Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51 - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous
Officially all are ready for raj and naina marriage
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Awesome part loved it
Finally all masti and raj teasing naveen and alekh wow
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wow nice part
raj ka toh bank balance khatam kr ke he chanlegi naina
raj ne toh kamal kr diya kaha naveen raj ki khichai krne wala tha par raj toh usse do kadam aahe nikla uski mummy papa ko he pata liya naina ke liye

cook competition toh kamal ka tha
naina ki dance performance toh kamal ki thi maza aa gaya

huda gaya honeymoon pe great
ab naveen or alekh ki bari h ghodi chadne ki

jaldi se raj naina ki shadi bhi kara do chandni
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Reply for part 20:-

Great update.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Raj's love for Naina didn't let him go and same as Naina.😊 😊 Naina's love and her closeness gave him his life back.
Raj was still confused about Huda and Naina's relationship.πŸ˜• πŸ˜• But thank god Huda both the sweets and good news at right moment.πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Finally Raj is relaxed and now he can enjoy Huda's marriage without any tension.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ Naina ko hi initiate karna tha aur good that she planned about their romantic date and she proposed him 😳 😳 and Raj was unable to believe his own ears that she proposed her. He almost forget about Naveen.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† The dance and all romantic sequence was nice.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Three pairs are marrying one after another.πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ Now they are heading towards Huda's marriage.😊 😊 Naveen a concerned brother and didn't let Alekh rest but now he is relaxed but still he wants to tease Raj.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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<font color="#3333FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Reply for part 20:-

Great update.πŸ‘πŸ‘ Raj's love for Naina didn't let him go and same as Naina.😊 😊 Naina's love and her closeness gave him his life back.</font><font color="#3333FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#3333FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"> </font></font><font color="#3333FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#3333FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#3333FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"></font></font> Raj was still confused about Huda and Naina's relationship.πŸ˜•πŸ˜• But thank god Huda both the sweets and good news at right moment.πŸ˜›πŸ˜› Finally Raj is relaxed and now he can enjoy Huda's marriage without any tension.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ Naina ko hi initiate karna tha aur good that she planned about their romantic date and she proposed him😳😳 and Raj was unable to believe his own ears that she proposed her. </font><font color="#3333FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#3333FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"></font> He almost forget about Naveen.πŸ˜†πŸ˜† The dance and all romantic sequence was nice.πŸ‘πŸ‘ Three pairs are marrying one after another.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ Now they are heading towards Huda's marriage.😊😊 Naveen a concerned brother and didn't let Alekh rest but now he is relaxed but still he wants to tease Raj.πŸ˜‰ </font>πŸ˜‰



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wow nice part
raj ka toh bank balance khatam kr ke he chanlegi naina
raj ne toh kamal kr diya kaha naveen raj ki khichai krne wala tha par raj toh usse do kadam aahe nikla uski mummy papa ko he pata liya naina ke liye

cook competition toh kamal ka tha
naina ki dance performance toh kamal ki thi maza aa gaya

huda gaya honeymoon pe great
ab naveen or alekh ki bari h ghodi chadne ki

jaldi se raj naina ki shadi bhi kara do chandni
thanks for pm



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Thanks every one posting part 22 soon
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***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
part 22

naveen & aalekh(run after him to hit him):- teri toh...(and raj runs away)...

its the time before sangeet ki tabhi naina apne ma baba ke kamre me aati hai...

maya:- naina chal yahan kya kar rahi hai..chal beta humein hotel pahunchna hai...aur yeh raj aur aalekh ready hue kya...

naina:- ma..baba mujhe aap dono se kuchh bat karni hai...

harshad:- are beta baad me kareinge na...abhi chalo...

naina:- nahi baba...main aap dono se kuchh chhipana nahi chahti...

maya:- aisi kya baat hai beta...(naina maya ko bed par bithati hai aur uske god me apna sir rakh leti hai)

naina:- maa yeh sach hai ki mujhe aapka aur baba ka meri raj ki sadi ko lekar jo faysla hai wo manzoor hai...but maa mujhe wo isliye manzoor hai kyuki main raj se pyar karti hun...

maya:- kya sach mein...are beta yeh to bahut achhi baat hai...

naina:- nahin maa...main raj se kal ya aaj se nahi balki pichle 3 saalo se pyar karti hun(maya and harshad both are shocked)jabse main kma me thi tab se...actually ma wo...(then naina told them every abt her, naveen and raj...)maa main aap dono se kuchh chhipana nahi chahti thi bas isliye...

maya:- naina meri baat ka sach sach jawaab dena...kahin tune aur raj ne apni seemaye to...

naina:- nahi maa...aisa kuchh bhi nahi hai...

