Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51 - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago

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vvv nice part finally mission succesfull raha lakin yar part bari galt jagh end kya mila hi detin dono ko anyways nice update contsoon 😊



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***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
Part - 20

naina raj ke bagal me baithi hai aur bas raj ko dekhe ja rahi hai...uske aanshun rukne ka naam nahi le rahe hai...usne apne ek hanth me raj ka hanth liya...ab naina apne aur raj ke bitaye hue sabhi haseen pal yaad aa rahe hai...unka milna...unka ladna...pyar ka ehsaas aur sath me unki judaaiii..naina dheere se raj ka haanth apne hanth me leti hai aur bahut hi pyar se uske hanth ko chumti hai...uski aankhon ke aanshun raj hanth ko bhigo rahe the...
naina apni jagah se uth kar raj ke chehre ko apne hanth me leti hai...aur uske chehre ko bhi kiss karti hai...raj apne andar ajeeb sa ehsaas mehsoos kar raha hai...aur naina aaj use bas apne raj ke pass rehna tha...

naina:- veer...plzz utho na...dekho tumhari naina tumhare saamne baithi hai...veerr mujhe tumse bahut kuchh kehna hai...tumse bahut kuchh sunna hai...plzz veer...bas ek bar uth jao...veer tum nahi jante humari ek galat fehami ne humein 3 saal tak ek dusre se door rakha hai...mujhe pata hai veer u loves me alot...plzzz raj uth jao na...

par raj hai ki usme koi bhi movement tak nahi ho rahi hai...naina bahut hi der se raj ke hantho ko sehla rahi hai...uske manthe ko sehla rahi hai...par raj ki taraf se koi bhi posistive response nahi aa raha tha...ehan bahar bhi sabhi tensed the...ki raj ko hose kyun nahi aa raha hai...neelu aalekh ko sambhal rahi thi to shalu naveen ko...yahan naina ka jee bahut hi ghbara raha hai..kyuki 12 ghante poore hone ko aa rahe the par raj koi bhi response nahi de raha tha...ki achanak se raj is sinking...very hard...naina daud kar bahar gayi aur dr ko bulaya...naina ki awaaz se sabhi andar aa gaye...dr puri kosis kar rahe hai raj ko cntrol karne ki...par aisa lag raha tha mano raj ne hi ummeed kho di ho...aur yahan raj ko is tarah dekh kar sab bahut hi jyada ghabra jate hai...dr ne kai baar kosis ki par atlast raj ki saanson ne uska sath nahi diya...

dr:- i m sorry...he is no more...(dhmaake on all's face...naina, naveen and aalekh was completely in shock tabhi dr raj ke face par wo chadar dalne hi jate hai ki...naina unka hath rok leti hai...)

naina;- veer utho...veerrr...dekho bahut mazaak ho gaya...plzzz veer...uthooo(naina is shaking raj very badly but raj was not responding...)veerr dekho plzzz aisa mat karo...uth jaao...veerrr uthooo(naina is crying badly and shaking him) (to aalekh)aalekh use bol uthne ko...aalekh...tu kuchh bolta kyun nahi...(to raj) dekho veer plzzz mazak chhod do...uth jaao...baat karo mujhse...veer plzzz i love u alottt veerrr...plzzz. uth jao...veeer uthooo...uthooo...uthoooplzzzi cant live without u ...main marrr jaungi...

aalekh:- wo mar chuka hai naina...raj ab kabhi nahi aayega...(naina holds aalekh's coller and slaps him..)

naina(cying):- how could u...haa..how could u to say some thing like that kuchh nahi hua hai use...kuchh nahi...

naveen(shouts):- stop it naina...he is dead...raj mar gaya hai...

naina:- bhaiya...aap bhi...no...no...(to raj) dekho na veer sab kya keh rahe hai plzzz veer main thak chuki hun...plzzz uth jao...uthooo...uthooo verrr...utho veee...

naina raj k seene me sir rakh kar ro rahi hai...aur baki sab bas laachar khade use dekh rahe hai...tabhi naina ko raj ki body me kuchh halchal si mehsoos hui...wo turant uthi aur usne dr ko bulaya...dr aaye aur unhone fir se raj ka full checj up kiya...nurse unn sabhi ko bahar bhej deti hai...bahar sabhi bahut pareshaan hai...par sab ke mann me ek ummed jaag gayi thi ki raj ab theek ho jayega...use kuchh nahi hoga...kareeb 1 hr ke baad dr bahar aate hai...

dr:- he is fine now...kabhi kabhi jab dawa kaam nahi karti wahan dua aur pyar asar kar deti hai...(all are relaxed...to naina)wakai aaj agar wo mar kar wapas aaye hai to aapke pyar ki wajah se...abhi he is not consious but out of danger...(all are having smile and tears at the same time...dr left...)

