KAISA YEH PYAAR H??? (RTMC FF) completed - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
aww poor aarav MU mahi and abhi..hope things will become better soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Finally we got an update..:)..thank u dii..:*
Arghh..>:(..I want to strangle d neck of Abhi..hamesha galat wqt pe galat jagah dhamak jata h :(..phr se gussa dilwa diya Aarav ko Nahi pe bina kisi glti k..:/..n ye Mahi ka v kya luck h..galat tym pe galat insan k arms me gir gyi..:/ !!
Let's see what happens next..:)
Plzz plzz plzz dii..is baar Utna tym mt ljyega dii..its a sincere request..:) :*🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
ooo birthday boy ki jealousy 😃
my poor princesss hope she makes him pay


hope aarav ko bahoot papad belne pade next date pe jaane k liye

😛😛
Edited by pranita1202 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
thank u guys for the lovely comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
gr8 that you continuing FF
But should continued in old thread by reopening it.
Anyways adding new link in FF list thread
Edited by RajatMugdha4evr - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
WOW!! superb update dear...loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
part 18

she was confused ...'kyu aisa behave kar rhe h mere sath''while looking at phone...she kept the phone aside with saddened face n moved outside to saw his father who had returned from hospital...

in her father room

''how are u now''she asked to his father with a smile...sanjay smiled at his daughter affectionately -''im fine ...''n patted her head...

seema entered in the room-''mahi tum abhi tak jagi ho subah office nhi jana''

mahi grinned at her-''ok ma gudnt...''she kissed her daughter's forehead-''gudnite go n sleep''

mahi walked out of the room n looked at the clock...it was very late...she thought for a while n moved towards her room...

aarav looked at window sitting on bed side floor...he remembered her smiling face...their hug...he closed his eyes-''i just hate u mahi''

next morning

he was working on laptop when she entered in the cabin-''may i come in sir''by listening her voice she slowed down his typing-''come in''

she smiled-''gudmg aarav ji''

aarav still held his eyes on screen ..-''gdmg''

she felt sad he didn't even looked at her..how could be he so rude...she thought in her mind and curled her lips-''hitler''she whispered softly...when he raise his brows-''kuch kaam h''

she nodded quickly n gave him file which he gave her for some checking of accounts...he snatched the file from her hands -''u may go now''

she looked at his face for a moment-''are u angry with me''

he looked at file-''no''n turned the pages

mahi-''nhi aap mujhse naaraz h..lekin kyu...????kya meine koi galati ki h??''she asked innocently

he looked her face which was glowing as always...-''u may go now''

she saw his hurtful face which was looking pale..something happened...but what,,she was very much puzzled...suddenly she hear a noise on door...they looked at doors and surprised to saw amita...aarav-''what are u doing here''

amita-''im here for u son''mahi looked at beautiful lady in front of her..she was so beautiful...she joined her palm-''namaste''

amita-''namaste...mahi??''amita looked at her innocent face-''u r mahi na"

mahi nodded-''ji..ji han''

amita-''i know tum hi mahi ho sakti ho...''

aarav growled at his mother-''mom what are u doing here''

mahi-''aap apni mom se aise kaise baat kar sakte h''she frowned at him...he glared at her face-''really''she gulped her breathe...but amita enjoyed their staring sharing moment and smiled softly-''ok fine mein jaa rhi hun''

mahi-''aaiye mein aapko chod deti hu''they smiled at each other n left the room...

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mujhe to mahi bhot pasand h...tumhe kaisi lagi mahi''amita grinned while aarav sipping the black tea...

''and why are u asking''

amita-''aarav do u love her''

aarav stopped in middle n put the cup on table-''mom im tired''he moved towards the room when amita grasped his hand-''do u love her??? yes or no???

aarav turned his face towards her..his pain came out in his eyes-''no''which were red with sleepless nights...

amita-''what??

aarav turned his face towards the stairs...n moved upstairs...

amita was looking at her son which was changed in few hours...he was lying but why?? what happened between them...she has to find out...

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mahi sat on bed remembered his gloomy face why was he angry ...everything was fine till yesterday afternoon then what happened to him...she put her phone and dialed his no...it was ringing...but as always..no answer from the other side...she kept the phone aside-''kya karu''

after sometime

door bell rang...she moved towards the hall..n shocked to saw aarav and his family...abhi was smiling but amita and avinash looked little disappointed ...seema greeted them happily...they all made them sit comfortably in their small house...seema prepared tea for them...mahek was little surprised to saw them...

sanjay greeted them but he was little afraid from inside what made them to come here at this hour...

avinash-''actually we are sorry hum log bina btaye yaha aagye...actually hum apne bete ke liye mahi ka hath mangne aaye''

her heart jumped with joy...is this for real or a dream...what she has heard...??she was surely dreaming..''

seema and sanjay looked at each other for a moment...sanjay looked at avinash-''mahi''

mahek made her face-''oh no kahi yeh log aarav or mahi ki shaadi ki baat to nhi karne aye''

avinash-''sanjay ji we just want mahi nothing else...''mahi looked at aarav but he just turned his gaze

sanjay joined his hands in front of him-''yeh hmare liye bhot khushi ki baat hogi''and they both hugged each other...

amita looked at mahi-''mahi tumhe koi problem to nhi h na...''mahi shyly nodded which made amita more disappointed..she looked at aarav..he was very much in pain..he loved her but abhi and mahi's relationship broken him from inside...

