Arshi SS: Chiron CHAPTER 3 | UPDATED May 9| pg 25

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Updated on the previous page meri pyaari beheno. 😃

Edited by cineraria - 10 years ago

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Enthralling Amanji! Can't wait to read more..

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Heavens_Flower

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Posted: 10 years ago

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An interesting profession for Mr. Raizada... 😆

First off I like how you have begin this with ASR POV and the flow is smooth and very enjoyable.

Loved the underlying humor that runs through the entire update even at times when one will find it hard to induce humor... A chapter that left one with wanting more... Looking forward to the next update...

BTW you better patent for "media molestation" 😉

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ASRphanki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

What an amazing chapter Ria..👏👏

Your writing is too good !!

Never in my dreams..did I expect Arnav to be an astrologer..who bhi bina teeka weeka and all stuffs 😆

So, baba Arnav sex racket me phas gaye ??

and K.Jaya Gupta ...whats in a name..and wat does K STAND HERE..

Lemme Guess...its Khushi ??😆

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: arshi-pooja
and K.Jaya Gupta ...whats in a name..and wat does K STAND HERE..

Lemme Guess...its Khushi ??😆

Genius. 😆

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Humare Arnavji aur Jyotshi!!!!! thats definitely a new Avtarr albeit he is dressed in modern drab...and KKG ek lawyer..this ought to be interesting and i can see battle of wills ahead...

so Miss Gupta has become the judge and the jury and found him guilty..maybe she should take up the advice of Chrion..

"Decide no suit, until you have heard both sides speak". - (Courtesey Wiki)

Ria i am sure we all are going to love this...👍🏼🤗

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Wonderful update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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pravallika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Congrats ria 👍🏼
Wonderful start 👏
Arnav as an astrologer and kushi as a lawyer 😆
Something very different. I've not read anything like this so far...
Waiting very eagerly for the next update

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2
Sounds poetic, looks like the protagonists are going to have a portrayal of fiery and strong characterizations.

Can't wait for the narration to begin! All the best yaara.

Now that I have done the first chapter I am smiling all the way reading this.

One of them is, surely.

Thanks Zeffy. 😃

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower
Congratulations AMan...

Let the unleashing begin, finger by finger, word by word, chapter by chapter and reader by reader...

Looking forward to it...

BTW why I am not surprised that you are into Greek mythology too...

Thank you so much di. And oh you too? Someday we should definitely sit and just talk about our favorite characters.

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower
An interesting profession for Mr. Raizada... 😆

First off I like how you have begin this with ASR POV and the flow is smooth and very enjoyable.

Loved the underlying humor that runs through the entire update even at times when one will find it hard to induce humor... A chapter that left one with wanting more... Looking forward to the next update...

BTW you better patent for "media molestation" 😉

You know what that day when Egret jiji said that she had never seen Arnav in this profession I had almost casually said that I'd want to write it some day. Though it happened in a week. 😛

ASR is the observer in the story so it's mostly from his POV. Though when time comes I'll add K's POV.