KAISA YEH PYAAR H??? (RTMC FF) completed - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
part 19

he broke the kiss and looked at her face..her cheeks were wet ...hairs were all messy and eyes tried to find out his answer..he rubbed his thumb on her cheeks-''don't cry ever''

she smiled at him and hugged him...he embrace her tightly...after few minutes her phone rang...they looked at phone which was vibrating on bench...she quickly picked it-''im coming maa''after spoke few more words to her mother she cut the call-''i have to go''

aarav frowned a little-''really u have to go...i thought u will spend night with me''

mahi opened his mouth with disgust-''wht..u r such a shameless person''and made her face

he smirked -''yes i am''

she hit her fist on his chest-''you''but he grasped her hands soon n pulled her closed...she glared at his eyes while he lovingly entwined his fingers with hers...he kissed her finger tips...she melted to saw his affection for her..she shivered with his touch ...she was trying hard to say something but her heart beating fast as his lips reached to her palm...she shyly turned her face down...he kissed her palm softly and looked at her face...he thought for something and said-''come i drop u''she nodded quickly...as her heart beat came to normal

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she came out of car...and looked at him-''bye..''he gazed at her lovingly-''bye..n take care''she smiled and nodded

he went towards his car when she said-''aarav ji''

he turned back-''what??''

she came closer-''kal holi h'' she said with excited face...but soon her excitement faded to saw his expressionless face

aarav-''so??''

she pat her forhead loudly-''hayo rabba..aarav ji kal ke din sab ek dusre ko colors lagate h and sweet khakar day ko celebrate karte h''

aarav listened her carefully and after her pause he replied-''i know...yeh stupidity yaha hoti but abroad me aisa kuch nhi hota''

mahi--''but yeh india h abroad nhi or india me abroad se jyada acche festivals hote h u have to celebrate this festival''

aarav-''i don't know about these festivals..i just know about one festival''

mahi smiled-''really..konsa festival''she asked eagerly

aarav grinned-''kiss day...will u celebrate with me''her smiled turned into a frown -''aapse to baat karna hi bekaar h''she turned back n moved towards her house

he grinned-''arey ek baar celebrate karke dekho u will enjoy it''he said loudly while laughing loudly to saw her wrinkled forehead

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next morning

amita came to his room when she shocked to saw him sleeping..he always wake up so early but now it was 8 and he was still sleeping

amita-''aarav come on wake up its 8 am''

aarav put the blanket n covered his face-''pls mom''

amita smiled at his childish act-''aarav we have to go''

aarav-''where?''under the blanket

amita-''at mahi's place"

he woke up quickly-''really''with smile amita noticed his smile after so many days..she too smile-''yes''

aarav-''why''

amita--'aj holi h n now they are our relative so wish karne to jana padega na..get ready ''

he nodded quickly n went into the washroom...she noticed his cheerful face...is everything sorted out between them she thought when abhi came nearer-''mom come on lets go ''he dressed up in white kurta and a stall around his neck

amita-''wait aarav is coming''

abhi asked shockingly-''what??? aarav is coming''he smiled-''thats a good news''

amita too grinned-''yes it is''

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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
hehe arav ka kiss day aur mahi ki holi agar dono ek sath mnae jaue to ek din ek hi jagah kitna mza aega..but sabse zyada acha to ye hua ki dono ki misundrrstanding door ho gyi ...but ab ptob hai abhi ki. uska kya kiya jaye...i hope vo koi prob na create kre...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
This is lovely..
Will read all the chapter ..
Then comment..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Amazing story dear..
Loving aarav..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
part 20

as she heard the door bell she rushed towards the door with roller in her hand...she opened the gate and her lips curled into a beautiful smile to saw him...he was there in front of her as usual in his blazer and jeans...but on the right side abhi was smiling to saw her ...her smile faded as she saw his parents and abhi...

her mother looked at the door and welcome them with wide smile...they gathered there in the hall and wished each other -'happy holi''

mahek was very excited ...because this was her first holi with her love of life aarav...she was standing behind her mother continuously gazing at aarav...but his eyes searching for someone else...but where is he...he came here just because of her and she just decided to irritate him...soon his irritation turned into anger as he saw her coming with colors...


she had two plates of colors...she gave colors to her mother and they played holi with each other in the ground of chawl..there were people splashing water...smear faces...and hugging each other to wish holi...

and he was still there on corridor of chawl looking at people laughing..playing..eating...and here he was standing like an idiot...

mahi playfully smear the face of amita and giggled...amita too respond and hugged her..

soon her eyes turned up to saw him...he was standing there folding his hands to chest...as usual irritated face growling eyes...what to do with this boy..she thought...suddenly she saw mahek came beside him with colors...is she going to color him..oh no what if he yelled at her sister...but to her surprise he didn't turned to saw mahek..he just standing like a statue just looking at her...no no gazing at her...at this thought she blushed but suddenly she sensed two palms on her cheeks smearing her face...may be some one of her friend she turned to take revenge but stiffened at her place to saw abhi there ...abhi smiled at her-''happy holi mahi...''but soon his smile vanished to saw her face...which was looking pale even after covered with colors-''i hope u don't mind''

she somehow compose herself-''its ok...and...happy holi sir''

abhi felt awkward to hear sir from her mouth...they are going to marry soon and she still not so frank with him...

