Ek Adhuri Kahani-Starring S/K.Prt 11 pg13

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Starring

Garewal Family...

Sujal

Rishi

Sinha Family...

Kashish

Mehak

Mauli

Charu

Kanan

Sujal - A Rich and Intelligent man....Very close to his mother and his brother...has had a very bad past life....but that story not been told yet...

Kashish - A young intelligent girl 'her fathers favourite!' a very close one to her father.. treats her younger sisters like her own....Lost her mother years and years ago but now she has brought up her sisters like her own...

Rishi - A very caring and overprotective younger brother..likes to party....

A love story................about sujal and kashish.......

Will sujal meet kashish...?............Will they fall in love....?

Please tell me whether to cont or not..

Thanx xxx

prt 1 on pg 1

prt2 on pg 2

prt3 on pg 4

prt4 on pg 5

prt5 on pg 6

prt 6 on pg 7

prt 7 on pg 8

prt 8 on pg 9

prt 9 pg 10

prt 10 pg 12

prt 11 page 13

SPECIAL PROMO...

FOR COMING PART EIGHT

http://www.zippyvideos.com/9797559426470526/ekadhurikahani/

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Posted: 18 years ago
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cooool intro sis! dnt worry ul get more comments soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice intro...i liked the intro.... 👏
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👏 👏 👏 ab please continue soon...me can't wait to read the story.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pls pls cont. nice intro. will b eagerly waiting for the 1st part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it sounds awesome...i m sure it willb marvellous so do continue 4 sure...will b lookin fwd 2 it...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part One.....

Veena - Rishi.!!!

Rishi - Ji mama....

Veena - yeh nashta karlo.

Veena passed rishi paratha.

Veena - Rishi sujal kahaan hai.?

Rishi - woh tou office jah chokai hain.

Veena - Kya itne jaaldi...

Rishi - haan..mama hes still upset he cant forget it mama its been 5 years now..Big B usko kyun nahiin bhool saktai

veena - useh tou koi nahiin bhoolsakta...

Veena walked over to a photo..

Veena - Main useh kaise bhool sakti hoon main tou uski ma thi nah..aur sujal tou.....

Tears filled veena's eyes.

Rishi - Mama...Please..

Rishi wiped her tears and hugged veena..

Papa*kashish's dad* - Kashish bheta......!!

Girl ran down the stairs....

Wearing a beautiful red saree...

With matching earrings and matching churiyaan..

show girls eyes....

and her lips...*smiled*

Girl = Kashish

Kashish - ji papa....

papa - tum kahaan jahre hoo..?

Kashish - Aaj job interview hain

Papa - oh acha acha...good luck bheta

Kashish - Thank you papa.!

Kashish put the food on the breakfast table..

Kashish - Kanan..!! Mauli...Charu....Mehak!!

Kanan and Mehak came down.

Kashish - Mauli aur charu kahan hain

Mauli - di woh tho duno

Hears noises from the bedroom.

Charu - Uff hoo...let me wear this nah..

Mauli - Nahiin im wearing it today.

Kashish - Uff hoo tum duno bhi na! Yeh lou Charu tum yeh phenloh.

Charu - Thanks di.

Kashish - Your welcome. aab tum duno jaaldi se neechay ajoh.

They all sat at the breakfast table and ate.

A man sitting at his desk...

His back turned....

A man wearing a long black coat.. sat on the chair....

He looked at a photo..

tears dropped on the photo..

Suddenly the door opened..

The photo fell and shattered ........

The Guy looked at the door in anger.....

Kashish was standing she stared....

Kashish - Sorry...

Guy - Dont you know that your supposed to knock before you enter a room.

Kashish - I'm sorry woh um receptionist nai kaha tha kai aap mera intizaar karai hain

Guy - acha.....

He looked at the photo..

Kashish - shall i help you..

Kashish picked up the pieces....

Kashish - Yeh koun hai.?

guy - none of your business

He snatched the pieces of Kashish.

Guy - anyways....my name is Sujal Garewal.

Kashish - Hi my name is Kashish Sinha

Sujal - have a seat...

