KAISA YEH PYAAR H??? (RTMC FF) completed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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new promo

abhi hugged mahi tightly...

aarav fumed with anger to saw her with abhi n throw away the gift he held in his hand

next scene

mahi- sir aapko ghar jana chahiye sab aapka wait kr rhe honge...aaj aarav ji ka birthday h na..

abhi...han hum dinner par fir kabhi chalenge ok

nxt scene

mahi tried to call aarav bt he disconect her call


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part 16- pg 1 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497465
part 17- pg 2 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497465&TPN=2
part 18- pg 3 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497465&TPN=3
part 19- pg 3 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497465&TPN=3
part 20- pg 4 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497465&TPN=4
part 21- pg 5 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497465&TPN=5
part 22- pg 6 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497465&TPN=6
part 23- pg 7 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497465&TPN=7
part 24- pg 8 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497465&TPN=8
part 25- pg 9 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497465&TPN=9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Wow uvagain start ... So nice
I m waiting for ud ...
Kaisa ye pyaar H ??
I read all ud its amazing I like Angree rajat look so nice ...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for full update dii..🤗..😃..Update soon..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow di nice promo...and welcome back di
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello everyone😛
part 16

he opened his eyes -''what are u...yeh kehne ke liye itni raat ko tumne phone kiya h are u mad??

mahi widened her eyes n irately said--''ek toh im wishing u upar se aap mujhe thank u ki jagah daant rhe h''

aarav-''oh really thank u so much...n yeah''he said

mahi listened to him n smiled softly-''yes''

aarav-''gudnite..sone do mujhe''he said irately n disconnected the phone...he picked up blanket n covered himself-''mad''

mahi looked at phone n widened her eyes-''kya..hitler hitler hitler.''she shouted at the phone n kept it aside
after that laid herself on bed n closed her eyes

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next morning

she clutched her beg at one side n looked here n there to find aarav...she has to asked him about last night why was he so rude with her ...she only wanted to wish him n that's it...she was lost in her thoughts when she strucked to abhi-oh sorry'' abhi said with smiling face-''how are u mahi''

mahi smiled too --im fine how are u''
abhi-'' mahi u are asking for something yesterday what was that?''

mahi about to say when she thought something n said-''nothing kuch important nhi tha''n adjust her beg to her side abhi looked at her she was glowing even more ...he turned his gaze to other to made himself comfortable he has to say it today..he thought no not today n said -''mahi im sorry us din ke liye''
mahi-''its ok sir me wo sab bhul chuki hu aap bhi bhul jayeye''

abhi smiled finally-''ok the ek sorry dinner to banta h''

she looked at him strangely-''dinner''

abhi said hesitatingly-''pls don't say no nhi to mujhe lagega ki tumne mujhe maff nhi kiya''

mahi said uncomfortably-''mein kaise aa''before she completed her sentence he said ok 8'o clock at blue moon restaurant''

he smiled at her last time n left

she clutched her beg more tightly-''haayo rabba mein kaise jayungi maa ko kya bolungi''

she was walking n lost in her thought when her shoulder clashed to his...she looked at him n raised her brows...he frowned at her-''tumhe dikhta nhi h''

mahi stammered n siad-''wo mein kuch soch rhi thi toh...im...im sorry''

aarav smirked-''oh really ...''she looked at him puzzled the h said-''tum soch bhi ho mujhe laga tumhare pass wo h hi nhi''

she made her face n glowered at him-''kya nhi h mere pass''

aarav -''dimaag'' she looked at him questionably..he looked at her puzzled face-''nervous system, brain kuch samajh aya''
mahi gritted her teeth n left without looking at him