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mahek smiled-''happy holi sir''she said cheerfully and little louder...he scowled at her-''im not deaf''

for a moment she scared from his gaze but who cares she has to impress him any how..she said softly-''happy holi''

he rolled his eyes and turned his gaze...she put some color in her hand-''can i colo...''but he cut off in middle-''don't even think''

she backed her hand ..he is so rude with her...she stepped back and soon joined her mother..

mahi excused herself and go upward to wash her face...she splash water on her face...and found two eyes staring at her...she smiled at the mirror and turned and here he was standing in the side if door-''are u done with this stupid festival''

she smiled naughtily..she put some color in hand from side table-''not yet''she moved towards him with slow steps hiding her hands behind her waist...he sensed her mischief and backed off-''mahi don't try to put that color on me''

she giggled and moved a bit faster...he struck to couch of hall and fell on it...-''mahi stop it i don't like it''

she through all color of her fist on her...he looked at himself painted in blue color...he wiped his cheek and scowled at her-''i told u that''
she cut in middle-''that..that what???huh''

she is gone now...he rushed behind him to catch her before she ran towards bathroom...as she tried to close the door...he put the hand in between and opened it...she stepped back and hit with wall...he smirk at her-..''ab kya krogi''and raised his brows

she rolled her yes to seek answer but her brain stopped at this moment...he was very close there is no gap between us...she thought and whispered-''koi aa jayega''

aarav-''i don't care''he replied straightly.

he bend a little to made her shivered...she squeezed her fist and close her eyes...and there his lips captured hers...thousands of butterflies creating havoc in her stomach...she didn't respond for moment but soon she joined him and kissed his lips lovingly...he impressed with her and opened his eyes...she looked at his closed eyes and bend to kissed them...her fist got opened and her curled around his neck...he too grasped her waist tightly and hugged her

mahek stiffened at her place to saw them together...he had embraced her so called sister...no aarav can't do this to me..he is mine...she fumed with anger and shouted-''mahi''

mahi jumped to heard her sister voice she quickly pulled her away from his grip...he stood there annoyed with her sister's behaviour..idiot girl spoiled everything

mahek came nearer to mahi and slapped her hard on her face..-''how can you do this''as anger came in her eyes...aarav greeted his teeth and grasped her hand-''how dare u to touch her''mahek looked at aarav-''sir ''

aarav-''don't touch her again...if u do then i will kill u for sure''mahek shocked to heard that-''how can u say those words to me''

mahi tried to loosed his grip-''aarav ji di ko chodiye pls''

he looked at her face..her cheek became red...he glared at mahek-''i swear to her i will kill u next time''he loosed his grip

""what is happening there"'everyone came there and confused to saw him angry...

aarav left that place angrily when abhi and his parents followed him...

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''why are u there in my family..u have snatched everything from me..my maa papa my love everything ''she cried out loudly..mahi came nearer to console her she pushed her away seema grasped mahi and yelled at mahek-''what are u saying??what are u doing?? are u out of ur mind''

mahi rushed to her room and cried silently...sanjay and seema was confused-''hua kya h''

mahek-''i love aarav and yeh mahi usse bhi mujhse chinna chahti h''

they were hell shocked to hear this...seema came nearer to mahek-''mahi aisa nhi kar sakti mahek...shayad wo dono ek dure ko pasand karte honge''

mahek cried a bit louder-''nahi maa ..i love him i love him alot''she hugged her mother..seema and sanjay was worried for their daughters...what is happening with his family sanjay deep in thoughts when seema put her hand on his shoulder-''everything will be fine. main dono se baat karungi''

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mahek came to mahi's room...she was sleeping ...how can she sleep peacefully...she yelled at her-''mahi''

mahi shivered and stood up from the bed-''di''she looked at clock it was 2 o' clock

''i want aarav at any cost''she said straightly

mahi lowered her gaze-''di i ...l...lov...love him''mahek pulled her face upward-''i don't know anything''

mahi almost pleaded in front of her-''di pls...''