naina wapas jakar raj ke pass baith jati hai...aalekh baki sabhi ko wapas camp bhej deta hai...par naveen, aalekh aur naina wahin hai...agle din raj ko hose aa gaya...he was feeling pain...but good to see naina around him...aise hi kuchh din beet gaye...sabhi raj ka bahut khayal rakhte the...koi bhi raj ko akela nahi chhodta tha...specially naina wo to bas change karne ke liye camp jati thi...aur pura waqt raj ka khayal rakhti thi...raj ne bhi naina ki aankhon me kuchh ajeeb si kashish mehsoos ki...par wo abhi bhi pure sach se anjaan tha...naina ne abhi sabhi ko mana kae rakha hai raj ko kuchh bhi batane se...kyuki wo apne dil ki baat khud raj se karna chahti thi...raj sabhi ke rehne par khush hota tha...but jab jab huda uske saamne ata tha...raj ka mann use marne ko karta tha...wo aaj bhi huda k bardast nahi kar sakta...aur huda apni harkato se baaz nahi aata tha...jaan bujhkar raj ke saamne naina se close hota...baki sab ko to sach ka abhaash tha oar raj ko yahi lag raha tha ki huda uar naina khush hai sath mein...

now raj is perfectly fine...ek ya do din me use dishcharge bhi kar deinge...sabhi raj ke aas pass baithe hai tabhi huda sam ke sath aata hai aur uske hantho me sweets ke boxes hai...

naina:- are wah kya bat hai huda...itani sari mithaiyan...

huda:- are phoolan khushkhabri hi itani badi hai ki kya batau...

armaan;- achha aisa kya ho gaya hai...

huda:- are ek nahi do nahi puri 4-4 khushkhabriyaan lekar aaya hun...

aalekh:- to kab batayega...

raj:- kya baat hai huda...shadi kar raha hai kya...

huda:- are tumjhe kaise pata raj(raj was shocked he thought ki naina and huda are getting marriedand all other are enjoying raj's expression)...

raj:- nahi wo...tu itana khush tha na to...

huda:- ha wo to main hun...to khushkabri no 1 yeh hai ki brig ne mission k success hone ke karan sabko...pure 1 mahine ki leave sanction kar di hai...

naveen:- what sach. me yeh to wakai badi khushi ki baat hai...

huda:- ha dusri khusi ki baat yeh hai ki...shalu naveen aur neelu aalekh ki shadi ki date fix ho gayi hai...agle mahine ki 9 tarikh ko...aur in dono ki shadi ek hi mandap me hogi...

armaan;- wow yar great...hum to badi hi dhoom dhaam se isme shamil ho payeinge humare leaves bhi to hai...

huda;- ha armaan...abhi do aur bhi hai...

naveen:- ha ha jaldi bata be...

huda:- raj aaj shaam ko hi camp ja sakta hai...means raj u r discharging...(all are happy again)and last but not the least...aalekh aur naveen se pehle meri mummy ji ne meri saadi ki date fix kara di hai...isliye aap sab ko in dono se pehle meri saadi me shamil hona padega...meri sadi in dono ki sadi ke theek 13 din pehle hai so 2 din baad hum sab hariyaan ke liye nikal rahe hai...(dhamake on raj face)kya hua raj...

raj:- nahi its great...congrats i m sure u and naina will make a great couple(dhamake on naina's face but she controls)

huda:- oye yeh meri sadi ke beech me phoolan kaha se aa gayi...

raj:- kyun ab tu aur naina couple ho to main aur kya kahu??

huda:- abe bhutani ke tujhe kisne keh diya ki main aur phoolan couple hai...meri sadi se pehle hi mera talaak kara dega...

sam:- ofcrs raj ab sadi meri aur huda ki ho rahi hai...to huda aur naina kaise couple ho sakte hai... lok araj i know tujhe lagta hai ki huda aur naina couple hai..but its wrong...

huda:- haan raj...mujhe pata hai ki jab hum sab kma me the to i had a crush on phoolan...but that was only a crush...even bad me sirf naina ki hi wajah se main aur sameera ek hue...aur sameera se bahut pyar karta hun...sachha wala...par ha yeh bhi sach hai ki main sameera aur phoolan hum best frnds hai...(naina left from there)main dekhta hoon...

raj:- wo i m sorry sam...mujhe laga ki...

sam:- raj kabhi kabhi akhon dekha bhi galat ho jata hai...isliye...apne mann ki baat ko maan lena jyada sahi hai...(raj nods in yes)

now raj is back to camp...all are happy for future programs...aur naina ne faysla kiya hai ki wo khud raj ko apne dil ki baat batayegi kyuki use pata hai ki raj to kehne se raha...kal sabhi ko hariyaana nikalna tha...isliye sabhi apni yeh last night J&K me khusbsurat tarike se manana chahte the...baki sab to nikal gaye aaj apni gf ya frnd ko lekar bahar par raj aur naina yahi camp pe the...naina jahan bahut betaab hai ki wo raj ko apne dil ki baat batane wali hai...wahi...raj bahut confused tha,...uska yeh sak ki huda uar naina gf and bf hai wo to door ho gaya par ab raj ko aisa lagta hai ki kahin usne naina ko apni feeling bata di to naveen kahin fir na usse door ho jaye...aur kya pata naina usse pyar karti hai bhi ya nahi isliye raj ne chhup rehne ka faysla kiya...