maya:- dekh naina mujhe khushi hai ki tune humein sab bata diya...

harshad:- ha bachha...aur ab hum aur bhi jyada khush hai tere liye...bahut saha hai tune naina...tu ek bata to deti ki tu raj se to hum bahut pehle hi...

naina:- haan...baba par us waqt halaat mere sath nahi the...par ab raj aur raj ka pyar dono hi mere sath hai...

maya:- hum tere liye khush hai beta...bas naveen ki shadi hote hi hum mr and mrs shekhawat se baat kareinge...(tabhi maya looks at raj who was at door)are raaj wahan kyun khade ho andar aao...

harshad:- kya hua beta...(raj looks at naina then maya and harshad...)

raj:- actually uncle...jo kuchh bhi abhi naina ne aapse kaha...wo sab sach hai...aur main bhi aap logon se yahin baat karne aaya tha...main bhi chahta tha ki aap ko sab sach pata ho par...mere kuchh bolne se pehle hi naina ne aap dono ko...uncle aunty...i m sorry agar humari wajah se aap dono ko dukh hua ho to...bas aap logo ko koi problm na ho isliye mom ne humari sadi ki baaat ki thi(naina looks at raj and raj assures her with his eyes)...

maya:- nahi raj humein koi aitraaz nahi...balki humien khushi hai ki humare bachhe...itane pyare aur achhe hai...bas tujhse yahi kahungi...meri naina ka humesha khyaal rakhna...

raj:- aap chinta mat kijiye aunty naina meri zindagi hai...

harshad;- achha ab chale...(raj nods in yes and both raj and harshad left and naina is looking at that direction with smile...)

maya;- naina kya hua?

naina:- maa mera veer kitana achha hai na?(naina realised what she said and bites her lips)

maya(teasing her):- oh mera veerrr...haannn...(naina hugs her)

naina:- kya maa aap bhi...

maya:- naina ab chale...(naina nods in yes and both left)


hotel...at sangeet of Naveen - Shalu...and Aalekh - Neelu...

sabhi hotel me maujud hai...all are enjoying very muchh...aalekh neelu aur shalu naveen ko ek stage pe bithaya hai...tabhi huda waha aata hai...

huda:- kya yar tum logon ka sangeet ek dum boring hai...mera sangeet dekha tha in jananio ne kya rang jamaya tha...specially meri phoolan par wo to nazar bhi nahi a rahi hai...kaha hai wo...

aalekh mom:- are beta aati hi hogi...agar aisi hi baat hai to tum hi kuchh achha sa dance kardo akhir kar tumhare frnds ka sangeet hai...

huda:- wo to huda karega aunty ji...bas huda yeh soch raha tha ki phoolan ke bhaiyo ka sangeet aur wo hai ki koi dhamal masti nahi...

aalekh:- tu kyun itana utavla ho raha hai...use kuchh waqt de akhir kar ab uski bhi to sadi hone waali hai...

huda:- kya baat kar raha hai haa yar yeh bhi sach hai...(tabhi sam comes)

naveen:- sam tu apne is bandar ko lekar ja yahan se bahut paka raha hai...

huda:- kya bola be...

raj(comes):- what happend...sab itane shant kyun ho...koi nach kyun nahi raha ...

aalekh:- abe nachana to tujhe chahiye...aaj tera rishta almost pakka jo ho gaya hai...(raj blushing)

raj;- to maine kab mana kiya...par mera partner kaha hai...(tabhi peeche se gane ki awaaz aati hai...all look at that side and raj is memrised by that site)...

mainu roge laga de ishq daaa...
koi rang chadha de ishq daaa...
mainu gale laga ke saajanaa...
taabiz tu paa de ishq daaa...
(naina is dancing with some girl...when aalekh pushed raj in the middle and winks at him)

tere ishq me paagal ho gaya... diwaana tera ree...
tere ishq me paagal ho gaya... diwaana tera ree...
sach hote- hote ho gaya...afsana mera ree...

(raj also starts dancing with huda and ali...)

mahiyaaannn...tere pyarr me...
dubi... main bhi dubi reee...
dubi... main bhi dubi reee...
(naina is looking at raj and dancing with sam and pooja...)

