Ek Adhuri Kahani-Starring S/K.Prt 11 pg13 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part seven

Sujal ran to his car..

and Chased after the Van.

Guy Got his gun out and pointed it at sujal..

Sujal dodged and put his window down..

Sujal - Kashish..!!

The Man Turned his gun...

he aimed it at Sujal....

Sujal Moved his car infront of the Van...

The Van stopped and 2 men came out with guns..

They shot Sujals leg..

they got back in the Van turned it around and left.....

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Sujal woke up in a hospital...

Sujal - KASHISH!!...

Nurse - Dr..Hes awake..

Dr walked in...

Dr - Hello..You are Mr.Garewal..

Sujal - er..um..i dont understand..

Dr - Someone found you and brought you here...you got shot in the leg..

Sujal - Listen i dont have time for this i gota go..

Dr - Im sorry but you cannot leave..

Sujal - wht you mean..?

Dr - Its serius we need to do a operation in an hour and then if that is succesful then yes you willl be able to leave..

Sujal - No im sorry..

Sujal tried to Get out..

The Dr pushed him back in the bed..

Dr - Im Sorry..

Sujal*thinking* - aab main kya karoon..?...woh kashish...Oh Damn it..

Sujal's fone rang..

Sujal picked up..

Sujal - Hello..

Man - We got ur kashish..

Sujal - Kya..wht do you want..how much..

Man - We want your contract..

Sujal - Which contract..

Man - the one you won..

Sujal -...What....But.....

Man *laughed* - Its not that easy..Well we will give you time to think...

Man hung up..

Sujal - omg how selfish can i be..Nahiin i have to give the contract up..

Dr - Ready for operation..

Sujal - ye...

Dr took sujal in ICU for operation....

Sujals phone rang...

no one picked up...

Kashish in a Dark Room.Tied to a chair....

A guy Stood next to her pointing a gun at her...

kashish - I dont understand..What have we done..?

man - We want the contract..!!

Kashish - No you cant have it.....

Man - well..its you or the contract

Kashish - I dont care..kill me now..!!! but leave sujal alone..!! please

Man - Shut up!!!Im claling your lover boy..

Man continues calling sujal up.

Man - hahaha kashish he doesnt care about you...hes gone..

Kashish - Kya matlaab hes gone..?

Man - Hes not picking the Damn phone up...hmmm lets leave him a threat voice msg...bring the girl here...

3 guys picked kashish up and brought her over...

Man - Hahaha sujal....You are not attending our calls....hmmm....So you dont love your kashish..teek hai..we will have her...Shes good looking....and very very........mmmmmm..........We will have such a good time together...wont we kahsish..?

Kashish - Sujal..sunoh...dnt give them the contract...

Man hit kashish..

Kashish - Oww...

Man - Shes very very naughty.....Sujal....Hmmm.. we are giving you half an hour..and we will call you back otherwise.....

Sound of gunshot..!!!

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After Operation..

Dr - You are completly fine mr garewal...althogh you will be on crutches now for a few weeks...

Sujal - Ok thanks..

Dr passed sujal his mobile..

Dr - ooo looks like someone has been trying to get to you..

Sujal looked and saw 5 missed calls..

Sujal Listened to his voice msg..

Sujal - Kya...omg...

Sujal left the hospital..and went to his hotel-Room to get the contract...

Man called Sujal up..

Sujal - I got the contract where do you want to meet..?

Man - Come outside the Royal blue Club...

Sujal - Now,?

Man -YEs now..

Sujal went to the Royal Blue Club...

sujal looked around for kashish....

He heard screaming..

Sujal - KASHISH...

Two men came up behind sujal..

Sujal turned around..

Sujal - Heres your contract kashish kahaan hai..?

Man - Here is your kashish...

Kashish ran to sujal and Hugged him...

The men left..

Kashish hugged sujal tightly...

Sujal stared...

He put his arms round Kashish slowly..

Kashish looked at Sujal..then looked at the crutches..!

Kashish - yeh subh..?

Sujal - woh..kuch nahiin..

Kashihs - sujal..jhoot maat boloh..?

Sujal - Please kashish leave it..

Kashish - liken..

Sujal - Please...

Sujal took Kashish to her hotel..

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Sujal stood on his balcony......

Song:Tera Intizaar from Rahul vaidya..

