KAISA YEH PYAAR H??? (RTMC FF) completed - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Mahi.why are doing this girl???
Aarav loves you so much..

Love you arav ...you did right..[/QUOTE thank u dear for ur lovely comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

Omg! Can it get any better?? Abhi knows about them.now...bihgedt tension relieved...yayyy

and this Mahek..yr ye ladki adopted hai kya? ? 😆pta ni kya khati hai...ufff...kitni selfish and matlabi ladki hai ye...huh...hell me bhi jagah nhi milegi...isko...
But Mahi amd Arav omg...so cute they are...and Arav's first puja and vo bhi aise...hayyeee...itna acha shagun...!!!
Go Aarav...you are the best!!! AravMahi forever...!!! 😳

thank u dear for ur lovely comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
part 22

mahi stunned and shocked at the same time..how could he do such thing in front of every one...his anger was his biggest enemy...in anger he can do anything...amita and avinash looked at each other tried to understood what was just happened...seema and sanjay was confused about his behavior...whom he love??...they couldn't understand...

mahek turned to saw mahi head which was all red with vermillion...she looked at aarav angrily--''u shouldn't have done that''

aarav frowned at her-''really ...now what will you do??''

he glared at her angrily-''u know what ...u need a psychiatrist...u are a psycho ''she boggled by his words and looked at mahi-''now u r happy na..."

mahi moved ahead to made her understand the situation but she refused and pushed her back...seema rushed towards mahi and hold her hand-'are u fine''she nodded while wobbling on her feet...

aarav looked at mahi and after investigate that she is fine he looked at his parents who was equally confused as mahi's parents...-''im waiting outside''and then he looked at mahi-'u also ...come soon''and walked out the temple angrily...

sanjay looked at amita and avinash regretfully -''we are very sorry ...mahek is very stubborn since childhood''

amita and avinash -''its ok sanjay ji...but mahek and aarav's relationship has no future..he loves mahi''

sanjay looked at them shockingly while mahi regretfully lowered her eyes...seema knew that she could do anything for her family...even she can sacrifice her love..her feeling for her family...but this time she can't let her sacrifice her love for her stupid and stubborn sister...

she cupped her face-''do u love him''

mahi looked at her mother's face and then mahek's face who was all broken by his rejection...seema turned her face towards hers-''don't look at her..just tell me...do u love him''

she didn't understand what to say her mother...when she didn't speak her mother hugged her teary eyed daughter because she knew her answer...

abhi and his parents reached towards car when he looked at mahi who was walking beside her mother...

seema came forward and said softly-''aarav ji...she is not only my daughter she is my life...im giving u my life..pls take care of her''

amita and avinash smiled at her-'don't worry seema ji...she is our daughter also...but why are sending her with us''

seema-''she is aarav's wife now...so she should be there with u ''mahi looked at her mother face with wet eyes-''maa why are u doing this..seema caressed her face-''u r his wife now...and don't cry ..i want u to be happy always..go''she hugged her mother-''i don't want to go''her mother whispered-''pls mahi for me go with him'' seema made her sit in the car with aarav and wiped her tears-''don't cry now''

abhi amita and avinash also sat after wished them and drove towards their mansion...

mahek looked at her mother angrily-''i don't believe this..my own mother can do this to me''she cried and walked out with teary eyes...

sanjay consoles seema who was all broken by her daughter's behaviour...sanjay put his hand on her shoulder-''seema why u send her with them''

seema looked at her husband's confused face-''mahi need happiness sanjay...she always tried to make us happy...she always tried to win her sister's love...but she didn't get it...why always she suffered??why always she sacrifice??she is not our real daughter but she always give us respect..happiness when our own daughter busy in her own life...aarav loves her...and mahi also love him then what's wrong in this...she also deserves happiness in her life...i send her there because i know mahek will again try to manipulate her and she will agree for her happiness''

sanjay nodded-'u r right seema..i hope mahi will get everything in her life''seema smiled through her tears-''she will get it''