ishq me paagal ho gaya diwaana tera ree...
sach hote- hote ho gaya...afsana mera ree...
(ali is dancing infront of pooja and is smiling )

mahiyaaannn...tere pyarr me...
dubi... main bhi dubi reee...
dubi... main bhi dubi reee...
(pooja holds ali with his arm...and dancing looking at ali's eye)

aati hai gagan se, sadaayieenn...
aashique hai to, pyaar nibhayeieen...
(sam looks at huda and gives him warm hug)

aisi kahani... likh jayieennn...
premi jisko... dohraayeinn...
(huda separates her and kissed her forehead)

duniyaan se alag hai...dil ka lagana tera ree...
duniyaan se alag hai...dil ka lagana tera ree...
mahiyaaannn...tere pyarr me...
dubi... main bhi dubi reee...
dubi... main bhi dubi reee...
(naina is standing behind her and aalekh moms and singing looking at raj)

phir se jara mujhe kehna...
baat jo hai tere dil me hai naa...
kaise bhala tune janaa...neend udi, mera udd gaya chaina...
dheere se mujhe bata gaya...sharmaana tera re...
dheere se mujhe bata gaya...sharmaana tera re...
(raj goes to naina held her hand make her to come frwrd kissed her forehead which make naina to close her eye..and a tear drop flows down to her cheek)

mahiyaaannn...tere pyarr me...
dubi... main bhi dubi reee...
dubi... main bhi dubi reee...
(naina is looking at raj and raj with full love in his eyes wipes her tears...

ishq me paagal ho gaya... diwaana tera ree...
sach hote- hote ho gaya...afsana mera ree...
(raj makes her to come middle of the hall and starts dancing around her)

mahiyaaannn...tere pyarr me...
dubi... main bhi dubi reee...
dubi... main bhi dubi reee...
(naina also dancing and looking at raj...)

tere ishq me paagal ho gaya... diwaana tera ree...
tere ishq me paagal ho gaya... diwaana tera ree...
sach hote- hote ho gaya...afsana mera ree...
tere ishq me paagal ho gaya... diwaana tera ree...
tere ishq me paagal ho gaya... diwaana tera ree...
sach hote- hote ho gaya...afsana mera ree...
(all are dancing...and harshad and maya are just looking at raj naina...and they can see the happiness on naina face...which make them very happy and relaxed...and now they can say that raj and naina are fully devoted to each other and just perfect and made for eachother...raj goes and make naveen aalekh shalu and neelu to dance...)

movie:- humko tumse pyar hai...

all are happy with such delighted function...they all can say...these day are one of the best moment of thier life... aaj neelu aur shalu ki mehandi aur haldi hui...pahle haldi aalekh aur naveen ko lagi fir wahi haldi naina lekar aayi aur neelu aur shalu ki haldi ki rasam hui...aise hi dekhte dekhte kab sari rasme puri ho gayi kisi ko pata hi nahi chala aur mehandi me to sabhi boys ne speacially apna naam apni gf ya wife k hanthon me likha...raj pehle to sharma raha tha but sab ke force karne aur maya k kahne par wo naina ke pass gaya aur cone utha kar apna aur naina dono ka maan ek dil ke ander likh diya...

raj:- naina...mehandi to kya...is duniyaan me jab bhi rajveer ka naam liya jayega to uske sath naina ka naam ho na jaruri hai...warna rajveer ke naam ke koi mayne hi nahi...(tears and smile both appears on naina's eyes)yeh kya naina...main dekh raha hu...ki kuchh din baat baat pe tumhari inn khubsurat aankhon me paani aa jata hai...aur yakeen mano...tumhari ankhon se gira har ek aanshun mere dil ko cheer kar nikalta hai...plzzz mere liye hi sahi roya mat kiya karo...(naina smiles and wipes her tears)...

naina:- ok mr shekhawat i promise u jab tum mere ho to meri ankhon me anshun nahi hoga...(both hugs...ki naveen comes and coughs...)

raj:- aa gaya...kabab me haddi...

naveen:- oh hello jayad bola na...to abhi tum dono ki shadi cancell karwa dunga...

raj:- achha itani hai tujhme...

naveen:- ha hai...aur bhul mat wo meri behen hai...

raj:- aur tu bhi bhul mat main tera hone wala jeeja hun...tameez se baat kiya kar...

naveen:- oye tameez gayi tel lene...naina,...abhi kuchh din jab tak officially shadi nahi ho jati...isse door reh...

naina:- bhaiya yeh aap...

naveen:- kaha na...bas ab chal yahan se...(naveen naina ka hanth pakad kar le jata hai...aur naina mud mud kar raj ko dekh rahi hai...)naina..rasta saamne hai peeche nahi...

raj:- ja ja sale meri muhabbat ka dushman hai tu...tu bhai nahi kashai hai...dekh lunga tujhe main...mera bhi din aayega...

its a wedding day of aalekh and naveen...sabhi sadi ko bahut enjoy kar rahe hai...subah khuda k parrents aur raj parrents bhi aa gaye the...aur raj ne jab apne mom dad ko sab bataya to we bahut khush hue ab unhone yeh decide kiya hai ki we mr and mrs alhuwalia se raj aur naina ki sadi ki tarikh ke bare me baat kark hi deldi jayege...