its about 11 in the morning...sab loge to nikal liye hai but raj ji abhi bhi so rahe hai...naina apne room se nikal kar raj ke room me jati hai aur knock karti hai...raj uth kar darwaza kholta hai...naina ki nazar jaise hi raj par padi wo shocked reh gayi...she is gazing at raj from head to toe...then closed her eyes...

raj:- what??(then raj looks at him self...and instanly closed the door...bcz he is bare chested...he is having only a lower on his waist...)oh god...main bhi na...pagal ho gaya tha kya...

naina:- oh god...he is looking tooo hot...oh naina kya faltu ka cheez soch rahi hai...but jo bhi ho...raj looks so hot and sexy without shirt...(raj bears a t shirt aur turant darwaaza kholta hai)

raj:- a...wo i m sorry...wo main so raha tha na...andar aa sakti ho...kaho kuchh kam tham tha itani subah subah...yahan...

naina:- raj...its going to be 12 in the morning...

raj:- aa...hha wo ..kaho...kaise aana hua...

naina:- wo raj...kya tumm...kya tum mere sath aaj rat bahar chaloge...

raj:- kyun...(naina makes a face like iska kuchh nahi ho sakta...ek ladki ise date par khud puchh rahi hai aur yeh hai ki...)

naina:- wo actually na...kal to hum sab huda ke yahan ja rahe hai...aaj hum sab ki yahan last night hai na...to wo sab busy hai,...i mean look naveen bahiya bhabhi ko lekar already bahar ja chuke hai...aur neelu aalekh ko le gay hai...huda sam ke sath bahar jane wala hai...aur armaan aur ishaani bhi film dekhne jane waale hai...even ali is also gone to meet her fiance pooja...so ab sirf main aur tum hi hai...so mujhe tumhare sath hi kaam chalana padega...u know i dont have any choice...

raj:- oh to yeh baat hai...obiously u dont have any choice isiliye main...ok i will come...waise jana kahan hai...

naina:- a u dont worry...mujhe ek bahut khubsurat jagah ka pata hai...hum wahi chale...if u dont mind...

raj:- no -no why should i mind...jo tum kaho...

naina:- ok then see u at sharp 7

raj;- ok...bye...(naina turns to go but)

naina:- hey raj...ur lower...(raj looks at down...aur naina haste hue bhag gayi...and raj is shaking his head like...naina kabhi nahi sudhregi)

raj in his mind:- is hasi ke aage hi to haar jata hun main naina...par kya karun mazboor hun...ek baar fir apni bewakufi ki wajah se tumhari aur naveen ki dosti nahi khona chahta...kahin pyar ko pane ki manzil me dost ki gali phir na bichhad jaye...

its night...

naina ne bahut hi khubsurat balck coloure ki sleeve less salwar kurti pehni hai...and she is looking dead drop gorgeous aur wahi raj ne bhi balck blezer pehna hai...naina raj ka wait kar rahi hai ki tabhi raj jakar naina ke door par knock karta hai...naina turant door kholti hai...aur dono hi ek dusre ko dekhte reh jate hai...in 3 saalon ki doori ne naina aur raj dono ki hi khubsurti me izaafa hi kiya hai...after a couple of minutes...dono hose me aate hai...aur raj naina ko ek buqeit deta hai...aur naina ek smile ke sath use accept karti hai...aur phir dono hi raj ki car me baith kar nikal jate hai...

in the car...

raj:- naina...u r looking very beautiful...

naina(smile):- thanks raj...u r also looking good...

raj:- thanks...waise humein jana kahan hai...

naina:- ok yahan se right...

raj:- par naina kya aap us jagah ka naam batana pasand kareingi...

naina:- raj tum bas chalo...tumhe khud ba khud pata chal jayega...

raj:- as u wish mam...(after about 10 minutes)lo mam ab yahan to jungle sa dikh raha hai...tum mujhe jungle dikhane laayi hi naina...

naina:- shut up raj...ab utaro aur chalo...(dono utar jate hai..)

raj:- par naina...

naina:- raj tum kitana bolte ho...kma me tum mujhe mis bak bak bolte the...but ab to ulta hai...kitani bak bak karte ho tum...ab chup chap mere sath chalo...(naina aage aage ek pahadi ki taraf ja rahi hai aur raj uske peeche peeche naina ek point par aakar ruk jati hai...)

raj:- ab is pahad mein...(then raj looks his surrounding...it was very beautifulll...cool bridge was flowing...there are table for 2 is situated at centre with curtains, champain, and candles...dinner was ready...it was ike aww view...)naina...yeh...

naina:- its a lover poit of kashmir raj...raj tumhe sayad ehsaas nahi hai...but u r very special to me...aaj main tumhe sirf isliye lekar aayi hoon kyuki main tumhe apne dil ki baat batana chahti thi...raj wo main...wo main...pehle dinner kare...