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at evening

they all were leaving ..moving towards their car..abhi checked his pockets-''keys??''

he moved back inside the house where she was standing with keys smiling at him...abhi smiled at her-''actually mujhe laga tha ki tum mana kar dogi''

mahi-''kyu??''

abhi-''hum log abhi itna close nhi h ek dum se shaadi ""

mahi looked at his face confusingly-''what...aapse shaadi''

abhi-''han...abhi to mom ne pucha tumse''

mahi shockingly held her ground...tears filled in her eyes..amita called abhi from behind...

abhi looked at her pale face-''mahi are u fine na''

mahi--'aarav ji''she asked in shivering voice-''aarav ji ko pata h''

abhi smiled-''han usi ne to mom se hum dono ke baare me baat ki h'abhi moved forward and cupped her face-''mein tumse kuch kehna chahta hun''

she pulled his hands away-''im tired ''n rushed inside

abhi smiled-''i think she know what talking about''

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next morning

he drive the car towards the parking slot suddenly she came in front of car...he put breaks hastily-''mahi''he screamed from inside..she was continuously looking at him angrily...he came out from the car-''whats ur problem''

'u r my problem''she pointed him through her finger-''actually u are a big blunder in my life''

he frowned at her finger-''what do u want??'

mahi smiled -''really??don't u know what i want''and fumed with anger-''who are u to take my life decisions...apne bhai ko laakar khada kar diya shaadi ke liye...kyu???kya samajhte ho apne aap ko...toy hu jab mann hua khel liye jab mann hua kisi or ko de diya''she blurted out in angry tone which bring tears in her eyes

aarav-''but kal to tumne ha bol diya tha na to ab kya hua"'he asked questionably

mahi-''kyunki mujhe laga tha ki wo aap ki baat kar rhe h''

he looked at her face''what??''

aarav--' u love him na ''he asked curiously ...she screamed at him-''no ''

mahi---''i don't love him..i love yo...''n stopped suddenly she wiped her tears

aarav gazed at her confusingly-''but he...he loves u''

mahi glared at him-''and u ??aarav turned his face towards the entrance of office...we have so many meeting today...he walked little and then turned..she was still standing there...tried to find out her answer

aarav looked at her for a while-''we have lot of work..come soon''

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he was busy with his clients all day long...he has to rest for sometime...he moved outside towards the parking...and shocked to saw her sitting on bench..it was dark and she was still there...he thought she would leave but she is so stubborn...he moved towards her -''are u mad...what are doing here at this hour'

she didn't respond he fumed with anger-''im talking to u ''

mahi--''u can leave mein chali jayungi''

aarav-''sit in the car i will drop u''

mahi -''i don't want ur help anymore now...so pls stop it to being so kind with me''

he sat on other side of bench and looked at her face..she was crying..her face was wet with tears...he closed his fist-''pls don't cry''

she looked at him puzzled-''why does it effects you''

aarav -''look mahi its very late for u come i will drop u''

mahi-''pls leave me alone''she opened her bag n put the phone on the bench-''i don't want it now''

aarav-''then throw it''...she stood up from the bench without looking at him...he grasped her wrist..n..he turned her towards him-"mahi u will be happy after marrying him''

mahi saw his face-''im not...n i don't want to be happy with him''

aarav-''so what do u want ??''

mahi-''jo mein chahhti h mujhe milega''

aarav wiped her tears-''i'll try''

mahi-"no promise me jo mein chahti hun mujhe milega...''

he nodded-''ok but what u want''

she wiped her tears..there is a boy ...i love him but don't know he loves me or not''

aarav looked at her eyes which were continuously gazing him..he moved forwards...curled his hand around her waist...n pulled her closed..he moved forwards towards her face-''u want his answer"..she nodded nervously as his warm breathe caress her face...he moved little closer n put his lips on hers..she closed her eyes while clutching his blazer tightly...he kissed her lips softly and looked at her eyes-''he loves u very much''










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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice updt...omg...really aarav is such a duffer yaar why did he gave the suggestion...anw cont soon eager to knw whats gonna happen nw
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OmG! What a lovely update. But ye Arav bhi na pagal hai bilkul...khud se le gya rishta apne bhai ke liye..huh but ek tarah se acha hua atleast dono ko pta to chla ki dono ek dusre ke liye pagal hai... aur amita bhi arav je liye Mahi chahti hai isse better kya ho sakta hai...I hope ye teeno koi rasta nikal lenge...!!!!! :) :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
WOW!! nice update dear...loved it

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