now its night time...shalu aur neelu dono hi apne kamre me naveen aur aalekh ka wait kar rahi thi...jab aalekh gaya apne room me to naina ko pehle use pure 10000 rupaye dene pade then wo apne kamre me ja paya...aur usne apna darwaja jaldi se band kar liya...par jab naveen ki bari aayi to use naina ko 10 nahi balki 20000 hazar rupaye dene pade...aur jaise hi naveen andar gaya aur usne shalu ka ghunghat uthaya...to wo chillata hua bahar bhaga...

naveen:- bhoot...bhoot...(tabhi naina aur raj sam, ali aur pooja ishaani aur armaan ke sath bahar aaye...aur sabhi naveen ki halat pe has rahe the...aur unke peeche se haste hue shalu bhi bahar aayi...)shalu tum yahan to ander kaun aur...

huda:- ander hum the...janu...

naveen:- tu...

huda(naveen ke gale lag kar):- ha janu chalo na...suhaag rat manate hai...

naveen:- ayee...door reh...(raj is laughing like hell...)i m damn sure yeh wahiyaat idea tera hi hoga raj...

raj:- ha hai toh...

naveen:- kuchh nahi...(again huda ka hanth pakad kar)chalo shalu...

raj:- abe wo huda hai...(naveen hadbada kar huda ka hanth chhod deta hai...aur shalu ko lekar ander jane lagta hai...)kitani jaldi hai na ise...bachho aakhein band karlo...(naveen gives him a dekh lunga look and all are laughimg...)...

pooja:- hey chalo aalekh aur neelu ko bhi pareshaan karte hai...

raj:- nahin...rehne de...aalekh ke mujhpar bahut sare ehsaan hai...use baksh do...

naina:- ha ha...chalo chal kar so jao aur phir hum sab ko packing bhi karni hai...aur parso report bhi karna hai...bhaiya aur aalekh ko to ek week ka extention mil gaya hai par humien nahi...so chale...(all retires to their room...)

next day...
subah ko neelu aur shalu ne milkar sabhi ke liye halwa banaya...sabhi bahut hi exited ho kar kha bhi rahe the...tabhi veena uar vikash ne mr aur mrs alhuwalia se raj naina k rishtey ki bat chhed di...naina uth kar wahan se chali gayi par wahi tha...

veena:- to maya ji kya socha hai aapne...

maya:- veena ji humein yeh rishta manzoor hai...ap jab kahe hum raj naina ki shadi kara deinge...

vikash:- thats great to bhabhi ji ab se hum samdhi samdhan hue...muh meetha karaiye...aur pandit ji ko bhi jaldi bula lijiye...humein to apni bahu le jane ki bahut jaldi hai,,,kyun raj...

raj:- jaisa aap loge theek samjho...

naveen to aalekh's ears:- kya natak karta hai...sabse jyada jaldi to ise hi hogi...

thodi der baad padit ji aate hai...

pandit ji:- dekhiye jajmaan...sadi ke jitane bhi subh muhurat hai sab isi hafte ke hai...iske baad pitar pachha lag jayega to 3 maah tak koi bhi subh muhurat nahi hai...

maya:- kya par itani jaldi kaise...

allekh's mom:- pandit ji 3 mahine baad kaun sa muhurat hai...

pandit ji:- ji aaj se 3 mah bad 7 october ko sadi ka bahut hi subh muhurat hai...aur dono hi bachho ki kundali bhi puri tarah se mel khati hai...aisa lagta hai mano ek dusre k liye hi bane hai...

aalekh's mom:- to bhai saab aap loge aisa karein ki aaj sham ko hi...inka roka aur engage ment kar dete hai...aur phir shadi 3 mahine baad...

veena:- par itani jaldi wo bhi aaj sam ko hi...

naveen:- actually aunty kal se raj naina ko hi duty join karni hai..isliye inhe kal early morning nikalna hoga...to hum bas ghar ghar ke loge milkar engagement aur bariksha kar dete hai...phie shaadi to dhoom dham se karni hi hai...

vikash:- i thing..naveen sahi keh raha hai...waise bhi engegement kar dena achha hoga...ab dekho na...sabhi loge hai to yahan...aap kya kehte hai bhai saab...

harshad:- theek hai...agar aap logon ko koi pareshaani nahi hai to humein bhi nahi hai...

naveen:- baba bilkul sahi keh rahe hai...ma maan jao na...

maya:- theek hai...chalo ab utho sab humare pass sirf 7 ghante hai...

