Ek Adhuri Kahani-Starring S/K.Prt 11 pg13 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
omg how sweet yaar kasam se muuuuuuuuuah cont soon babez

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
Shezzzz!!!!

Com eonnn!!!

Your're taking agesss!!!

You know I love the fanfic!!!

Hurrrryyyyy!! 😃



Anam...😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

Part Nine

Sujal - Kashish ITS MY FAULT I KILLED HER..AND IM KILLING HER NOW SLOWLY BY DOING THIS

Kashish - doing what..?

Sujal - I LOVE YOU KASHISH...

Kashish shocked in happiness .......

sujal turned around..

Kashish - Kya hua..?

Sujal - Liken ... main aisa nahiin karsakta..

Kashish - Sujal..yeh subh ghalaat nahiin hai..

Sujal - Main aisai kaise karsakta hoon..noori kai saath..main sirf usehi pyaar kartha hoon..tou...aaj main...tumse kyun...

Kashish - Sujal please...tumhai useh bhoolna hogah..

Sujal - Liken Kashish...

Kashish - Sujal..main tumse bohot pyaar karthi hoon.....aur noori tumharai liyeh bohot khush hogi...

Sujal - Im sorry Kashish liken main yeh subh nahiin karsakta..

Kashish - Teek hai sujal.agar tum mujhe aapnaah nahiin saktai tou main bhi aaj tumhai choori hoon...

Sujal - Kya..?

Kashish - haan sujal im leaving..aur aaj se main tumhari shakaal nahiin dehk nah chati..

Sujal - Liken kashish please...

Kashish - teek hai...Im giving you 2 days sujal..sochloh...

Sujal looked at kashish..

and kashish walked off...

Kashish walked down as tears came rushing down her face....

Song : Bohat pyaar kathai hain..from saajan comes on..

Kashish remembered all her times with sujal..she smiled...

An hour later...

Her mobile rang..

She picked up..

K - Hello

S - Sunoh its sujal..im sorry kashish..

K - What for..?

S - For hurting you....

K - liken ..do you love me..?

S - *silent*

K - Sujal..?

K - teek hai..

Kashish hung up..

Next Day....

Sujal got ready ,, packed his bag and drove to kashish's hotel..

He knocked on her door..

K - Come in..

S - Um Kashish im going back

K - *looked at him* Teek hai..

S - Tum kabh wapaas aari hoo..?

K - Aaj raat..

S - acha so ill see you in india bye..

K - sunoh..

S - haan..

K - Kuch nahiin..

S walked out the room..

Sujal Arrived in Mumbai..

He walked into the garewal house put his bags down and tok ashriwaad..

Veena - Arrey sujal..tumhai kya hua..?

Sujal - Mujhe..kuch nahiin..

Sujal walked to his room..

Veena followed him up..

Veena walked into his room

Veena - Sujal bheta..? kya hua..?

Sujal - mama kuch nahiin..

Veena - sujal main tumhe jaanti hoon..kuch tou hua hai

Sujal - mama

Veena - Sujal..baathou

Sujal - main kashish se...

Veena - Kya..? Kashish koun hai..?

Sujal - mere dost aur secretary..

Veena - mmhmmm acha acha

Sujal - Main useh..

Veena - boloh boloh..*she smiled*

Sujal - main....um...

Veena - Tum useh bohot pyaar karthai hoo

Sujal - haan..

Veena - tou baathadou useh..

Sujal - nahiin..main noori ki saath aisa nahiin karsakta..

Veena - Sujal bheta sunoh...noori abh is dunya mein nahiin hai..

Sujal - liken..

Veena - tum aabh kashish se pyaar karthai hoo...tell her sujal..ek aur ghalti maat karo

Sujal - liken..

Veena - liken kuch nahiin sujal..

Sujal hugged veena..

Kashish came to india...

mauli - arrey di aap..

Kashish smiled and huggged all her sisters..

Kashish - arrey mahek papa khidaar hain..?

Mahek - wou delhi wala project..

Kashsih - acha teek hai..

Kashish walked into her bedroom and closed her eyes

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Veena left the room and sujal walked over to his balcony...

He saw "Noori"....

He grabbed her hand..

She turned around..

Noori - Sujal...aabh tumhai mujhe choorna hogah....

Sujal - Kya..?

Noori - tum aabh kashish se pyaar karthai hoo...jou usseh baathadou..

Sujal let go.

Noori smiled ..

Noori - close your eyes...*she stroked sujals face gently..*

Sujal closed his eyes..

Noori dissappeared..

He opened them up to find her not with him..

Noori's voice echoed in his head

"jou usseh baathadou..,tum aabh kashish se pyaar karthai hoo..."

Sujal closeed his eyes and thought of kashish..

Song : Tere Naam...

Sujal whispered - Im sorry kashish....

will sujal accept kashish....

will sujal now forget noori and move on....

find out in part ten special part...

New arrivals.......

who is coming .......?

thanks for reading xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
that was awesomee!!! he is gonna tell her.. hopefully the new comer isnt someone related to kashish.. ahemahem.. i dont want sujal fiting for the one he loves.. he's been through alot anywayzz

thankx for the pm
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
hhmmm really interesting but still confused why he keeps on saying he killed noori its really different and unique 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
very good... going very interesting.... 👏 continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
oi hoi kuriye continue soon ok me luvin it 😃

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just caught up.....so noori was married 2 sujal 😉 oo lucky u noori 😛 awww sweet noori is tellin sujal 2 go to kashish....good girl.....wonder who the new entry is......newayz great parts cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
wow gr8 ff 👏
just read it n its fantastic
noori tld sujal to tel kashish tht he luvs her bt wil sujal tel ???????????
waiting 4 da next part post sooon 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Next Day...