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aarav was busy on his laptop when mahek entered in the cabin-''sir..i have made this''
n show her file to him

aarav looked at file without looking at her-''hmm nice mr john ko mail kardo''

mahek looked at his face n smiled to saw such a handsome boy first time in her life...he was smart ,intelligent n most important he was the owner of company...she has to do it any how she has made him fall for her..but how??her thought came to a halt when he said-''excuse me' she looked at his raised brow..she gulped n said-''yes sir''

aarav said rudely-''leave''she composed herself ..how could he say like that to her.. she thought for while n made her way out of the cabin with saddened face

at evening

mahi looked at empty road for a bus when his car came to a abrupt halt..she looked at him through mirror n suddenly turned her face to other...she was fuming with anger when he looked at her lovingly-''sit''

she turned her face -''no thanks.. i have two legs...so mein chal sakti hun''

he didn't reacted on her word n came out from the car ..she widened her eyes if he again pulled her up in his arms then what would happen there was so much people around...she walked backward slowly with raising nervousness...he came close to her-''u r right ...agar tum nhi baithi to mein''she interrupted quickly-''nhi''she almost shout when all the people looked at not so friendly couple..she looked all around n walked towards the car..he smirks n moved behind her

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she looked at him n frowned-''now u are feeling proud na''

he said abruptly-''yeah''

she turned her face towards window when he said -''don't make face...today is my birthday''

she looked at him n smiled-''accha to mein kya karun''n frowned again

aarav without looking at her...hesitated for a while n said quickly-''i want...''

she raised her brow-''what''

aarav with little shyness said -''i want to be with u today''

her anger vanished instantly..she too felt shyness n looked at window...she looked at moving houses n trees through window...felt relaxed inside to know his feeling for her...she smiled forcefully pretending not so convinced-''mein hi kyu''

aarav looked at her irately-''i don't know''

she nodded negatively''no''he raised his brows-''ok u want me to answer''

she nodded again..he stopped the car-''ok then''

she clutched her bed n said shockingly-''aap kya karne wale h''he moved closer to her-''abhi pata chal jayega''he moved closer to her face she nervously looked at his face n said quickly-''mera ghar aa gya''n opened the seat belt she quickly opened the door n felt relaxed
she moved towards her house when her phone rang...she put out the phone from the beg n frowned to saw his name-''hitler''she turned n looked at him while keeping the phone on ear

aarav-''hi''

she smiled-''ab kya h''

aarav-''i want my birthday gift''she widened her eyes-''what aap ko sharam nhi aati''

aarav with frown-'kyu apna birthday gift bhi nhi maang sakta mein...he stopped n pretending to be remembering something-''excuse me tum yeh to nhi soch rhi ho na ki i want a kiss''

she gulped-''n..n..nhi''n turned around..he smiled for a while n said-''raat 8 'o clock i'll pick u...mahi shocked to listen him-''par mein ''

aarav-''meine tumhe pucha nhi h''she again tried to said''but mein''

he interuppted again-''just shut up mein 8 baje ayunga''she frowned at him...and he left her alone in another second



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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg..what will mahi do now when she has same time date with both brothers...cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely part..👏..😃
Mahi wished Aarav @12 in ni8..aur Hitler ne thanks v nhi kaha aur daant v diya..😆..
Ye Abhi na..I want to strangle him..q apni hone wali bhabhi par core daal rhe ho..aur udhar ye Mehek..2no side salon ko mila do dii..leads k raaste k patthar..😡..😔
It means dono ne 1 tym par Mahi ko ready rehne ko kaha h..I am sure wo Aarav k sath Jana chahte hue v nhi ja payegi..😳..and then again Aarav will get a high temper..😳
I loved Aarav's dialogues n Mahi's expressions..car scene was lovely....
Waiting for next part dii..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I had one big smile while reading this. Thank you so much for updating this.
Aww Mahi wished Aarav but vo hitler ka hitler hi rhega...but hmara ye hitler kitna cute hai ...hehe.

So abhi wants to have a dinner with her ans so does Aarav. Ab kya karegi Mahi?
Definitely vo aarav ke sath jaegi..but kaise?

