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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter IV

Mihika was shocked. She glanced at the note, then she looked in the mirror and admired the chain. Now she knew where she had seen it. It was Abhishek's. That was the reason she felt she has seen it earlier.

But a big question troubled her.

"Should I go?"

But going would be nothing but encouraging his feelings but born going would be rude and it might leave him dejected. She was confused and this confusion was heightened by sudden realization that she was wearing Abhishek's chain in her neck. She quickly took it off and kept it on the table.

She frequently read the note to decide her next step. Going was not a good idea but not going was not a good one either. If going was again promoting his feelings then not going was ending them forever. Maybe she will lose his friendship too. She was entangled in her chain of thoughts badly and needed help. She rested her head on the pillow and closed her eyes to engross in her thoughts.

The clock rang when she opened her eyes next. Mihika got up in an instant. She took a glance at time. It was 6:30 am already. Her next step was something even she could not explain. But she took the note and the chain and stormed out of her house.

She took and cab for the airport. It was strange. "Why am I doing this?" She thought. She could easily choose to let him leave without meeting her but reason that she did not worried her. Affection, was something she had for him but was it enough to justify her moves? She knew not.

In her way, she strongly clutched the chain and note. She looked at the chain, she could not help smiling. She could not stop liking it. She was not sure whether she had anything for its owner but the thought that she had Abhishek's chain in her hand was something which made her feel secured.

"You are mad Mihika".

Her thoughts shouted out on her liking for the chain. She could not, as of now, remove them but her head was diverted to the thoughts of reaching late and she worried that by the time she reached, Abhishek might have left. She asked the driver to drive faster. He nodded in reply.

Mihika looked outside and she could see couples walking together on the street. London was quite a good place to celebrate romance. But not for her, because she did not have any to celebrate. Nor did she believe that love was the only thing that a girl could or should be engaged with. But she surely felt that loving and being loved were two wonderful experiences.

On her path she also saw a few couples splitting away, some coming together. All this just supported her belief that love was never permanent. It was not the best thing for anyone to invest emotions in. And considering her experiences she wished not to engage in matters of love and romance. But her choice contradicted her actions today. It was not like she came to meet him because she loved him but she definitely found her step absurd.

"Mam, we are here." The driver told her.

She got off, paid the driver and looked ahead. She stood in front of the airport, but she had a bigger task to do, she had to meet Abhishek to clear ant thought of his mind which promoted their romance to brew up.

That was moment, she heard the tagline of a new show on television,

"Dil ka paas dimag nahi hota, aur jo dimag she ho woh pyaar nahi hota".

"Rubbish. All they know is to engage people to stupid matters of love and make the believe how magical it is. Only if that could portray reality through their 'pyaar'." She said as she advanced.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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THREE UPDATES?! 😲 You're seriously awesome. 😆
Okay again I loved it! Abhishek left his chain for Mihika. You're really good at delineating Mihika's feelings towards Abhishek. I'm pretty curious about the reason behind Mihika's leaving from India. And that part where Mihika runs towards Abhishek, that was fab. Awesome update!

P.S. I'm really sorry I broke the continuity of the updates! I saw two up already, got excited and ressed. 😆 Sorry! 😳

Edited by ..Ramya.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter V

Mihika rushed in. She could hear announcements about flights leaving. People hurried with their luggage and she felt lost. Her thoughts troubled her more than her actions. She looked around in anticipation of finding Abhishek but in vain. That was when she heard announcement about a flight leaving for India in a few minutes that were not more that 10.

She could not find Abhishek around and this thought troubled her. She turned around and saw him on a nearby terminal. He was most probably checking in.

Abhishek was hurt. "She did not come". This was the only thing which troubled him. He was now beyond her reach and his thoughts had nothing but the littlest of love for her. Attraction, affection and then love was the reason he admired her. But maybe it was not the same for her. He was surprisingly shocked at his actions and now regretted writing that note. But on second thoughts, he felt that she might not have noticed the note and hence came not.

Mihika ran as fast as she could to stop him. Her thoughts were all concentrated on stopping him. She cold not lose him after coming here. That would be stupid.

Abhishek had a call. Its was from the headquarters. But since it was confidential he preffered to use earphones to prevent others from hearing anything.

Mihika ran to stop him but in the process, she hurt her ankle when she bumped into someone carrying a lot of luggage. She limped to stop him from leaving and as hard as she tried, she could not help but cry in pain. Her run seemed unnecessary for she had no feelings for him and stopping him was not necessary but this convinced her to think again about her feeling for Abhishek.

Abhishek, had to reason a few thing on his talk. His sudden trip to London, its purpose and the day he was returning. As much as he respected his work, he hated to lie and thus told everything to his senior. But the talk was taking longer than usual for he had to clearly reason things or his job could be in danger.

This was the first time Mihika was experiencing something like this. First time did she struggle beyond her physical limits to stop a 'friend' from leaving. It had convinced her by now that it was not just friendship that she had for Abhishek. But then what could she call this affection?

Mihika struggled to reach the counter but she finally did. But she was forbidden to proceed ahead. A fear gripped her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay, so here is the mega update. Three chapters. Its all dramatic and TRP-attractive I think but hope you like it. Luckily, it is proof-read. But still if you encounter any mistake just PM.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lol! Strange arrangement of updates! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You know I never really liked airports. The only thing I like in them are the duty free shops. Definitely annoying she can't find him and he's put headphones in. But I am sure they will meet eventually. forget about the strange update arrangement. They were a nice set of multiple updates. A good friend should never be let go off because who knows if they'll ever come back again.
I like this new style of writing you have, the flow has improved. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
I hope he will not leave.
update next chapter soon & thanks for PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super thx 4 mega update.2 parts when v r worried abt MiMi getting back 2 each other.Mihika finding his chain n then reading his note was very nice.Tho she wants 2 avoid him she decided 2 go to the airport 2 meet him n talk as per his wish.she ran 2 reach him.(but he wore earphones.oh!)this rly shows that uknowingly she craves 4 him.this is luv.But at the end she is hesitating 2 go further.Oh!Hope they'll meet in d next update.Using darmiyaan promo dialogue was catchy n apt 4 Mihika's state of mind.now she is thing with her brain.but her heart goes 4 abhishek
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was awesome! Loved how Mihika pinned Abhishek to the wall! Hope they meet soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

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THREE UPDATES?! 😲 You're seriously awesome. 😆
Okay again I loved it! Abhishek left his chain for Mihika. You're really good at delineating Mihika's feelings towards Abhishek. I'm pretty curious about the reason behind Mihika's leaving from India. And that part where Mihika runs towards Abhishek, that was fab. Awesome update!

P.S. I'm really sorry I broke the continuity of the updates! I saw two up already, got excited and ressed. 😆 Sorry! 😳

😆 All I can say is that I am happy that you liked it. 😊

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