naina apni ankh band kark tables ke pass jakar khadi ho jati hai...aur yahan raj man hi man mushkura raha tha...kyuki wo samajh gaya tha ki naina use yahan kyun laayi hai...par wo naina ke muh se sunna chahta hai...isliye wo jakar naina ke pass baith gaya...wo to is pal me naveen ke baare me maano bhool sa gaya tha...naina raj ko dinner serve karti hai...aur dono ek dusre se nazare churate hue dinner karte hai,...after dinner they were having campain...ki raj frwrds his hand for dance...

naina:- no music...

raj:- jaruri nahin hai...

both were dancing...very close to eachother...even they can feel each other breath...they are melting in each other arm...with the music of their hearts...

raj:- naina...tum kya kehna chahti thi...

naina:- wo raj...(ki achanak bahut tej ki bijali ki awaaz aati hai...aur bahut tej baarish hone lagti hai...naina hugss him tightly...)raj mujhe bijali ki waaz se bahut dar lagta hai...

raj;- naina just look at my eyes...(naina is looking at raj's deep brown eyes...annd raj is aslo looking at hers...both are in hugging position..)

for raj:-
kitana pyara -pyara hai samaan...
ho gaye diwwane hum yahann...
kitana pyara -pyara hai samaan...
ho gaye diwwane hum yahann...
dil ki ab yahi hai aarzooo...
mil jaye zameen se aasmaan...
(raj is just looking at naina's eyes..and his hands were on naina waist...she is feeling a sansation with his touch and burning with the drops of water...naina is looking so beautiful in that rains)

for naina:-
kitana pyara - pyara hai samaan...
ho gaye diwwane hum yahann...
dil ki ab yahi hai aarzooo...
mil jaye zameen se aasmaan... haaannn...
(and the same with naina...she forgot abt herself...she wants to touch his wet hair hairs his wet face...want to feel his wet lips...)

for raj:-
kitana pyara -pyara hai samaan...
ho gaye diwwane hum yahann...
heiii lalllallalallla
heiii lalllallalallla
heiii...
(raj turns naina and starts dancing with her...clouds are playing the music of their heart)

for naina:-
toot kar bikhar jane de...
saanson me utar jane de...
haannn...
toot kar bikhar jane de...
saanson me utar jane de...
(raj naina ko bahut hi zor se turn karta hai jisse naina raj ki bahon me gir jati hai...aur raj use bahut hi kas kar pakad leta hai...)

rok na mujhe pyar me...
had se, guzar jane de...hannn
madhosi wo chhaayi meri jaannn...
ho gaye diwane hum yahannn...
kitana pyara -pyara hai samaan...
ho gaye diwwane hum yahann...
(both are again looking at each other...both want eachother...both are carving for eachother...)

for raj:-
aake teri baahon me bhi...
jaane kyun sulagta hai mannn...
aake teri baahon me bhi...
jaane kyun sulagta hai mannn...
koi to bata de mujhe...
ishq hai ya mera pagal pannn...
mausham ne wo chhedi dastaan...
ho gaye diwaane hum yahan...
(their bodie was glued to each other...when raj captured her wet lips by his...at first it was a sweet peck...but at the end it become passionate...both were deeply involved in the kiss...after about 10 minutes both parted away breath...then raj realised what he done...and left naina and turns his face with guilt...naina sensed his guilt)

for naina:-
dil ki ab yahi hai aarzooo...
mil jaye zameen se aasmaan...
kitana pyara - pyara hai samaan...
ho gaye diwwane hum yahann...

(naina goes in from of him hold his face in her palm...and give a sweet peck on lips again...which make raj to close his eyes)

movie:- tumsa nahin dekha...

naina:- I LOVE U VEER...(raj opened his eyes) humne koi galti nahi ki hai veer...i know tumhe aisa lagta tha ki i loved huda...but that was wrong...jabse pyar ko jana hai...payr ko samjha hai...sirf tumhe hi pyar kiya hai veer...pichle 3 saalon aisa ek bhi pal nahi guzra jab maine tumhe na yaad kiya ho...kuchh nahin kahungi...bas itana hi kahungi...i love...i love u alot...will u be mine...(raj has tears of happiness..naina too...raj goes towards her held her face in his palm...kissed her on her forehead...and forcefully hugs her...and crying...and crying...and crying...)ab to wo keh do veer jise sunne ke liye maine 3 saal intezaar kiya...