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''what r u doing mom''amita put the vessel on floor filled with rice...she glared at him-'aarav keep quiet''

he rolled his eyes-''but what are u doing''amita smiled at mahi and signaled her to pushed the vessel with her right foot..she did as she command and entered in the mansion with aarav...amita hugged him and the mahi-'god bless u''

abhi came forward and stopped aarav who was rushed towards his room-''where r u going''

aarav-''in the room..im tired''

avinash replied from behind-''ok go and rest''

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in the evening

amita made her wore a beautiful pair of bangles which she has chosen for aarav's bride...mahi looked at the bangles and smiled at her-''its beautiful''

amita-''just like u''mahi blushed on her compliment...

amita-''i know aarav is very rude with u today..but wo aisa hi h..u have to bear him now''she giggled to look amita's face-''i know maa..don't worry i'll manage''

amita kissed her forehead -''it feels special when u said maa to me..thank u ''

mahi smiled at her when avinash came in the room-''so what are u doing here..go and rest ..it's a very hectic day today...''

amita made her way out of the room with mahi...mahi felt nervous while moving towards his room...amita clutched her palms-''don't be nervous beta...he is ur husband now...''

amita opened the door of his room slightly and signaled her to enter the room...she nervously nodded and entered in the room...amita closed the door behind her..

she was very happy today..after so many up and downs...finally aarav married to a girl who was so sweet and caring by nature..she is the only girl who handled her son...she knew it is difficult for her to live with him but she will always support her in any situation...with this thought she moved towards her room

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------as she entered in the room..her eyes brightened with happiness..this room was so beautiful and well designed..everything was on place ...he lived here in this room which was very beautiful and big than her room...

she looked all around but he was no where-''where he is''

then suddenly she shivered as he came out from the washroom with towel in his hand...he looked at her once and turned his face...she knew he was angry with her..she went near to him-''are u angry with me''

he rubbed his wet hairs-''no ..im very happy..because u had almost succeed to ruin my and ur life''

she curved her lips-''sorry''

he throw the towel on bed-''that's it... just sorry ...when i arranged ur marriage with bhai...u lectured me that u r not a toy and i have no right to decide ur life...then what about me...how could u even think that i'll marry ur that psycho sister''

she lowered her eyes-''i know i did wrong...but i was helpless..she tried to suicide''

he greeted his teeth angrily-''so u decide to sacrifice ur love for her...wow u r so kind...''she felt tears in her eyes-''sorry''

he looked at her guilty face-''u know what ...i just hate u''he walked towards the bed and laid on it angrily...

she sat on couch and wiped her face by back of her hand...

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aarav turned to other side of bed and opened his eyes to saw her..she was sleeping on couch she was not comfortable on couch as she wriggling continuously...he went nearer and picked her up and made her lay on bed...he covered her with blanket and laid on the other side...he looked at her face which was shining in moon light..her rosy petals was blabbering something but he didn't understand...soon he fell asleep...


next morning

as soon as she opened her eyes...her mouth widened to saw him so close...no actually she was lying on his chest...she corrected her thought while shaking her head and got up quickly...

she pulled her dupatta on shoulder carefully when she felt his gaze on herself...she looked at him by corner of her eyes...

he glared at her-''yeah..check ur self carefully...if u have not raped''

she widened her eyes when he got up and went inside the washroom..

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she put vermillion in her mang and smiled to saw her reflection in mirror..she looked complete today with this red color...she wore bangles and put her dupatta on shoulder...

amita came inside the room and looked at her-''mahi where is aarav''

mahi -''maa i don't know...after freshen he went somewhere''

amita -''oho this boy is so careless''

suddenly he entered in the room while talking on phone..amita looked at him with fake anger-''where were u..i was waiting for u''

aarav disconnect the call-''why''

amita opened the small box and gave him mangalsutra...''mahi ko pehna do ''he frowned at her-''why?''

amita-''just do as i said''
he put it in her neck while she was smiling at him..he ignored her smile and moved aside...