aalekh:- are aunty ap fikar mat karo apun aur naveen hai na...3 -4 ghanto me sara intezaam ho jayega...huda ali tum dono jao raj ke sath aur raj ki taraf se sara intezaam dekho...aur main aur naveen naina ki taraf se sab kar leinge..(all are happy and retire to their work...sabhi bahut hi jaldi aur exitment ke sath kam kar rahe hai...)

shalu naina ke room me aati hai...

naina:- bhanhi...is pooja ko mana karo na..kab se mujhe chhed rahi hai...

shalu:- ha pooja kyun chhed rahi ho humari nanad ji ko...oh kahi humare nandoi ji ko lekar to nahi...

naina:- bhabhi...

neelu:- achha achha...dekh naina...yeh brown lehga kaisa hai tere liye...

naina:- wo neelu its beautifull...

neelu:- ha to theek hai tu ise hi pehenna...

pooja:- hey abhi ali ne bataya ki we raj k eliye black aur red suit lekar aaye hai...tum dono ka cobination to bahut mast lagega...

shalu:- neelu yeh raj aur naina dono ki engagement ring hai abhi pane rakh tu...

neel:- ok...chalo chalo ab hum sab bhi taiyyar ho jaye...

neelu and aalekh's room...

neelu:- kya hua aalekh kya soch raha hai...

aalekh:- neelu..apun aaj unn dono ke liye bahut khush hain...tu to janti hai ki apun naina ko behen manta hai...aur dekh na aaj naina ki sagai apun ke ghar se ho rahi hai to...bahut achha lag raha hai...ki aaj apun ki behen...

naina(aalekh and neelu turns):- aalekh main kaisi lag rahi hun...(aalekh goes and hugs naina)...are tu ro raha hai...dont worry abhi shadi ko 3 mahina hai...

aalekh:- apun janta hai par...

naina:- mujhe pata hai...ki tu kyun emotional ho raha hai...aur sach kahu aalekh aaj main bhi bahut khsuh hun...ki meri sagai mere ek bhai ke ghar se ho rahi hai...aur shadi dusre bhai ke ghar se hogi...is tarah main in dono gharo me apni yadein basa kar jaungi...(naina hugs aalekh)

naveen:- dekha shalu yeh dono akele akele hi...guys mujhe bhi shamil kar lo...(then naveen naina and aalekh all hug and cried to...)

shalu:- achha ab chale raj neeche wait kar raha hai...

sabhi loge neeche jate hai jahan par sari taiyyari ho chuki hai...naina ko dekhte hi raj ki nazare us par tham jati hai kyuki aaj naina is duniyaan me sab se jyada khubsurat lag rahi thi...aisa nahi tha ki raj ne kabhi nain ako indian dress me is tarah taiyaar nahi dekha tha...par aaj naina ki ankhon aur chehere ki chamak hi kuchh aur thi...sara intezam jaldi me hua...par jo bhi tha sab bahut achha tha..yehi haal naina ka tha...aaj tak naina apne payar ko dekhti thi par ab wo raj me apne hone wale pati ko dekh rahi hai...shalu aur neelu naina ko bith dete hai aur veena ji aur shanta tai aa kar sabse pehle naina ka roka karte hai...aur phir viskah aur veena naina ki bareeksha...wahi phir maya aur harshad aakar nariyal aur kapdo ke sath rajveer ki bareeksha karte hai...pjir inhe stage par khada kar diya jata hai...shalu naina ko ring deti hai...jo naina sarmate hue raj ko pehna deti hai...phir neelu raj ko ring deti hai...jo raj naina ko pehna deta hai...naina ki ring me 'R' engrave tha to raj ki ring me 'N'...isi tarah inki engage ment hoti hai...

raj:- oye...hum dono ne tum sab ki saadi me itana dhmaal kiya tha...ab humari engegement kam se kam tum loge kuchh nach ga lo yar phir kal se to hum sab 3 mahine tak nahi milne wale...

pooja:- ha ha sahi kaha...naveen aalekh...aaj to tum ka farz hai apni behen ki engegment me nachne ka...'

aalekh:- are nahi nahi...

huda:- oye kya nahi nahi...(tabhi they heard a voice of naveen...)

