Arshi SS: Chiron CHAPTER 3 | UPDATED May 9| pg 25 - Page 6

Ria behen I tried HARD to find the ASR in asaadhu Roop waala GIf but no avail. I'll do it before this story finishes .
As for the update anything but ASR as a godman/saint/guru was sexpected. Anything but this . Trust me I rubbed my eyes to check if I was mistaken but you YOU . I think the best part about this story is that certain unusual aspects and unexpected twists do not take away from the crux or the narrative. Your glorious vocabulary does not seem forced and nor does the flowery or cryptic language dissuade a reader to discontinue reading . It's a feat on your part for having us hooked, and I cannot wait for the psychological part of the story to commence. Bring it on

Originally posted by: cineraria

Thank you so much di. And oh you too? Someday we should definitely sit and just talk about our favorite characters.

You know what that day when Egret jiji said that she had never seen Arnav in this profession I had almost casually said that I'd want to write it some day. Though it happened in a week. 😛

ASR is the observer in the story so it's mostly from his POV. Though when time comes I'll add K's POV.

Originally posted by: MsDroolKanthan

Ria behen I tried HARD to find the ASR in asaadhu Roop waala GIf but no avail. I'll do it before this story finishes .
As for the update anything but ASR as a godman/saint/guru was sexpected. Anything but this . Trust me I rubbed my eyes to check if I was mistaken but you YOU . I think the best part about this story is that certain unusual aspects and unexpected twists do not take away from the crux or the narrative. Your glorious vocabulary does not seem forced and nor does the flowery or cryptic language dissuade a reader to discontinue reading . It's a feat on your part for having us hooked, and I cannot wait for the psychological part of the story to commence. Bring it on

Jai Jakkama!
Moi Bookmarkingma!!

Come Heer you Ria. 🤗
Take a bow Ria am stunned on your creativity. other day to kill my boredom read the famous article ermm... daily astrology 😆 thought why never ever Arnav was an astrologer in any fiction, may be he was portrayed as an atiest, so just asked never thought you will take it so seriously and write.
First I was pleasntly surprised with the Greek name Chiron. When I read the prologue you hooked me with your writing, what a free flow, vivid imagination, quite a play with words 👏
Bring it on Ria.
Me will be waiting just like ardea for your next update.

superb!
what a story girl.

Quite a unique concept. But honestly it's difficult to imagine Arnav as a jyothishcharya.

Originally posted by: cineraria

Yashi jaanebahaar, a comment longer than the update. 😆

Ahh now that's a same pinch moment. Hehe, Tales of Olympus yara, I read that much later than 12 though. 😳 And it was gifted. A blue one. I don't ever remember buying a book. Bad?

Originally posted by: tomriddle

Oh darling Aman, I am all for the endearment but me and your jaanebahar? Teri online Biwi ko pata hai? Or you plan to pull a Shyam on Sarah? 😆

You never bought a book? Oh poor publishers in India! 😭 Very bad Ria very bad.

You know what Aman, I am getting habitual of getting surprised by you. You outdo yourself every freaking time!