Sujal interviewed kashish.

Sujal - Congrats you got the job.

Kashish - Oh My God thank you.

Sujal gave a faint smile.

Kashish left...

Sujal looked back at the photo.....

Who is it in the photo..?

Who is that person to sujal..how are they related..?

Please wait for part two..

Thanx

please reply..

xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice ff... 👏 ...good intro... 👏 n the frst part was nice...keep up the good work... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part Two..

Rishi walked in..

Rishi - Big B Please stop it!!.

Sujal - Stop what rishi.!

Rishi - Forget it..please...

Rishi snatched the photo off...

Sujal - Rishi.!

Rishi - Kya Big B.!!! Please..!! mere liyeh...

Sujal - Liken..

Rishi - Nahiin, Big B it's not fair..please...mama ki liyeh..

Sujal - Teek hain...

Rishi hugged sujal

Rishi - thank you

Door knocked..

Sujal - Come in..

Kashish - Hi umm sir...Please can i talk to you ..

Sujal - Yes sure,

Kashish walked in..

Rishi - Oi hoi.....Main marjava...!

Sujal - Chup!

Rishi - Big B, Rehnai doh..! look at her..!! pure beauty...

Sujal - Rishi...Go out please

Rishi - aap ki marzi...

rishi walked out and winked at kashish..

Sujal smiled at kashish..

Sujal - I'm Sorry.. he's just like that ignore him..

Kashish smiled back..

Kashish - Its okay...

Sujal - So what did you want to talk about.?

Kashish - Woh..Project sir..

Sujal - Oh Orphanage project..acha take a seat.

Kashish sat down..

Kashish - So where should we build the orphanage.?

Sujal - Um... Well we do have a some places..

Kashish - Well i studied the project and i think dehradun is a good place..There is a school nearby and everything..

Sujal - hmm yes .. nice..

Kashish - Sir..,

Sujal - Yes?

Kashish - why are you making this orphanage ,,.? i mean are you making it in the name of any one..?

Sujal - Woh....my very close friend..

Kashish - aww..was she the one in the photo.

Sujal - yeh..

Kashish - hmm...Sir..you want to come for a coffee,,? so we can discuss the project aswel.

Sujal - Um..okay sure...

At the Cafe.

Sujal and Kashish sitting down..

Sujal staring..

kashish - Kya hua..?

Kashish looked to see what sujal was staring at..

Sujal smiled..

He was looking at the Play area..

Kashish - You like children..

Sujal - Yeh...

Sujal went up to them..

He played with a lil baby boy..

Kashish smiled.

Sujal went back...

Kashish - They are so comfatable with you..!

Sujal smiled..

Sujal - Yh...

Sujal got flashbacks..

At the Beach..

Building sand castles..with a lil girl..

Lil Grl - Papa!!!

Sujal - Haan..

Lil Grl - Can i ave some ice cream please,,??

Sujal - Of course sweetheart...Chalo..liken mama kahaan hai

Lil Grl - Paatha nahiin papa..

A lady came...

Ldy - hows my princess.?

Lil Grl - Main teek hoon..

Ldy hugged the lil grl..

Sujal - Oh and i dont get a hug..

Lady hugged sujal..

Back to reality..

Kashish - Sir,,!! Sir!!

Sujal - haan..

Kashish - Aap kya soochre thai,?

Sujal - Kuch nahiin.

Tears dropped from sujal's eyes..

Kashsih - Sir...!

Sujal walked out..

Kashish went after him....

Kashish - Sir..!! Sir.!!! please wait,

Sujal stopped walking..

Sujal - Kashish woh...i need to goo..

Kashish - Liken sir....kya hua..?

Sujal - Please ..

Sujal walked off....

At Night..

Kashish thinking of sujal..

Kashish - I dont understand..sir..aisa..kyun behave karthai hain?

Kashish walked to the balcony..

Kashish - Uff....

Please wait for part three..

What is wrong with sujal?

Who is that women..?

Was that lil girl his daughter..?

thanx 4 readin xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part yaar
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ur story is amazing
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome story Jaan!....cont soon!😳

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