mahek folded her hands-''ok fine...i killed myself because i can't live without him''

mahi stiffened at her place-''what are saying di??mahek moved towards kitchen and found knife..mahi followed her and saw knife in her hand..she shivered and walked towards her-''di don't''and hold her hands to avoid any injury

mahek-''leave my hand mahi''

mahi-''ok fine''mahek stopped-''what did u say''

mahi wiped her tears-''i will talk to him'

mahek threw the knife and looked at her-''pls tell him i love him alot''
mahi nodded and left her sister alone...

she walked in her room..sat on the floor and cried ..fresh tears rolled out from her eyes-''im sorry aarav ji''

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he looked at her face and caress her cheek-''what happened..she did anything to u??''he asked worriedly

she nodded negatively but her eyes still lowered

-''then why u called me here...at this isolated place''he looked around and then her..

she looked at him-''if i want something then will u give me''

he smiled and came closer-''just tell once''

mahi-''promise...''she expand her palm

aarav-''ok done promise''he put his palm on her

mahi hesitantly-''pls marry to my sister''he pulled his hand away-''mahi if u irritating me then thanks im irritate with ur nonsense''

mahi-''u promise me''she pleaded

aarav-''are u serious???''he thought she was doing it to made him irritate..bt her eyes saying something else

aarav pulled her face up-''what happened tell me''

mahi -''u promise me...so u have to marry her pls..''she said sternly

anger rushed in his eyes-''if this thing u want then im sorry i won't do this''

mahi-''pls aarav ji..she loves u very much''

aarav-''but i love u damn it''he shouted at her

tears rolled out from her eyes...aarav looked at her-''mahi stop it''

mahi-''pls marry her pls''

aarav looked at her innocent face..anger filled in his eyes-''get lost''

mahi-''pls''

aarav-''i said get lost''

she wiped her tears and moved towards the road...she turned to saw him...but he was very angry...



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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Ufff ye Mahek pagal hai kya? pyar ka matlab pana kb se ho gya? idiot...nd apni hi behn ko aise laise koi kr sakta hai..
.? huh...stupid...
itna acha moment tha arav aur mahi ka...bigad ke rakh diya...😡
nd arav ka gussa...
..khtarnak...i hope vo kuch 😊 kre is mahek ka...aur mahi ko le jaye apne sath...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
I just hate this mahek..
And poor mahi falls in her trap..
No plz aarav dont agree plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Finally.. I am able to comment here.. & I am feeling extremelyyy happpyyy :D :)
Lovely part, although a li'l bit saddening in d last!!
OMG..kya entry thi Aarav ki, masha-allah..Mahi ki nazar to hat hi nhi rhi hogi..but abhi k presence ne sab bigaad kr rakh diya :p
Haww..this is not fair dii, dono ko ek dusre ko color lgana tha na, but ye exchange kaha se ho gya.. hate abhi-mehek both >:(..ek chipku h to dusri chudail, really i hate mehek much more than abhi :v
Oh my my..I loved ArHi scene sooo muchhh *blush*.. U should write such scenes more often dii..;) :)
But ye kya..mehek ne sab kch gobar kr diya..eww, how can she even think that Aarav will accept her, shadi to dur ki baat h wo dekhega v nhi uski taraf..loll :v
Ohh, ye kya,mehek ab Mahi k bholepan ka fayda uthayegi & she will as usual sacrifice her love for her sister..koi Mahi ko samjhao, Aarav loves U not ur sister..I fully support Aarav's actions!!
Update soonish dii, waiting & wondering what will happen next..:).. hugs :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Asyalover

stupid, shelfish mehek...poor aarhi

thanks for comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 16lvkkk

Finally.. I am able to comment here.. & I am feeling extremelyyy happpyyy :D :)

Lovely part, although a li'l bit saddening in d last!!
OMG..kya entry thi Aarav ki, masha-allah..Mahi ki nazar to hat hi nhi rhi hogi..but abhi k presence ne sab bigaad kr rakh diya :p
Haww..this is not fair dii, dono ko ek dusre ko color lgana tha na, but ye exchange kaha se ho gya.. hate abhi-mehek both >:(..ek chipku h to dusri chudail, really i hate mehek much more than abhi :v
Oh my my..I loved ArHi scene sooo muchhh *blush*.. U should write such scenes more often dii..;) :)
But ye kya..mehek ne sab kch gobar kr diya..eww, how can she even think that Aarav will accept her, shadi to dur ki baat h wo dekhega v nhi uski taraf..loll :v
Ohh, ye kya,mehek ab Mahi k bholepan ka fayda uthayegi & she will as usual sacrifice her love for her sister..koi Mahi ko samjhao, Aarav loves U not ur sister..I fully support Aarav's actions!!
Update soonish dii, waiting & wondering what will happen next..:).. hugs :*

thank u dear for ur comment
loved it...🤗

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