Mr Garewals Business partner..Mrs garewal is at home she couldnt make it.....

Lady - Ahh acha acha...

Man and lady - Excuse me....

Kashish looked at Sujal..

Sujal walked off....

Kashish - Sujal wait...

Sujal - Kya..?

Kashish - Dont run away.....

Sujal - Yeh kashish your right im sorry..

Kashish - Now smile..

Sujal smiled..

A lady walked up to Kashish..

Lady - Hi..Im Mrs Singh..

Kashish - Hi I'm Kashish Sinha..

Lady - So your not married...

Kashish - Kya matlaab..?

Lady - Aap aur Mr Garewal..

Kashish - Nahiin, We are business partners...

Lady - Hmm...excuse me..

Few minutes later...

All ladies start to gossip

Lady - Kashish Sinha aur Mr Garewal...

Lady 2 - Hmmm..Mrs garewal kahaan hai..?

Sujal heard...

Sujal walked over to the Bar..

Sujal began to drink...

Kashish - Sujal yeh subh kya hai..?

Sujal - just leave me alone...You said nah..Kai subh kuch teek hojaygah..Abh Sunoh...

Kashish - Uff...Sujal please...

Sujal - maine kahaan na....leave me alone....

Man - Hello and welcome to 'Dubai..' ...Now im going to annonce the winners of ' The Business of the Year Competition ' as we all now we have our famous rivals with us today...Garewal industries and Mehra industries...The winners will recieve a contract.....

Everyone clapped..

Kashish - Sujal bus karo..Chalo please..

Kashish snatched the Glass of sujal..

Sujal walked over....

Everyone clapped..

Man - I would like to introduce MR.GAREWAL and MR.MEHRA To come and join me at the stage...

Sujal and Mr.Mehra walked onto the stage...

Man - The winner is........

Everyone started to mutter..

Man - Shh....The winner is once again....Mr.........GAREWAL..

Everyone clapped....!

Man passed a contract to sujal.......

Man - Where is Mrs.Garewal..?She is with you every year..

Sujal - um she couldnt make it today...she wasnt well..

Man - Acha acha congratulations.

Sujal - Thank you.

Sujal walked off the stage.....

He walked over to kashish..

Kashish - COngrats..

Sujal - Congrats to you too..and thank you..

Kashish smiled - Its my pleasure.. Mr garewal..

DJ - Now everyone its time to party..!!! So all couples please come onto the dancefloor ..

Song : 'Tera intizaar' From Rahul Vaidya...

mujhe raat din ab tera intezaar hain - 2

batau tujhe kis tarah kitna pyar hain

tera intezaar hain mujhe tujhse pyar hain

mujhe tujhse pyar hain tera intezaar hain

Kashish and sujal sat down...

Kashish looked at sujal..

Sujal looked at kashish...

Kashish - Your very rude..?

Sujal - Kyun aabh maine kya kiya..?

Kashish - Socho..?

Sujal - acha...hmmm...Would you like to dance..?

Kashish - Yes....

Sujal and Kashish walked on to the dance floor.....

tanhaaiya bhi hain bechainiya bhi hain - 2

masoom dil bhi hain majbooriya bhi hain

Sujal twirled kashish around..

They looked into each others eyes....

Kashish closed her eyes....

Sujal dreaming of him dancing with his wife....

sadaye teri kyo mujhe aati nahi

"Sujal and Mystery girl dancing....

To same song...

woh yaade teri dil se kyo jaati nahi

sujal kissed the girl

tera intezaar hain mujhe tujhse pyar hain

They both looked at each other..."

mujhe tujhse pyar hain tera intezaar hain

le aayenge sanam tujhko manake ham - 2

paagal se ho gaye dil ko lagake ham

Sujal realised he was dreaming...

Kashish - Kya hua...

Sujal - Woh..kuch nahiin.....

Sujal walked off....

deewane ko toh ek naya koi naam de

subah pyar ki pyar ki koi sham de

tera intezaar hain mujhe tujhse pyar hain

mujhe tujhse pyar hain tera intezaar hain

Sujal walked out...

A girl walked over to kashish..

Girl - Arrey kashish tum...

Kashish - Oh..Hi..Kripa..

Kripa - Kaise hoo tumm...?

Kashish - woh..mein teek hoon

*Kashish looking for sujal*

Kripa - Who you looking for kashish..?

Kashish - Um..Sujal..

Kripa - Mr.Garewal..acha acha..you and him..?

Kashish - Nahiin , hum sirf dost hain

Kripa - ooooh acha acha well i'll leave you too it..good luck

Kashish smiled..

She went to look for sujal...

She went to Sujal's Hotel....

She went to the Recep.

K - hi has sujal garewal entered his room.?

R - Let me check.........No but hes at the bar...

K - Oh thank you....

Kashish went to Sujal....

She saw him drinking...(sat at the bar)

Kashish - Sujal..

Sujal - Kya...

Kashish - Please stop it...

Sujal - *crying* - I miss her kashish...main uske beghair nahiin rehsakta....I love her dammit....

Kashish hugged sujal....

Kashish - sujal...You have to forget her...hum subh ke liyeh....

Sujal - Kashish..I killed her...mere vaajah se woh aaj yaahaan nahiin hai...

Kashish - Nahiin sujal..tumhare ghaalti nahiin hai....

Waiter walked up to sujal he dropped drink over him..

Sujal - Uff yeh kya kiya....

Waiter - Im sorry sir...

Kashish - jou..

Waiter walked off..

Sujal - Kashish just leave me alone..

Sujal walked off....

Kashish - Sujal rokho..

Sujal fell..

Kashish ran and helped him up....

Kashish took sujal to his room....

She put sujal onto the bed...

Kashish walked out..

Kashish went to her room...

Kashish thinking - yeh mujhe kya hora hai...why cant i see him like this ..? Kya main sujal se pyaar......

Please wait for Part Six...

Thank yoo for reading....

Please reply......

xxx😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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cooool part......awww hw cute them dancing together 😳 lovely part cont soon sweetie 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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he killed his wife???

now i m curious..

cute dance scene.. continue soooooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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FABULOUS!! I LOVE IT!!! OMG!!!
YOU'VE LEFT IT AT SUCH A BIG "CLIFFHANGER"
hehe
plzz carry on soon..
tell me whn u u hve!!

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