Ek Adhuri Kahani-Starring S/K.Prt 11 pg13 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
another amazing part. Ur story is just to good. Pls post the next part soon just cant wait to know who is the lil girl and the woman in his life. Too interesting.

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Shezzy well done
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Hey babes jus caught up hun continue soon jaan

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
who were they and wat happend to them... i wonder

continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
really nice part 👏 ...waitng 2 know wht comes nxt...continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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niice sytry buddy...plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part Three...

Balcony

mehak - Di..?

Kashish - huh..?

Mehak - Kya hua..?

Kashish - Kuch nahiin..

Mehak - Nahiin di baathou..

Kashish - Woh..Um..Sir..kuch nahiin..Mahek tum sohajho

Mehak - teek hain di..

..................................................

Next Day..

Mauli - Di..are you going to work..?

Kashish - haan

Mauli - can you drop me off..

Kashish - Ye sure..

Kashish and Mauli walk to the car..

Kashish starts the car...

Car doesnt start..

Kashish - Ohh damn it..

Starts to Rain.....

Mauli - aww noo okay di i will go by taxi..

Kashish - teek hain..

Kashish walked to the Bus Stop...

Kashish smiled as she walked through the Rain with umberella...

Umberella flys off with the wind.....

Umberella hits the car..

Car stops..

Window opens...

Kashish - Sir Aap..

Sujal - Oh kashish tum..

Kashish - haan woh..my car broke down isliyeh...

Sujal - Oh acha chalo i will give you a lift..

Kashish - Okay..

Kashish and Sujal sitting down in car.......

Kashish - sir.....

Sujal - You dont have to call me sir call me sujal

he gave faint smile...

Sujal - Woh i have to go to the orphange ive bought some presents for children..

Kashish - Yeh sure..

At Orphanage...

Sujal - hi..

Kids - Hiiiii

Sujal - Yeh loh...presents..

Sujal gave the kids presents..

A lil girl comes up behind sujal...

lil girl - Papa....

Sujal looks....

He saw a little white stick in her hand...

A lady ran after the girl..

Lady - Hello, Mr Garewal..

Sujal looked at the lil girl...

Lady - Woh shes blind aur yeh har waqt apnai papa ka naam laythi hai

Sujal - oh..

Sujal picked the lil girl up and kissed her..

lil girl smiled - Papa!!!!

Sujal - Yeh loh chocolates..

Sujal fed the little girl chocolate..

Lil girl - Thank you Papa...

Sujal smiled..

Sujal put her down and walked off...

Tears fell down .....

Kashish pulled sujal's hand...

Kashish - Sir..Sujal You have to tell me now.....Yeh subh...?

Sujal - Main nahiin baathasakta kashish..

Kashish - Please sujal...

Lil girl runs up to sujal...

Sujal picked the Girl up ....

Kashish sat down ..

Lady sat next to Kashish....

Lady - hello..

Kashish - Hi..

Lady - So .. are you and Mr garewal..married..?

Kashish - Nahiin hes just my boss...liken yeh subh i dont understand..

Lady - Hasnt he told u..

Kashish - Nahiin.

Lady - 5 years ago....He lost his wife who was pregnant and he also lost his little girl who was only 4 years old...They were very close to him...and one day something happened and his wife left him.....aur phir...sujal found out she died...no one knows how she died...the police turned up and that was that.....since then sujal felt very guilty and still remembers them every day.....

Tears filled Kashish's eyes....

Lady - You got to help him kashish!!! You got to Help him..otherwise..He will break down.

Kashish went to sujal...

Sujal - Chalai...

Kashish - Haan....

In the Car....

Kashish looked at sujal...

Flash back...

Lady - You got to help him kashish!!! You got to Help him..otherwise..He will break down.

Tears filled kashish's eyes...

Sujal - hey hey kashish kya hua..

Kashish gave a faint smile..

Kashish - Kuch nahiin ........

Will Kashish Help him.....?

How will she help sujal..?

Will Sujal let kashish help him....?

To be Cont...

Thanks for all your replys 😃

xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
coool parts...... 😃 cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
babes cont soon dat wicked me intreged yaar plz 😃

Luvz ya

Luv Noori 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Edited by Shezzy12 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
wonderful part. Psl cont soon. Just cant wait

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