*He Started to remember his wife...*...

mujhe raat din ab tera intezaar hain - 2

batau tujhe kis tarah kitna pyar hain

tera intezaar hain mujhe tujhse pyar hain

mujhe tujhse pyar hain tera intezaar hain

*sujal saw her walking towards him....

He smiled...and pulled her hand forward....

He twirled her around...

and then he hugged her ......

FLASHBACK*

w*sujls Wife* - What is your problem...How could you...I never did it....

Sujal - Mujhe Subh kuch paatha hai.....tumne mujhe dhokha diya tha...

w- Nahiin sujall..mere baath nsunoh...!! maine tumhe koi dhoka nahiin diya...

Sujal - Just leave Now...

W- Teek hai..be like this....

Wife got her bags and left....

Sujal opened his eyes...

His wife had gone...

Tears filled his eyes...

HE looked over....and saw her walking....

FlashBACK....

Everyone sitting down in GAREWAL house...

Mama - Sujal tumne yeh teek nahiin kiya....woh...tumhai kabhi dhoka nahiin deh sakti..

Sujal - Liken mama..maine subh kuch....

Knock on the Door.....

Everyone looked..

Police.....

Police - Is this the GAREWAL hosue..?

Mama - haan kya hua..?

Police - Does Noori Garewal..Live in this house..?

Mama - haan kya hua..usko..

Sujal - Tell me what happened..?

Police - Im sorry..Shes had a accident...

Sujal - Kya matlaab..

Police - and shes sadly passed away,....

Sujal -KYA!!!....

Sujal opened his eyes....

tanhaaiya bhi hain bechainiya bhi hain - 2

masoom dil bhi hain majbooriya bhi hain

sadaye teri kyo mujhe aati nahi

woh yaade teri dil se kyo jaati nahi

tera intezaar hain mujhe tujhse pyar hain

mujhe tujhse pyar hain tera intezaar hain

Someone Tapped Sujals shoulders..

He looked behind and saw kashihs...

He turned around and KAshish gave him a hug...

Sujal hugged Kashish back...

le aayenge sanam tujhko manake ham - 2

paagal se ho gaye dil ko lagake ham

deewane ko toh ek naya koi naam de

subah pyar ki pyar ki koi sham de

tera intezaar hain mujhe tujhse pyar hain

mujhe tujhse pyar hain tera intezaar hain

Sujal Realised he was dreaming of kashish..

Sujal*thinking* - yeh main kya kara hoon...I love Noori*Sujals Wife*...and will always love her...main kashish se kabhi pyaar nahiin kar sakta....kabhi nahiin...

Kya sujal ko Kashish Se pyaar hogaya....?

Im sooo sorry for the late reply...

I wil promise to do this ff every 2-3 days...

I will not leave it looong..

thanks for all your replies...

xxxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
very good going.... 👏
continue soon.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
omg u added me then ahhhhhhhhhhhh thanks sweetie

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Part Eight...

Im ever so sorry for late reply...

Sujal walked over to his dressing table..

Tears dropped from his eyes..

He sat down....

Ghost of Sujal appeared..

One wearing white and one wearing black...

B - Sujal yeh tum kya karai hoo ? tum Kashish se pyaar nahiin karsaktai .. tum sirf aur sirf noori se pyaar karthai hoo..

W - Nahiin sujal..Aabh noori is duniya mein nahiin hai....bhool jou....usko..tum kashish se pyaar karthai hoo...

B - Sujal Nahiin..

W - Sujal tum kashish se pyaar karthai hoo..

B - liken noori..?

W - Noori margayee...

B - Nahiin...woh aabhi bhi mere yaadoon mein hain...

They start to fight....

Sujal - NAHIIIIINNNNNN.......

Sujal picked up a glass and threw it...

He got up and he packed his bags

there was a knock on the door.

Sujal - come in..

Kashish walked in..

Kashish - Yeh subh...?

Sujal - Tum..?

Kashish - Kya hua tum teek tou ho nah.?

Sujal - Haan main biqool teek hoon...

Kashish - Tou yeh tum kya karai hoo.?

Sujal - Main wapas ghaar ja ra hoon..

Kashish - Kyun..?

Sujal - Ufff... Just leave it ok..

Kashish - Sujal tum hai kya hogaya.?

Sujal - Kuch nahiin...Just please leave..

Kashish - Liken maine kiya kya..?

Sujal - Maine kahaa nahh leave it...you know what just leave right now!!!

Kashish - Liken..

Sujal - LEAVE

Tears dropped from Kashish's eyes and she walked out slowly..