amita glowered at him and then looked at mahi-''mahi come downstairs soon''she nodded obediently

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in the evening

mahi put his files carefully when he entered in the room tiredly...he sat on couch when she came near with glass of water-''tired''

he gulped the water thirstily but didn't reply..she came more closer to him-''still angry''

aarav removed his blazer and then his tie-''i don't want to talk u..so pls don't disturb me''she put the glass and walked out the room sadly...

she cut the vegetables for dinner when amita noticed her sad face-''what happened mahi''

mahi looked at her -''nothing maa''

amita put her hand on her shoulder-''aarav ne kuch kaha''

her face became drowsy-''wo kuch kehte hi to nhi h''she whispered under her breath...

amita giggled to heard her words...mahi looked at her -''maa he is still angry''

amita-''i know but don't worry he will be fine soon''

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he was working on laptop when she came and sat close to him...he glared at her-''what??'

she nodded negatively--''nothing''

he turned his face and resume his work..she gaze at his face lovingly after so many day she is with him and he is behaving so rude...she thought and said -''sorry''

his fingers stopped suddenly but soon he resumed his work..she understand that he will not forgive her so easily..

she came more closer-''i can do anything for ur forgiveness ''

now that is something interesting he thought and looked at her face-''ok go and wear this''

her eyes got widened to saw picture of a model wearing two piece...she nervously looked at him-''i...i can't wear this''

aarav-''ok fine then go and sleep don't waste my time''

she looked at him with pleaded eyes-''aarav ji..i..pls ..i..i feel uncomfortable to wearing this...other than this i can do everything''

aarav looked at her eyes-''no i want this only''she helplessly looked at him and walked toward washroom with slow steps..how could she do this..her thoughts came to a halt when he yanked her towards-''u don't need to do this..''

she smiled finally as he caressed her face lovingly-''i don't want u to wear anything in which u r not comfortable...''she hugged him tightly
Edited by tejjo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
oh my i so love aarav's character
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
link phir se open nahi hua 😆
koi ni meko mil gaya...but sorry main literally bhul gayi thi story ka plot, but starting k 2-3 chapters k baad yaad a gaya kya tha plot n where I had left it
but i think maine bahot time se comment nahi kia h toh I have to go through whole set AGAIN
Will read it and comment within 2-3 days
luv u 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
What happrns when you get sucha wonderful sasumaa..and such a handsome pati...well life is magic!!! MAHI is lucky that she got them and so are they!!! :D
Chlo finally ye Arav ka bcha man to gya...akhir kab tak rutha rehta apni Mahi se? OOPS I mean apni biwi se???
Heheh...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow finally aarav maan gya..
How could he be angry on his angel.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am loving this twist sooo much..:D :D :)
Mahi-Aarav ki shadi ho gyi..not with all rasmo riwaz but d most important rasm got completed :)
Psycho..kya naam diya h Aarav..I agree with U completely..Mehek should b sent to a mental asylum rather than psychiatrist ..apne kaise aur logon ko dekhkar bht achha feel hoga use ;)
Why r U so afraid yaar..Aarav accepted U in front of everyone,ab to khul kar bolo..!!..but I am happy that her mother sent her to her sasuraal ;)
Hmm..so Aarav is still angry with her & teasing her bcz of all what she did,well he is ri8..if he hadn't done that,then surely 3 lives would have been ruined..!!
Hayeee..the last moment took me to dreamland..;) :)
Update soonish dii..waiting :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Hello dear...
how r u?
I'm back aftr a long time...
hav read all ur uds...I must say U're really a very gud writer..
I'm waiting for next update...
plz giv d UD soon dear...
Luv u 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

Hello dear...

how r u?
I'm back aftr a long time...
hav read all ur uds...I must say U're really a very gud writer..
I'm waiting for next update...
plz giv d UD soon dear...
Luv u 😳

hello deary...
im fine
happy to see u back here
thanks for ur sweet comment
i really loved it...
love u

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