raj:- sirf tumne nahi naina...maine bhi utana hi intezaar kiya hai...utana hi main bhi tadpa hun...mujhey is pal ko jee lene do...abhi bhi aisa lag raha hai...jaise main koi sapna dekh raha hoon...(they both were stanging in that hugging position for last 15 minutes...then raj separates her...)naina...janti ho maine bhi kabhi kwaab dekha tha ki meri zindagi me koi aayega...jo mujhe bahut chahega...sirf mujhe aur main use...jab tum meri zindagi me aayi thi to i used to hate u...par kab tumse ladte ladte...tumse nafrat karte karte...tumse pyar ho gaya pata hi nahi chal...tumhe yaad hai naina maine ek baar kaha tha...bahut hi badnaseeb hoga wo ladka jo tumse pyar karega...uska scrue dheela hoga...wo pagal hoga...aur dekho..aaj maine hi wo pagal nikal...kab mujhe apni is zalli se pyar ho gaya...pata hi nahi chala...bahut tadpa hun main naina...sirf ek soch ki tum kisi aur ke sath...mere badan me aag lag jati thi...main bahut swaarthi hoon naina...main tumhe kisi aur ke sath nahi dekh sakta(naina is smiling with tears...she likes her veer's possessiveness towards her)aaj main tumse kehta hoon...mujhe kisi baat kar dar nahi hai...sirf tumhe kho dene se darta hun...I LOVE U NAINA...i love u alot(naina closed her eyes and hugs him with fulll force...and rains pouring them...aaj to asmaan bhi inke milan ka jasn mana raha tha...)

after some time they both were sitting with their back on the rock...dono hi ek dusre ki bahon me the...aur yeh madmast hawaayein naina ki julfo ko uda rahi thi...to raj naina ki julfo se khel raha tha...naina raj ke hath ko apne haanth me liye hue apni aankhein band karke raj ki chest pe apna back rakh laga kar baithi hai...

naina(with closed eyes):- veer ek baat puchhu...??

raj:- ha puchho...

naina:- tumne mujhe academy me kyun nahi bataya tha ki u loved me...

raj:- naina wo...naina mujhe dar tha ki naveen kaise react karega...even sach kahu to mujhe abhi bhi is baat ka dar hai ki kahin wo tumhare liye phir se over protective ho gaya to...naina hum naveen ko kaise...(naina wants to laugh at this condition of raj but controls)

naina:- ha raj wo to hai...tumhe bhaiya ke saamne mera rishta lekar jana hoga...(now both are sitting on the rock and facing eachother)

raj;- kya pagal ho gayi ho kya...wo mujhe jaan se maar dega...

naina:- veer tum mujhse pyar nahi karte na...?

raj:- are karta hun baba...ab kya saboot dun...

naina:- agar mujhse sachha pyar karte ho na...to bhaiya se baat karoge...unse officially mera hanth magonge...aur ha raj plzzz unki shaadi tak to mang hi lena...bcz wo ma baba na...bhaiya ki sadi ke baad meri shaadi ka soch rahe hai...

raj;- kya itani jaldi...par itani jaldi kya hai...abhi to main bachha hun...

naina:- aap aur bachhe...mr rajveer aap 26 saal ke ho rahe hai aur khud ko bachha keh rahe ho...aur waise bhi bachhe wo nahi karte jo aapne kiya...

raj(mischief smile);- maine kya kiya...naina?

naina:- wo...wo wahi...jo thodi der pehle kiya...

raj;- are wahi to puchh raha hun kya kiya...

naina;- raj bano mat ha...

raj:- achha yeh batao...tumne mujhe kyun nahi bataya that u loved me...

naina:- main to tumhe kma me hi batane wali thi...par tumhara bhaiya ka jhgda ho gaya...aur tum mujhse bhagne lage...aur phir do saal tak tumhara kuchh pata hi nahi tha...us beech maine huda ko bhi uske kiye ki saza de di thi...phir hum yahan mile to mujhe pata chala ki ishaani loved u(dhamake on raj's face)aur jab wo veer bulati thi to mujhe bilkul achha nahi lagta tha...mujhe aisa lagne laga ki sayad tum bhi ishaani se pyar karte ho bas isliye kabhi keh nahi payi...wo jab tumhe goli lagi thi aur tum hospital me the...tab mujhe ishaani ne bataya ki tum use nahi mujhse pyar karte ho...aur phir huda ne tumhari bhi galatfehmi door ki...kya hua raj...i know maine galat...

raj;- ishaani mujhse??

naina:- haan...but ab wo samajhchuki hai ki...tum sirf uske dost bann sakte ho...and u know what mujhe armaan ne bataya hai ki he proposed her again...aur ishaani ne waqt manga hai...iska matalab...ushaani bhi apni life me aage badh rahi hai...

raj:- wait again matalab...

naina:- a armaan ne pehel bhi ishaani ko propose kiya tha but ishaani ne tumhari wajah se refuse kar diya tha...aur armaan ko sab sach bata diya...about me huda, and u...fir armaan ne bhi ishaani ki help ki thi...huda ka pata lagane me...

raj:- oh ...naina...ishaani sirf meri bahut achhi dost hai...jab maine naveen aur aalekh ko kho diya tha...tab sirf ishaani thi mere sath...isliye...she has a special place in my heart...tumm plzz...

naina:- nahi veer...mujhe ishaani se koi problm nahi hai...aur humein to bbahgwaan ka shukriyaa ada karna chahiye ki humein itane achhe dost mile hai...hai na?(raj nods in yes...and both hugs..)bas mujhe ek problem hai...