Heje unka phone convo...lol Aarav ko kiss chahiye ya nhi ye to aarav hi jane hume zrur unka romance chahiye. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 17
she was looking at main door of restaurant impatiently-''hayo rabba dono ek saath aa gye to kya karungi mein? then a waiter came to her-''mam this is for u'' while handing her a rose ...she smiled at him-''thank u'' he bowed n returned to his work..she looked at rose strangely it had a chit writing something on it-''a rose for a rose''she puzzled-''kisne bheja hoga yeh''

''maine''she turned to follow the voice-''abhi sir aap''

abhi came nearer-''yeah...koi or aane wala tha kya''he asked while smiling at her

she nodded quickly-''nhi''

abhi-''actually mene pura dinner plan kiya tha but aaj aarav ka birthday and i have to arrange many thing so dinner kabhi or kar lenge abhi chalte h''

she nodded quickly-''yeah right ..aap jaiye me chali jayungi''as she move forward n stumble with chair n fell in his arms...he tightly held her-''are u ok''she cowered awkwardly with his touch on her hands-''yeah''he looked at face which turned pale which he knew

aarav scowled behind them who witnessed their hug...he turned to move away but he stopped and looked at mahi who was smiling at abhi...she was always happy with abhi everytime he made her smile...his thought came to a halt and he walked away without looking at her
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abhi quickly removed his hand-''mein tumhe ghar chod deta hu waise bhi tum meri wajah yaha ayi thi sorry''

mahi smiled-''its ok sir mein chali jayungi mujhe yaha pass me kuch kaam h aap jaeye''at last abhi agreed-''ok then fine''
he left her alone...
mahi quickly put out her phone n dailed his number but he disconnected her call...she tried again but it was again disconnected...-''shayad raste me honge''she sat on chair -''thoda wait kar leti hu''

after 1 hr

amita looked at her son who was walking inside the house angrily-''aarav''

he looked at his mother n shocked to saw so many guest around there...whole mansion was decorated with flowers n lights everyone had a smile on their faces...he stared all of then-''oh god''

his mother came nearer n kissed his forehead-''happy birthday my son''he hugged her mother-''thank u mom''his father .abhi n the guest wished him...he thanked them without smiling...his mother looked at his weary face-''what happen is everything ok...at least smile na...they all come here for u''he whispered -''i told u i hate this nonsense''his mother said quietly-''aarav bas thodi der''he was about to opposed when his brother abhi said-''aarav pls''

aarav looked at his brother calmly-''ok''
after sometime everyone wished him and aarav cut his birthday cake...amita and avinash were happy n smiled at each other they were celebrating his birthday after so many years...this moment was very special for them...but some where they knew aarav was disturbed by something..he was looking at his phone continuously...abhi went towards him-''what happen ''

aarav put his phone in his pocket-''nothing''

abhi put his hand on his shoulder-''u can share with me''aarav smiled at him-''there is nothing bhai''

abhi-''are u sure;

aarav-''mahi''

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''kaha thi itni der se''mahek asked her while arranging plates in the kitchen...mahi put the spoon of rice in plate-''wo office ka kuch kaam tha''

mahek questionably-''itni raat ko time dekha h 10 baje h''

mahi looked at clock she was waiting for him...she waited 2 hrs but he had not come...of course he was busy in his birthday party abhi had told her that he had to arrange aarav's birthday party...mahek scowled at her-''are u sleeping mahi''

mahi boggled-''nhi wo''

seema-''kya hua ''while entered in the kitchen...mahek complained -''wo 2 ghante se bahar ghum rhi thi maa''

seema looked at her daughter-''beta wo kaam se gyi thi..ab jao or so jao''

mahek tapped her foot n left while scowling at her...

mahi entered in her room n dialed his number again she closed her eyes but again that engage tune-''hayo rabba kya aap itne busy h ki mera phone uthane ka bhi time nhi h''

aarav looked at her number..there was 15 missed call which he had not picked up...he threw phone on the bed n sat on couch...

phone rang again he stared at phone n this time he picked it up-''hello''

mahi while grinning-''aap mera phone kyu nhi utha rhe h or mujhe bulakar aap aye bhi nhi...pata h 2 hrs wait kiya mene...but koi nhi aapki party kaisi thi''she question him without even breathing...he simply listened her n not reply her

after not hearing his voice she pouted-''aarav ji ...hello''

aarav-''gdnt''n disconnected the phone
Edited by tejjo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the update.
Kya hai ye yar abhi baat baat pe kyu beech me tapak jata hai . had hai yar.
kab milege aarav aur mahi?
and Mahi is so sweet she actually waited for aarav for two long hours. aur fir bhi koi shikwa nhi..hotho pe gila nhi.
Aarav please try to understand the situation.

Oh and btw Happy Birthday Aarav! 😳
update soon. :)

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