Kashish stood at the balcony..

Mauli - Di..Are you going office..?

Kashish daydreaming....

Mauli - Di....

Kashishs phone rings..

Kashish looks at the phone and ignores it..

Mauli - Di..? Kya hua..

Kashish turned around..

K - Im sorry...woh main..

M - Koi baath nahiin...Di you giong office..?

K - Aaj..office....mm

Phone rings again...

K ignores it..

Mauli - di...yeh subh..?

K - Woh..Kuch nahiin

Phone rings again...

Mauli - di..pick it up nah..

K picked the phone up and looked at the caller id..

She put it back down...

Mauli - Di..

K - Mauli tum jou

Mauli left the room....

Kashish*to herself* - Actually im going to go work......forget sujall...be proffesional kashish...

Kashish got ready..

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Sujal - Kashish phone kyun nahiin utari..

Sujal went to work..

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Kashish - Mauli ..mahek kahaan hai...

Mauli - Office..

Kashish - Acha..teek hai main bhi office jahri hoon.

Mauli - Teek hai di.

Kashish walked out ...

It started to rain..

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Sujal in his car..

Thinkin*

Sujal - Aaj main kashish ko subh kuch such baatha dou gah...main sirf ushi sai pyaar kartha hoon...

He smiled..

He stopped his car..

and walked into the rain..

He saw noori..

He pulled her and twirled her around..

He closed his eyes..

When he opened them..

Something tugged on his watch he turned around..

and saw a dupata stuck to his watch..

The girl turned around it was kashish..

He looked at her and smiled...

He held her hand..

She smiled..

He put his arms round her waist..

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*Car horns*...

Sujal realised he was dreaming..

He drove to work............

At work....

Sujal sat in his cabin...

Knock at the door..

Sujal - Come in..

Kashish walked in....

Kashish - Sir..yeh files..

Kashish passed him the files..

Sujal looked through..

Sujal - Teek hai..

Kashish - aur yeh mera resignation letter..

Sujal - took the letter and ripped it up..

Kashish - SIR!..

Sujal - Kashish..Im sorry..Liken tum yeh job nahiin chor sakti ..

Kashish - Kyun nahiin..

Sujal - Kyunki main tumse pyaar kartha hoon

Kashish walked out..

Sujal - Rokho kashish..

Sujal - Come with me for lunch in an hour meet me here and i will take you please

Kashish - Teek hai....

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Meanwhile at the airport.....

A family arrives from america.....

Air hostess - Welcome to India...

Guy - Thank you very much...*he smiled and put his glasses on..*

Guy turns around and smiles at someone...

Guy - Shall we go now?

Girl - 😉 Sure....

A lil baby toddler*girl* Runs up to the girl and the Girl picks the toddler up and kisses her.

Guy - Oh God where is Sujal..

Someone taps the guy on his shoulders..

Guy turns around and sees sujal..

Guy - omg Sujal..How are you..

Guy huggs sujal.

Sujal - Long time No see John.

Girl smiles at Sujal.

John - Oh sorry sujal, This is my wife Shezz and my daughter sapna

Shezz - Hi.

Sujal - Hi. nice to meet you.

Shezz - you to.

Sujal - So shall we go..?

John - Sure...come on Shezz....

Shezz smiles as John takes her hand...

They all go in Sujals car...

Sujal - Ok...i've arranged a place at the italian Baci restaurant/Hotel...

John - Sujla you shouldnt have.

Sujal - John it really doesnt matter

John - you sure

Sujal - yes

Sujal drops Shezz and John off at the hotel...

Lunch

Sujal arranges a romantic dinner for kashish..

He wore his best suit.

Sujal waited for kashish...

Kashish came she wore a beaitful saree....

Sujal smiled as she walked in..

Kashish and Sujal sat down..

Sujal - hi.

Kashish - hi...

Kashish looked around...

Kashish - Sujal, subh logh kahaan hai.?

sujal - Aaj sirf hum duno hi hain.

Kashish smiled.

Waiter came..

Sujal and Kashish ordered the food..

Violins played the tune of "thodsa pyaar hua hai".

Sujal held kashish's hand..

sujal - Im sorry...

Kashish - It's ok.

Sujal held out his hand

Sujal - do you want a dance.?

Kashish - *smiled*

Sujal and Kashish danced..

Sujal twirled kashish around.

Kashish smiled..

Sujal - Kashish..i....

Kashish - kya..?

Sujal - I love you.

Kashish smiled..and hugged sujal..

Kashish - I love you too sujal.

waiter - um excuse me..

Sujal - Oh sorry..

Sujal and Kashish sat down and ate.

After a while...

Sujal - You finihsed..?

Kashish - Yes.

Sujal and Kashish walked to the car...

They sat down...

Sujal looked at Kashish and stroked her face...

She blushed 😳

Sujal kissed her.....

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*Who is john..? Is he related to Sujal..?

* Kashish and Sujal forever and ever ...?

*Find out in the next part.....

Thank you soooooo much for your replies im so glad your enjoying this..I really appreiciate all your comments thank you 😃 Luv yoo all xxxxxx

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