Arshi SS: Chiron CHAPTER 3 | UPDATED May 9| pg 25

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hey Ria,

Very well-versed. Have to admit I had to use the dictionary for a few of the words. I always improve my vocabulary while reading through your work.

The banner is quite mighty, goes with the theme nicely. Thanks for the note below, came to know more about Chiron, helps in understanding things clearly.

Sounds poetic, looks like the protagonists are going to have a portrayal of fiery and strong characterizations.

Can't wait for the narration to begin! All the best yaara.

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 10 years ago

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Congratulations AMan...

Let the unleashing begin, finger by finger, word by word, chapter by chapter and reader by reader...

Looking forward to it...

BTW why I am not surprised that you are into Greek mythology too...

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Very interesting concept 👏

Looking forward to read 😃

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SS88

@SS88

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Beautiful. I have read your previous works and loved them. But this is beyond amazing. Keep it up.

I love Greek mythology too. Hi five, sister!!

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

eager to read this story.

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Ria, interesting title and interesting start.

First, I hardly know anything about Greek mythology. So called my son who is 12 and asked him if he knows about Chiron and then learnt a lot from him. 😆

But the prologue seems quite interesting.

So lets start the healing.

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Lovely start.. Waiting to read more..

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Wow, Greek Mythology meets Arshi...Can't wait to read it.

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Reserved.

*Now that you are writing again, when will you update your other stories.

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The first line tops the "best lines" of the prologue.

Can't wait to know how she hears his soul.

* I know a little of Greek mythology which is limited to ullyses. So the information was of great help.

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Lumos_Solem

@Lumos_Solem

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Aman, oh Aman! You are back meri jaan. And back with a bang er, Chiron.

When I read the title, I began jogging my memory, where the hell had I heard this word before? It took a few minutes to recall, it was in a green colored book I was gifted when I was 12 called Tales from Olympus.

That was a beautiful prologue Aman, you don't require many words to convey the deepest feelings. That has to be the shortest prologue but I feel I already know the characters.

Your eyes saw the stars, mine the cosmic dust

Are we seeing an antithesis of the original protagonists?