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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Mihika's dream was sweet.still she luvs him n thoughts related to him r haunting her.but 4 some reason she is going away from him.even ishita's advise isnt making her go back to abhishek.so sad.What happened btw them?Is Ashok d reason?Banner was very nice.plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

I love this couple as I admire Mihika . And the story seems interesting so I m up for this 😃

Thanks a lot dear.
Long time no see?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Cortana

I really liked the use of vocabulary in the first post - the summary

The first chapter is a nice gently opening into the story with a lot of questions on why someone would leave someone who likes them. so this will be interesting to read and I will try to keep up with it. 😃
Wishing you a lot of luck on this as well as all your other work.
p.s the reason people in London have a issue with the weather is because it doesn't decide to stick to one mode. it can change whenever it wants. plus if it goes extreme, London simply can not cope!

Thank a lot Arya.
Honestly, you know how terrible I am at handling stories (considering the fact that you've read MB FF as well) 😆 So dont expect much. I am FF sections Ekta. 😆


I miss London so every story of mine ends up in London somehow!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

I loved it! It's only the first chapter and you've got me on the edge of my seat coz I'm already dying to know what happened between AbhiKa. You're a very talented writer, Angela! So Mihika is a teacher, that's interesting! The update was fab! And you've got killer vocabulary. Can't wait for the next update! And thanks for the PM! :)

P.S. Fabulous banner! <3

I got you on the edge of you seat?! Really! Wow! That praise for me. 😳 I am happy that I did.

Hopefully I won't ruin your reading experience. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Nichuss

aww gud start

stupid mihu... she knws abhi loves her... n she eloped to b away frm him

sigh


btwn ANg... osm banner... abhi luks dashing...

Thabks Nichuss.
No need to sigh. Save that for later on.😆

Cortana is a queen at the art.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: usaonly

Ang very interesting start Mihika look very sad what happen why she land up to London and that also Abhi did not know where she is👏 Abhi love her but what a twist she not love him and don't want to talk really. Please continue my dear interesting concept.Thank for writing and PM the edit was very beautiful too.🤗🤗 You should post the edit in Abhika thread too or I miss there.

Thanks Jum. Hope you'll like it ahead too. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Mihika's dream was sweet.still she luvs him n thoughts related to him r haunting her.but 4 some reason she is going away from him.even ishita's advise isnt making her go back to abhishek.so sad.What happened btw them?Is Ashok d reason?Banner was very nice.plz update soon

. She definitely lives him. Keep guessing why is she away, 😃
Sorry for late update its coming though.


Thanks for commenting. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter II


After teaching students for the whole day. Mihika reached back home at 6 pm. It was a lovely evening. The sky looked bright and all alone in the house, she could finally get a few moment just for herself.

She collapsed in the chair. Breathing heavily out of a tiresome day, she opened her laptop to check a few emails. To her surprise, she had an email from Ishita. That was strange, for they never talked through emails, it was always on the phone.

Hey Mihika,

Shocked you are. But read carefully for you won't listen. Abhishek is coming to London. Nope. I did not tell him anything about you or the reason why you left. He doesn't even know you are there.

He told us that its some field trip. He is going there for a trip to examine the system there. Strange I know. But please do take care. I know you want to avoid him but in case you bump into him somehow, please don't ignore him! Don't!

Ishita.

"Great! Out of all the cities of all the countries of the world, they got this very city to send him to! This is so stupid. I mean, here I am trying to avoid him and there he might be landing on the airport. My luck is really really bad!" Mihika cursed her luck. And for a fee minutes thought what to do.

"Maybe I should him somewhere. No. Maybe I should go to India for sometime. Nope. I know, I can use a lot of make up so that I don't look like Mihika. Nope." She was going crazy when reality struck here.

"Wait a second. London is not a village. If he is coming here, it is not like we will ring the bell of my house to end up here! Stupid me!" And while she finally sighed relief out of the thing, the door heel rang.

"Murugan! Abhishek!" Mihika for worried, "nope! Must be Lydia's cousin! She will never learn!"

Mihika went down to open the door.

But, the unexpected happened and the minute she opened the do saw a man in leather jacket with his back towards her and talking on the phone.

"Excuse me!" Mihika asked. She was annoyed.

"Sir, you are ringing bell since an hour and now you are ignoring me!" Mihika was irritated at the man's ignorance!

But, the minute he turned, Mihika could not do anything but want time to rewind away.

He was Abhishek!

Abhishek, whose joy knew no bounds, hugged her the very moment. Mihika, though hesitating, responded by hugging him with soft affection as she closed her eyes on feeling calm in his arms. But, soon enough, she felt the absurdity of the moment and struggled to break away.

"Kahan thi tum! I have searched Delhi! And you are sitting in London. Mujhe bataya kyun nahi!" Abhishek bombarded her with questions.

Mihika, though worried, struggled to maintain composure and not to lose her civil manners. She breathed deeply and said -

"Abhishek, I was way too engrossed in things so forgot to tell you. Mujhe maaf kardo."

"Not anytime soon madam."

"What do you mean! Tum mujhe maaf nahi karoge?" Mihika narrowed her eyes at him.

On that, Abhishek whispered to himself, "Phir paara high".

"What?" Mihika asked with a reproachful look.

"Nothing. Can I get in?" He peeped in anticipation.

"Yup. Please." Mihika welcome him in as she prayer to God the other second.

"Mihika, tum akele rehti ho!" Abhishek asked as he found no one around.

Mihika, who was being torn in a fight between her past and her present, replied, " Nahi. I live with my friend. Lydia."

"Waise, which is your room?" He asked.

Mihika, was not feeling any good about it. She came all the way to London, to be back to square one. But, being civil, she took him to his room.

While he looked around, all he searched for was something which hinted towards any affection which she would have for him.

The bell rang. Mihika's eyes bulged.

"I am home" cried Lydia from the hall.

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Note

Its not proof read so please ignore spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. Sorry for such unpolished content.


Edited by Angela_Grokes - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆 It's a small world eh Mihika? aur one other question Angela, why was he looking for her room? or is that a typo? no problem, he seems like a caring character and let's see how you craft the plot for them to solve their issues.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Cortana

😆 It's a small world eh Mihika? aur one other question Angela, why was he looking for her room? or is that a typo? no problem, he seems like a caring character and let's see how you craft the plot for them to solve their issues.

I am not even done with sending PMs and you commented! 😆 That's fast. 😛
Nope. They are friends back in Delhi and he is an ACP so he likes checking in! Atleast in my FF he does! 🤣

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