Surr...Do Dilon Ka ||Update- Pg32|| - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

237

Views

10.2k

Users

13

Likes

430

Frequent Posters

Angela_Grokes thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Cortana

You know I never really liked airports. The only thing I like in them are the duty free shops. Definitely annoying she can't find him and he's put headphones in. But I am sure they will meet eventually. forget about the strange update arrangement. They were a nice set of multiple updates. A good friend should never be let go off because who knows if they'll ever come back again.

I like this new style of writing you have, the flow has improved. 😊

Thank a lot arya.
You being someone who has read MB FF as well, its definitely good to have a compliment about getting better. I hope I get better than I am right now so that you people dont have to cringe at times. 😆Thank a lot. 😃
Angela_Grokes thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome update

I hope he will not leave.
update next chapter soon & thanks for PM.

😃
Thank you.
Angela_Grokes thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

super thx 4 mega update.2 parts when v r worried abt MiMi getting back 2 each other.Mihika finding his chain n then reading his note was very nice.Tho she wants 2 avoid him she decided 2 go to the airport 2 meet him n talk as per his wish.she ran 2 reach him.(but he wore earphones.oh!)this rly shows that uknowingly she craves 4 him.this is luv.But at the end she is hesitating 2 go further.Oh!Hope they'll meet in d next update.Using darmiyaan promo dialogue was catchy n apt 4 Mihika's state of mind.now she is thing with her brain.but her heart goes 4 abhishek

Thanks a lot. Definitely it is very encouraging to read all your replies. 😊
Angela_Grokes thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

This was awesome! Loved how Mihika pinned Abhishek to the wall! Hope they meet soon!

Thanks lot. So happy that you liked it, 😊
Angela_Grokes thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Chapter VI

"Look! I promise I won't break any rules. Just let me in for two minutes." She pleaded.

"Mam, you will break a rule by entering in itself. I cannot let you in. Sorry!" the girl looked at Mihika with a sorry expression.

Mihika, too depressed to reply turned around to leave. She walked a few steps and then she heard a familiar voice -

"Mihika!"

The first time, she ignored it thinking it was all her assumption, but the second time, and the third confirmed that her ears were not wrong. She turned around in anticipation.

It was Abhishek. He was waiting for her, with utmost affection, looking at her with a smile, charming to take any girl's heart away. They started proceeding towards each other when an announcement declared that the flight would leave soon.

Mihika signalled him to stop. He froze. She signalled him to stay where he was and not move as he had to leave now.

Tumhi dekho na,
Yeh kya hogaya,
Tumhara hum aur tum meri...

He looked at her. She was smiling. There was something in her which he never understood. Something different. But since he was not exactly known to what it was, he found it really convenient to called it "something"!

Main hairaan hoon,
Tumhe kya kahoon,
Me dil mein hui kaisi chandani...

She was equally engrossed in the staring moment they were sharing. It did not affect how, a few, were looking at them. Regardless of all, they stood at a distance and steered into each other's eyes.

Jaagi jaagi so hai,
Phir bhi khaabon mein hai,
Sooi sooi zindgi...

He signalled to ask her how did she come here. Not that he was shocked, but it was definitely cheering. To which she replied by showing him the note, she held it tight in her hand. Then, she showed him the chain. On that account, he was shocked for he never left on purpose. Well, maybe he did.

Tumhi dekho na,
Yeh kya hogaya,
Tumhara hoon main,
Aur tum meri...
...
Behke behke se man,
Mehke mehke se tan,
Ujli ujli fizaaon mein hai...

Abhishek folded his arms and complemented her. But well, she always looked mesmerizing to his eyes.

She replied to it by complementing him back. Her eyes then fell on a few girls checking him out and she coloured on her choice being so popular. Abhishek, who noticed this, could not do anything but adore her acts.

Aaj hum hain jahan,
Kitni rangeeniyaan,
Jhalki jhalki nigaahon mein hain...

She then quickly, tried to get rid of a few tears which had found their way down her cheek. This could not go unnoticed by Abhishek who asked her to wipe them off and smile.

Neeli neeli ghataaon se hain chan rahi,
Halki halki,
Roshani...

It was then announced that the flight was not ready to leave in a minute or three.

Tumhi dekho na,
Yeh kya hogaya,
Tuhmara hoon main,
Aur tum meri...

Main hairaan hoon,
Tumhe kya kahoon,
Ke dil mein hui kaisi chaandani...

He turned around to leave, but then turned back again to take a last look at her and smirked on that note to lighten the moment. For, they had to wait long before they will meet again to finally get their answers.

Main toh anjaan thi,
Yuhi hoga kabhi,
Pyaar barsega yun tootke...

Hoo..

Sach yeh ikraar hai,
Sach yahi pyaar hai,
Baaki bandhan hain sab jhooth ke...

Mihika flustered at the thought that such smirks would now become a part of her life soon. Abhishek sat in his seat, he could not stop smiling on his acts. Within a minute from being serious he turned exact opposite.

Meri saason mein hain,
Ghul rahi pyaar ki,
Dheemi dheemi ragini...

Mihika got out and took a cab. For some reason her thoughts engaged her more than they usually did. She looked at a picture in her cell. It was of Rakhsha Bandhan celebration and Ishita had captured a moment which reflected Abhishek's moment for Mihika excellently! She was almost dreaming now. But why, she could hardly answer.

Tumhi dekho na,
Yeh kya hogya,
Tumhara hoon main,
Aur tum meri...

Main hairaan hoon,
Tumhe kya kahoon,
Ke dil mein hui kaisi chaandani...

They both were contented today. Although, the purpose of her visit was not fulfilled but now, they knew it would be soon fulfilled. Mihika looked at the chain in her hand while Abhishek rested back in his seat to think of her.

Jaagi jaagi so hai,
Phir bhi khaabon mein hai,
Sooi sooi zindgi...

Mihika's chain of thoughts was interrupted by a call, from Ishita.

"At this time! It was be way too early in India!" Mihika was shocked. She answered the call with - "Haan Akka!"
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 9 years ago
Angela_Grokes thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#46
NOTE

This was the first song sequence in this FF. 😆 I really hope you like it. Although the song is a bit OTT but I tried to let the picturization of the scene be natural.

I will update next on Saturday and will also update Mahabharat FF then. I was suffering from loss of creativity for MB FF. But now, the chapters are up and all will like hope fully.


Best wishes

😃
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 9 years ago
Revelio thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Res
Unres

Again awesome update! I loved how they just stared into each others eyes and smiled without saying anything. And Abhishek's killer smirks are to die for. And you really love cliffies, don't you? 😆 Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for the pm! :)

Edited by ..Ramya.. - 9 years ago
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#48
when all the hopes were shattered abhishek called her.wow!ur song selection n picturisation were beautiful.i was imagining the scenes...their facial expressions...smileAbhi asking her 2 wipe her tears n smile was lovely.He had to go without sharing what he had to.that made me disappointed.waiting 4 their next meeting.
not.here thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#49
So they didn't meet but met. Bittersweet. I need to listen to this song. Then I can imagine it better but now I am curious about what will happen next.
Angela_Grokes thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

Res

Unres

Again awesome update! I loved how they just stared into each others eyes and smiled without saying anything. And Abhishek's killer smirks are to die for. And you really love cliffies, don't you? 😆 Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for the pm! :)

Thank you Ramya. Actually, I do love cliffs. 😆

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".