naveen:-
ohhh...ayyy...haahahhahaha...
hooo...hooo...hooo...
taaron ka chamakta gehna ho...
taaron ka chamakta gehna ho...
(naina is just looking at naveen with cute smile on her face)
phoolon ki mehakti wadi ho...
us ghar me khush haali aaye...
jis ghar me tumahari shadi ho...
(naveen is singing...and goes to naina and kissed her forehead)

taaron ka chamakta gehna ho...
phoolon ki mehakti wadi ho...
us ghar me khush haali aaye...
jis ghar me tumahari shadi ho...
(then naveen naina ka hanth apne hanth me leta hai aur raj ke hanth me de deta hai...and raj hold naina's hand very tightly...)
...
...
aalekh:-
yeh phool tumhare jewar hai...
yeh chand tumhara aainaa...
tum jab aise sharmaati ho...
dulhe ka dhadakta hai seenaa...
har aaina tum ko dekhe...
tum to aisi sehjaadi ho...
us ghar me khush haali aaye...
jis ghar me tumahari shadi ho...
(aalekh bhi naina aur raj ke pass jata hai...uski ankhen bhi nam thi...aur wo naina ke sir pe bahut pyar se hanth rakhta hai...aur phir naveen ke pass chala jata hai...on which naina's eyes also got num)
...
...
naveen:-(to lighten the mood)

meri behena hai phool baharo ka...
meri behena hai noor nazaro ka...
meri behena ke jaisi koi behena nahi...
bina iske mujhe kahin bhi rehna nahin...
jaise hai chand sitaaron mein...
meri behna hai ek hazaaro mein..
hum jaise bhole -bhalo ki...
yeh duniyaan to hai dil walo ki...
(to lighten the mood naveen singing for naina...and dancing like rak kapoor)

aalekh:-
yeh duniyaan hai... dil walo ki...
yeh duniyaan hai... dil walo ki...
taaron ka chamakta gehna ho...
phoolon ki mehakti wadi ho...
us ghar me khush haali aaye...
jis ghar me tumahari shadi ho...
(the happiness is written all over his face and today he is singing with his soul)

naveen:-
khusiyon ke mehelo mein baitho...
koi gum na tumhare pass ayeee...
na umra ka pehra ho tumpe...
mere dil ki dua yeh rang laaye...
rab hasta hua rakhe rakhkhe tumko...
tum to hasne ki aadi ho...
us ghar me khush haali aaye...
jis ghar me tumahari shadi ho...
taaron ka chamakta gehna ho...
phoolon ki mehakti wadi ho...
us ghar me khush haali aaye...
jis ghar me tumahari shadi ho...
(now both naveen and aalekh are singing and dancing...and make naina and raj to some dance moovs )

aalekh & naveen.:-
taaron ka chamakta gehna ho...
phoolon ki mehakti wadi ho...
us ghar me khush haali aaye...
jis ghar me tumahari shadi ho...

movie:- hum tumhare hai sanam...

now all are dancing and very happy...

its a morning about 3 am...

ali huda pooja armaan ishaani aur sam nikal chuke hai bcz ali huda aur sam ko urgent duty join karni hai...naveen aur aalekh ki leave ko raj aur naina ne hi extent karaya yeh kar ki unka kaam we dekh leinge...taki naveen aur aalekh apni newly wedded wife ke sath small honeymoon par ja sake...aur sham ko yeh charo bhi nikal jayenge...aur abhi ek ghante ke baad raj aur naina bhi ja rahe hai...unhe fir se j&k bulaya gaya hai...kyuki raj aur naina dono ko hi operation millan se related kuchh information ke ;iye report karna hai kyuki...jab war chal raha tha to aalekh aur naveen ke alawa sirf raj naina hi wahan the...now its time for their departure...

shalu:- oh...yeh 1 mahina kitani jaldi beet gaya na...achha raj tum aur naina ek hi jagah ho to ek dusre ka khayaal rakhna ha...

veena:- raj hum bhi aaj shaam ko ja rahe hai...apna aur humari bahu ka khyaal rakhna...

raj:- ok mom...(raj aur naian apne sabhi bado ke pair chhute hai aur frnds ke gale lag kar nikal gaye airport ke liye...

maya:- achha..veena ji...ab to 3 maah baad hi mileinge...hum apni ore se puri taiyyari kark rakhienge...bas aapko aana hai baraat lekar...

veena:- ha ha...kash jaldi se yeh 3 maah bhi guzar jaye...chaliye khair abhi nasta karte hai...ab neend to aane se rahi...ahha aap loge kab nikal rahe hai..nainitaal ke liye...

maya:- ji bas kal subah...

aalekh's mom;- hiee...kal tak to pura ghar bhara tha par ab...kal se sab khali ho jayega...main aur sirf aalekh ke papa hi reh jayenge...

maya:- are dont worry seema...3 maah baad hum fir se aise hi dhamaal kareinge...

aalekh's mom:- ha wo to hai...

at flight...

raj :- naina tumhe dar to nahi lag raha na...

naina:- veer mujhe kyun dar lagega...

raj:- nahi wo actuallly normally jab plane take off aur land hota hai to girls thoda dar jati hai na bas isiliye...

naina:- are nahin nahin mujhe koi dar war nahi lagta...

raj:- waise naina hows u feeling... i mean now on wards we are engaged...