raj:- kya...?

naina:- ishaani ko keh do ki...tumhe veer na bulaye...tumhe veer bulane ka haq sirf mera hai...

raj:- tum pagal ho gayi ho...wo to humesha se mujhe veer bulati hai...

naina:- nahin...usse pehle se main apne aap se jab bhi tumhari baat karti thi to main hi tumhe tumhe veer bulati thi so use mana karo...samajhe...

raj:- naina tum itani chhoti baat pe...

naina(gusse se uth jati hai):- yeh tumhare liye chhoti hogi mere liye nahi samajhe(aur jakar fir chairs ke pass khadi ho jati hai...raj bhi bahut hi cute smile ke sath uske peeche jata hai...)

raj:- naina...(but naina makes a face)..naina...(now raj held her from her waist...)naina...(now raj wishpers in her ears...)i love u naina...(naina turns and hugs himm and wishpers)

naina:- u know very how to handle me...

raj(also wishpers):- i know u cant resist my touch...(raj seperates naina...and again both have a passionate kiss...after some time raj picks her up in his arm and returned to his car...dono ko pata hi nahi chala ki we bahut hi jayada late ho gaye the...we jab base camp pahunche to already 2 baj chuki thi...raj ne naina ko uske room ke bahar chhoda aur uske fore head pe kiss karke apne room ki ore chala gaya...par in dono ko hi nahi pata tha ki naveen ne in dono ko dekh liya...naveen naina k liye pareshaan tha...aur na wo khud soya na hi aalekh ko sone diya...)

naveens room...

naveen:- wo dono abhi aaye hai...

aalekh:- sukra hai ab main jaun...

naveen:- wo dono itani ko aaye hai...

aalekh:- tu unpe shaq kar raha hai...naveen teri isi bebuniyaad saq ki wajah se hum sab almost 3 saal tak door rahe... naina 3 saalon se bas raj ka intezaar kar rahi thi...

naveen:- main saq nahi kar raha hu...mujhe unn dono pe trust hai...wo kabhi mera trust nahi todeinge...but as a brother meri bhi kuchh responsibilties hai...yar tu kya kehta hai...main maa baba se baat karu inki sadi ke liye...

aalekh:- baat to tu sahi bol raha hai...but abhi wait kar...kyuki abhi teri aur meri sadi ki date fix hui hai...aur abhi un dono ko kuchh waqt de...pyar to we ek dusre ko barso se karte hai...par uske beech galat fehmiyaan bhi thi...aur phir agle ek mahina humsab ek sath honge hi...is beech dono aur kareeb aayeinge...fir hum humari sadi ke baad inki sadi ki bhi baat kareinge..tere ma baba se ok...

naveen;- hmmm tu sahi keh raha hai...waise bhi abhi bhi...mujhe ek doubt hai...

aalekh:- kya?

naveen:-mujhe abhi surity nahi hai ki raj ne naina ko propose kar diya hoga...u know wo kitana dumbo hai...

aalekh:- sahi kaha tune...ab to soja mere baad me dekh leinge jo hona hoga...(naveen nods and both slept)

yahan raj aur naina dono hi apne bed par hai...dono ko hi apni yeh yaad gaar shaam yaad a rahi hai...dono ki aankh nam hai to honthon pe mushkaan hai...

tabhi raj remembers:------naina:- agar mujhse sachha pyar karte ho na...to bhaiya se baat karoge...unse officially mera hanth magonge...aur ha raj plzzz unki shaadi tak to mang hi lena...bcz wo ma baba na...bhaiya ki sadi ke baad meri shaadi ka soch rahe hai...


raj;- oh no...main naveen ke saamne kaise...raj beta tu to gaya...agar naveen ko bola ki tu uski behen se shadi karna chahta hai...to sayad wo tujhe jaan se maar dega...aur agar tune naveen ko nahi bola...to naina to 100% tujhe jaan se maar degi...soch raj...warna tu kawara hi saheed ho jayega...soch...

next day...

sabhi loge hariyaana ke liye train me baithe hai aur masti aur mazaak ke sath...hariyaana ja rahe hai... huda ne pooja ko bhi invite kar liya hai to pooja bhi direct huda ke gahr pahuch jayegi...raj and naina glancing eachother time to time...and some time naina blushes hard...every one noticed that...but no one saying a word to them...