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An hour later.....

Sujal called up the airport ....

Recep. - Hello..Dubai International Airport..how can i help.?

Sujal - um..Is there any flights for india..Mumbai..?

Recep - Ill just check..

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Recep - Im sorry sir..the next flight to mumbai is tomorrow..6pm..would you like to book that flight?

sujal - Yes thank you..

Recep - Name?

Sujal - Mr.Sujal Garewal.

Recep - Ok Thank you

Sujal - bye

Sujal walked over to the Hotel Bar...

He sat at the bar and began to drink.....

He closed his eyes as tears dropped down his cheek..

FlashBack..

*College*..

Sujals Friend - Arrey dekh Sujal..iss ladki ko...

Sujal - Whats wrong..?

Friend - Shes new yaar..chaal..

Sujal walked over to NewGirl..

Sujal*smoking*

Sujal tapped on the girls back..

Girl turned around..

Girl - Kya hai...?

sujal - So your new..?

Girl - haan tou..?

Sujal - Kuch nahiin..So would you like me to give you a tour..?

Girl - No thank you...

Sujal - Come on..

Girl - No..

Girl walked off..

Sujal pulled her hand ....

Girl - Nahiin..mera haath choro?

Sujal - Naam tou baathadou?

Girl - Noori....aabh khush...

Sujal smiled..

Sujal - Sujal..

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Valentines Day...

Sujal got a rose for noori..

Sujal - Noori..?

Noori - Haan kya..?

Sujal - Yeh louh..?

Sujal passed noori the flower...

Noori took the flower but the petals fell off * Flower was a prank *..

Sujal burst out laughing..

He ran..

Noori chased him...

Noori - Sujal .. tum bhi nah..aaj kai din tou yeh subh nahiin karoh nah..

Sujal smiled...

Sujal - Acha acha sorry baba..

Noori - So wheres my real present?

Sujal - ummm aankhain baand..?

Noori closed her eyes..

Sujal put a necklace around her neck....and kissed her..

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Sujal and Noori getting married..

Sujal putting the mangalsutra,sindoor...

going round fire....

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Nooris Death.........

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Kashish tapped sujal..

Kashish - Sujal..

Sujal opened his eyes...and saw kashish...

Kashish - Kya hua sujal...? tum itnai udaas kyun hoo..?

Sujal - Kuch nahiin

Sujal walked out the bar....into the car park...

Kashish followed..

Kashish - Sujal tum hai kya hogaya..I dont understand..Why are you behaving like this..?

Sujal - Kyunki...

Kashish - Kyunki kya..

Sujal - just leave me alone..

Kashish walked closer to Sujal..

Kashish - I wont go until you tell me whats wrong..?

Sujal pushed kashish to the wall..

Sujal - Leave me alone kashish i hate you OKAY..Main Tumse Nafraat kartha hoon!!

Kashish - Nahiin tum aisa nahiin karsaktai.. kyunki tumhai maloom hai kya main tumse bohot pyaar karthi hoon...aur tum bhi..

Sujal let go of kashish..

Sujal - You dont understand kashish!! main sirf noori se pyaar kartha hoon..

Kashish - Sujal...usai bhool jou...woh tumhari...ateeth thi...

Sujal - Kashish tum samjhe thi kyun nahiin ho..?

Kashish - Kya..?

Sujal - Main tumse pyaar nahiin karsakta....main noori koh dhoka nahiin dehsakta..

Kashish - tum noori ko dohka nahiin dehrai hoo.......

Sujal - You dotn understand kashihs..I love her....aur mere waaja se woh aaj yaahaan nahiin hai..

Kashish - Nahiin...sujal

Sujal - Kashish ITS MY FAULT I KILLED HER..

Will sujal ever forget noori..?

Did sujal kill noori by purpose?

Thanks for reading..x

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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
wow shezzy mast part too good ,awesome continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
that was awesome....tooo good.... 👏
continue soon..please..... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
hey...nice story...i jus read the whole ting now...the promo video was quite kool...keep it up.....n do update soon...tc....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
shezzy awesome promo saw it twice very nice 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
👏 👏

GR8 GOING,
U ARE A GR8 WRITER,
PLZ CONT SOON,
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
omg, they only took kashish for the contract!! stupid losers!! why wont sujal forget about noori!!


hope sujal realizes it's okay to live happily after ur spouce passes away...


continue soooooooonnn

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