naina:- sach kahu veer...i m feeling top of the world...i m feeling relaxed and secured ki ab tumhe mujhse koi nahin chhen sakta...

raj:- ha wo to hai...naina wo...naina...

naina:- ha bolo na...

raj:- wo main tumhe pakad sakta hu...(naina looks at with what expression)...a...wo kya hai na ki tumhe to darr nahi lagta par na...mujhe jab plane take off karta hai na to bahut darr lagta hai...

naina:- ah...what...veer are u serious...ek captain hokar...tumhe plane se dar lagta hai...(starts laughing)

raj:- ab isme captain wali baat kahan se aa gayi aur ha...sirf take off ke waqt dar lagta hai...

naina:- ok ok...u can hold my hands...

raj:- sirf hands nahi puri ki puri tum...

naina:- kya..(tabhi raj hugs her tighly..aur plane take off hota hai...naina is also closed her eyes...this was their first hug after their engagement...)

now theie flight lands on J&K...aur we fir aarmy jeep se base cmp pahuch jate hai aur jate hi apne kaam me lag jate hai...

ab ek hafta ho chuka hai...aalekh aur naveen bhi apne apne honey moon se laut aaye hai...aur ab unn logon ne bhi apni apni postings join kar li hai...naveen ko delhi headoffice me post kiya hai to aalekh by luck mumbai me hi hai...yahan raj aur naina bhi apne kaam me lage hai...they are preparing full reports on terror attacks...raj naina ne pani shadi ke liye leave ke liye bhi apply kar diya hai...ab inhe yahan aaye hue 2 hafte ho gaye hai...they both are also enjoying their engaged life too...raj aur naina is waqt ek dusre ko aur achhi tarah samajh pa rahe hai...jo unke liye jaruri tha...ab to yeh haal ho gaya tha ki agar kaam ki wajah se wo wk dusre se ek din bhi na mil payein to inka mann nahi lagta tha...aaj brig saab ne koi kaam dene k liye inhe apne office bulaya hai aur yeh wahi khade hai...

brig:- so capt shekhawat and lft alhuwalia...u both are getting married ha...well congaratulations...aur aapki leave bhi manzoor kar li gayi hai...aap dhai mahine baad apni shadi me ja sakte hai...

raj:- thanku sir...

brig:- khair lets come to the work...rajveer naina jaisa ki tum dono ko pata hai ki abhi jo terrorist attack hua tha...usme kafi jyada matra me illigal ammunitions baramad hue the...aur abhi kuchh informer se pata chala hai ki kuchh ammunitions abhi bhi usi ilake me hai,...un logon ne kafei chalaki se wo ammunitions ko chhipaya hua tha...so aap dono us jungle ke ilako me jaiye aur puri tarah se chhan been karwaiye...capt but dhyan rakhiyega...us ilake me is samay kuchh aadivasi loge aa gaye hai...wo unka ghar bann chuka hai...unhe koi nukasaan na pahuche...

raj:- yes sir...(raj and naina both salutes him and left)...

raj aur naina dono kuchh sipahiyon ke sath jungle ke ilako me search ke liye nikal padte hai...

raj:- officers...aap loge dhayan se 2 groups banaiye aur jungle ke dono ore jaiye...aur search kijiye...main aur lft alhuwalia...yeh saamne ki ore ja rahe hai...jaise hi kisi ko koi bhi info mile just beeped aur sabhi at last humien isi point par mile...any questions...

all sipahis:- no sir...(and all are left..)...

naina:- veer kya sach me yahan par aadivasi loge honge...(both are walking and searching too)...

raj:- haan naina ab sir ne kaha hai to may b jab sab aatank wadi yahan se ja chuke hai to ho sakta hai ki kuchh aadiwaasi loge yaha aa gaye ho...but y r u asking this...tumhe dar lag raha hai?

naina:- no way...actually maine kabhi aadivasi ko dekha hi nahi...isliye main janna chahti hun ki wo kaise dhikte honge...kya khate honge...kya pehente honge...

raj:- naina...wo bhi humari hi tarah dikhte hai...aur wo bhi humari tarah veg ya nonveg hote hai...aur ha pehente kya hai yeh nahi pata..khair chhodo na...wo dekho naina ,,,yeh mark dekh rahi ho...

naina:- ha veer yeh toh koi azeeb sa nishan hai...aise nishan ke bare mein to maine kabhi nahi padha...sayad un terrorists ka koi special mark hoga...

raj:- ha ho sakta hai but its azeeb...yeh marks kuchh azeeb hai koi bhi terrorist giroh aisa mark kabhi nahi chunegi...

naina:- kyun nahi chun sakti...achha chhodo hum i mark ko follow karte hai...(tabhi raj's walky talky beeps...)