(pooja ghai...(played by gajal rai) ali ki gf...aur fiance...they are lovers from their school)

now all are sitting at porch side of huda's house...sam ke ghar wale bhi aa chuke hai...pure ghar ko do hisso me divide kiya gaya hai...ek taraf ladke wale hai to ek taraf ladki wale...sabhi boys huda ki taraf hai to sabhi girls sameera ki taraf...

huda's mummy:-are puttar ji kya aap loge asie baitho ho...yaradi wala ghar hai masti karo dhamaal karo aur ha..naveen raj aalekh...sam ko tum sab ko huda k sath shopping pe jana hai...samajh gaye...

raj:- aunty...wo aap in sab ko bhej do wo kya hai na...ki main yahin ghar aapki help karunga...

huda's mom:- ohh...mera sona puttar...oye huda kuchh seekh raj se...

raj:- haan aunty...ab aap akele itana saarraaa kaam kareingi...aur main wahan masti karu...isliye...ap na in logon ko jane do main aapke sath hi rahuga...

huda's mom:- theek hai puttar...achha main to batana hi bhool gayi,,naveen,raj aalekh aur baki sabhi loge...aap sab ke parrents bhi sangeet ke din tak yahan aa jayeinge...

raj:- kya...humare paarents par kyun...

aalekh:- haan aunty unko kyun bulaya...(naina hits him on his arm)

naina:- are aunty theek kiya aapne...hum sab jayeinge shopping k liye u dont worry aur haan baki koi aur bhi kaam ho to jarur bataiyega...

huda's mom:- theek hai puttar...(she left and naveen and aalekh lookig at raj with tu to gaya look)

raj:- what??

naveen:- to tu nahi jayega...

raj:- hey u all know na i just hate shopping...i cant go...u guys go and enjoy...main aunty ko ghar me help karunga...tum loge jaao aur khao bahar ka pizza burger main to khaunga...makke ki roti te sarso ka saag...min to chala byeee...(and raj winks at them and left)...

aalekh:- naina kuchh kar na...

naina:- main kya kar sakti hoon...

sam:- tum loge lado hum sab abhi aate hai ready hokar...(all left...but only naina naveen and aalekh is there and naveen and aalekh is looking at naina ab kuchh bolegi...)...

naina:- what??

aalekh:- yeh bata ki parso raat ko tu aur raj kaha gaye the...(naina is shocked)

naina:- what??

naveen:- dekh humse mat chhupa to hi behtar hai...ab jaldi bata...tune use kaha ya usne tujhe...(naina reminds abt their dinner dance rain ,kiss and finally,,,their confession)a...

naina:-wo actually ishaani was right...agar main use propose na karti to wo kabhi mujhe na kehta ki he loves me...use dar hai ki naveena bhaiya kaise react kareinge...

aalekh:- kya...abhi bhi uske dimaag me yeh chal raha hai...par tum dono ne to confess kar liya na...

naina(blushing):- yes...that was my first and best date in my life...par...

aalekh:- par kya...

naina(giggling):- wo actually bhaiya maine na raj ko abhi bhi nahi bataya hai ki aap humare pyar ke bare me bahut pehle se sab kuchh jante ho...isliye maine use kaha ki aalekh aur aapki saadi tak use aapse mera hanth officially mangana hoga...aur u wont belive me bhaiya...wo bahut dara hua hai...par aap loge plzz use mat batana ki aap ko sab pata hai...kyuki u know na...

aalekh:- dhaashu yaar...naveen soch raj tere saamne naina ka hanth mangega...uska dara hua face...(naveen is laughing...)

naveen:- abe maja aa jayega...(but in teeno ko hi nahi pata tha ki raj ne inaki baat sunli aur use jahan naina pe gussa aa raha tha to uske dimmag me in teeno ko hi maja chakhaane ka plan pak raha tha...but now he is very muchh relaxed ki naveen ko uske aur naina ke ristey se koi problem nahi hai)ab aayega raj ko macha chakhane ka maja...waise sis...m very happy for both of u...and dont worry...humari sadi hone k baad hi...main ma baba se tere aur raj ke liye baat karunga...(naina hugs him...)

naina:- ohh...thanku bhaiya...u r the best bro in this world(raj smiles at thier love)

aalekh:- aur main...

naina:- tu bhi aa ja...(all three hug...and raj left smile on his face)...

aalekh:- oye sunn...sala wo tera hero bahut smart banta hai...ab yeh tera kaam hai ki tu raj ko shopping par lekar aayegi...

naina:- main kaise wo nahin aayega...

naveen:- humein dekh...chahe hum jitani bhi jung jeet le...par shalu aur neelu ke saamne haar hi jate hai...to raj bhi tere saamne haar hi jayega...ab jaa aur use fasa...

aalekh:- han ja aur raj par jam kar raj kar... i mean hukum chala..ab wo tera personal naukar hai...ja...(naina left with wide smile)

naveen:- abe bechara raj...wo to gaya...naina usko nahi chhodegi...soch jab inki shadi ho jayegi to kaun kis par raj karega...

aalekh:- yeh to abhi apun nahi bata sakta bas itana hi keh sakta hai ki...ab tak raj humpe hasta tha ab hum uspe haseinge...(both hi five and left...)...


in kitchen raj kuchh ladies ke sath baitha hai...aur apple khate hue unki tarifo ke pool baandh raha hai...tabhi naina wahan jati hai aur raj ko tumhara kuchh nahi ho sakta look deta hai...

naina:- veer...i want to talk to u...

raj:- kyun??

naina:- kyun kya.,...mujhe tumse kaam hai...mere sath mere room me aao...(naina left aur raj cute si smile ke sath uske peeche uske room me jata hai...)...

raj:- haan bolo kya kaam hai?

naina:- ready ho jaao mujhe shopping pe jana hai...

raj:- to main kya karu...jaao na...maine mana kiya kya...

naina(holds his collar):- veer tumhari gf ko shopping pe jana hai...aur tum use lekar jaoge aur shopping...karaoge...and dont u dare to say no to me...bcz main jaungi to sirf tumhare sath aur shopping bhi tumhari pasand se karungi...(raj is gazing at her)what ab kuchh bologe...

raj:- naina agar tum isi tarah baatein samjhaogi na...to i swear main tyumhe abhi sadi kar lunga...abur fir...hum dono ek sath ek kamre me...(naina left him )

naina:- kya bakwaas kar rahe ho... jao aur jakar ready ho jao...(looking at her with intence eyes...turns her to himself)

raj:- as ur wish my jaan...(then he placed his lips on hers...and they have their first ever kiss after the confession...it was full of passion and thrust...then raj separates...)u know i just love the taste of ur lipstic...(naina blushing hard and hugs him tightly)...naina ab main jaun...ready hone...shopping pe jana hai na...(naina left him and raj left to his room get ready...and all left to shopping mall)...

ishaani:- raj...tum to nahi aane wale the na...to phir...(naveen and aalekh winks at eachother)

raj:- a...wo ishu...wo mujhe bhi yaad aa gaya ki kuchh shopping karni hai mujhe isliye..main bhi aa gaya...

aalekh in raj's ears:- kitana saaf jhuth bolta hai na tu,...naina ne dhamaki jo di hai...tujhe to aana hi tha...

raj:- yeh kya bakwaas kar raha hai...

aalekh:- apun ko bachha samjha hai kya...abe jis club me tune parso admission li hai...apun uska super senior member hai...sab pata hai ki jab loge apne pyar ka izhaar kar lete hai to unke beech kya kya...(raj placed his hands on aalekh's mouth...)

raj;- chup be...naveen sun lega...aur baki sab kya socheinge...tujhe jo karna ya kehna ho neelu ke sath ha...

aalekh:- wahi to apun keh raha hai...ki jaldi se naveen se apni aur naina ki baat karle...warna agar koi aur naina ke liye naveen ko pasand aa gaya na to...

raj:- ha ha theek hai theek hai...

end of part 20
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful part loved it
raj and naina feelings and confession finally wow
naven and aalekh planning to tease raj and vice versa wow
rn moments were amazing
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi
the up is really good
so naina and raj finally confessed their love yipeee
but he is still feeling scared as what naveen will think
poor boy needs some guts dont worry raj he will accept u
so they have gone to huda's wedding
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Last two updates were awesome! Specially the last one👏...Naina KO sab pata chala,she ttok the initiative and finally both of them confessed... Waiting for more RN romantic moments in future updates..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dcrn

Last two updates were awesome! Specially the last one👏...Naina KO sab pata chala,she ttok the initiative and finally both of them confessed... Waiting for more RN romantic moments in future updates..



Thanx dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is really good
so naina and raj finally confessed their love yipeee
but he is still feeling scared as what naveen will think
poor boy needs some guts dont worry raj he will accept u
so they have gone to huda's wedding
plz cont soon and pm me



Thanx alot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome part 👏👏👏👏 loved it ❤️ start me to dara hi dya tum ne😡😡 but finally sb thik to hua raj naina ne confess kar hi liya 😊😊first kiss oh my god ☺️ hahaha bechara raj kse mange ga naveen se naina ka hath ye naina bhi na 😆😆😆😆huda sam ki shadi intresting maza aayega 😊😊how sweet raj ne kitna acha idea nikala shoping pe na jane ka 😆😆 magar naina bhi naina hi hai mana hi lya us ne 👏👏 or ye aalekh or naveen kse dost hain raj k uska mazaq bnate hue sharam nhi aarahi 😡😡pr mere raj ne bhi sb sun liya bachoo ab wo tum tino ko maza chakhayega 😆😆😆😆great part cont sooon thanx for pm 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ambersaleem

awsome part👏 loved it❤️ start me to dara hi dya tum ne😡😡 but finally sb thik to hua raj naina ne confess kar hi liya😊😊first kiss oh my god☺️ hahaha bechara raj kse mange ga naveen se naina ka hath ye naina bhi na😆huda sam ki shadi intresting maza aayega😊😊how sweet raj ne kitna acha idea nikala shoping pe na jane ka😆😆 magar naina bhi naina hi hai mana hi lya us ne👏👏 or ye aalekh or naveen kse dost hain raj k uska mazaq bnate hue sharam nhi aarahi😡😡pr mere raj ne bhi sb sun liya bachoo ab wo tum tino ko maza chakhayega😆great part cont sooon thanx for pm👏



Thanks alot dear

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