raj:- weeper aaya...lagta hai...unme se kuchh logon ko kuchh amuunition mile hai...

naina:- thats great..chalo abhi hum in marks ko follow karte hai...(raj aur naina unn mark ko follow karte karte ghane jungle me pahuch jate hai...)veer...look at that...itana bada pair ka nishaan...kiska ho skata hai...

raj:- naina koi jaa...oh god yeh to kisi insaan ke pair ke nishaan hai...yeh smell kaisi hai...yahan khana kaun paka raha hai...chalo chalke dekhte hai...(raj aur naina dono hi aage badhte hai..to dekhte hai ki saamne kuchh aadivasi loge khana paka rahe hai...aur raj naina ko dekhte hi cheekhne lagte hai...)abee...yeh jhinga lala hai...

naina:- kya...?

raj:- naina aadivasi...oh no bhago naina...(they both turn to go ki ek aadivasi aake unhe pakad lete hai...

1 aadivasi:- jhinga lala..maka kala...

raj:- what?what r u saying...aur chhod humein...

2 aadivasi:- maka kala..hula hula...

naina:- hula hula...(she is laughing)yeh kya hai...veer they are so funny...look at them inhone patte pehne hai...inke pass kapde nahi hai...

raj:- naina chup...(tabhi naina ki nazar unke sardar par padi...wo bahut bada tha...khali type)

naina:- veer...yeh kya...hanthi jhinga lala...

raj;- naina plzz chup ho jaao...(tabhi ek aadivasi jise hindi aati hai wo aaya...)

3 aadivasi:- kaun ho aap loge...ap log humein marne aaye ho na...par aisa kuchh bhi nahi kar paoge...tum loge humien khatam karo usse pehle hum tumhe khatam kar deinge...aur tune(pointing to naina)tune humare sardar gali di...hum teri bali chadayeinge...

raj & naina:- kyaaa...

raj;- look boss...aisa kuchh nahi hai yaar...aur dekh uniform hum to bharat desh ke aarmy sipahi hai...hindustaan zindabaad humien chhod do yaar...aur hum tumhe maar kar kya kareinge...aur naina manfi mango inke sardar se...

naina:- ha ha..i m sorry...plzz humein chhod do...

3 aadivasi:- huka masa.tasa phola...(inhe le jao aur bali ki taiyyari karo...)

raj;- oye kya bol raha hai bhai...(tabhi kuchh lady adivasi aati hai aur naina ko le jati hai...aur kuchh gents raj ko...wo loge inke kapde badlwa kar totally aadivasi type ke kapde pehna dete hai...aur wapas laate haii...)

naina(crying):- veerrr...

raj:- naina plzz dont cry...waise tum in kapdo me bhi bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho...

naina:- ha aur tum bhi bahut hot lag rahe ho...

raj:- sach i love u naina...

naina:- i love u veer...

raj:- dekho haka haka...i mean sir hum koi aapke dusman nahi hai...plzz humein chhod do aap jo kahoge hum kareinge...

3 aadivasi to his sardar:- musha..taka ramhba...khayo nasi...manjobe..manjobe...

sardar:- ki manjobe...rambha...bebase...

3 aadivasi:- theek hai jo hum kaheinge karna padega...

naina:- ha ha kareinge kareige...

3 aadivasi:- pakka... wachan..?

naina:- ha bola na pakka promise...

raj:- ek minute naina pehele sunn to lo ki wo kya chahte hai...

3 aadivasi:- ab kuchh nahi ho sakta hai isne vachan de diya hai...ab tumhe wahi karna hoga...jo hum kaheinge...

raj:- k kkkya karna hoga...

3 aadivasi:- tumhe humare sardar ki iklauti beti rambha se byaah(maariage) karna hoga...aur yahin humare sath rehna hoga...

raj & naina:- kyaaa(totally shocked)...

3 aadivasi:- kasa maka tora..rambha..bebase..bolabo...(rambha ki sadi ke liye dulha mil gaya...use bulao...)

tabhi ek hanthi ke samaan moti ladki aati hai...wo bhi puri aadivasi hai...raj aur naina use bas dekhe ja rahe hai...ek adivasini uske kan me kuchh kehti hai...jis karan wo raj ko dekh kar sharma rahi hai...

raj;- naina...yeh itana sharma kyun rahi hai...aur yeh insaan ki beti hai...

naina:- mujhe to hanthi ki lag rahi hai...(tabhi rambha aakar raj aur naina ke beech khadi ho jati hai aur raj ko kash kar pakad leti hai...)

rambha:- abba dabba chabba...

raj & naina:- kyaaa..???

end of part 22
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago
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