Arshi SS: Chiron CHAPTER 3 | UPDATED May 9| pg 25

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sudhareddy
Very interesting concept 👏
Looking forward to read 😃

Thanks Di. 😃

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: SS88
Beautiful. I have read your previous works and loved them. But this is beyond amazing. Keep it up.
I love Greek mythology too. Hi five, sister!!

You do too? Oh this is great news. 😃 Hi five.

Thanks sis for the kind words.

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: canapoem
Ria, interesting title and interesting start.
First, I hardly know anything about Greek mythology. So called my son who is 12 and asked him if he knows about Chiron and then learnt a lot from him. 😆

But the prologue seems quite interesting.

So lets start the healing.

Kavi Di thank you so much. Aha so son is interested GM? My bro scoffs at it and I thought maybe all boys would. 😆

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dev25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

AMan...

👏👏 Poetry in prose

Astrology and Arshi. Looking forward to see how you are going to weave magic in this genre😊

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ...Iyla...
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*Now that you are writing again, when will you update your other stories.
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The first line tops the "best lines" of the prologue.
Can't wait to know how she hears his soul.
* I know a little of Greek mythology which is limited to ullyses. So the information was of great help.

Ah yes Iyla, my dear I am now working on AHF.

Thank you so much.

For a moment I thought you were speaking of Ulysses the novel by James Joyce. Then the latin equivalent struck.

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: tomriddle
Aman, oh Aman! You are back meri jaan. And back with a bang er, Chiron.
When I read the title, I began jogging my memory, where the hell had I heard this word before? It took a few minutes to recall, it was in a green colored book I was gifted when I was 12 called Tales from Olympus.

That was a beautiful prologue Aman, you don't require many words to convey the deepest feelings. That has to be the shortest prologue but I feel I already know the characters.

Your eyes saw the stars, mine the cosmic dust

Are we seeing an antithesis of the original protagonists?

Yashi jaanebahaar, a comment longer than the update. 😆

Ahh now that's a same pinch moment. Hehe, Tales of Olympus yara, I read that much later than 12 though. 😳 And it was gifted. A blue one. I don't ever remember buying a book. Bad?

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Barunz4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Interesting start ...

But Arnav in one of that jyotishcharya professions ... Weird combination for a hot , savvy , attractive and breathtaking species of male😆

For once we know these jyotishcharya are always a real bad culprits behind those not so innocent stupid faces with even worst crimes committed...so can't think of our Arnav in such deceitful deeds..

Any way like reading your splendid arhi works so wl wait for the story to unfold..

. N wat about your ipk ff on A Hundred flukes .. It was a pleasure to read ipk all over again in difrent style ...Have you stopped it..

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Barunz4ever
Interesting start ...
But Arnav in one of that jyotishcharya professions ... Weird combination for a hot , savvy , attractive and breathtaking species of male😆
For once we know these jyotishcharya are always a real bad culprits behind those not so innocent stupid faces with even worst crimes committed...so can't think of our Arnav in such deceitful deeds..
Any way like reading your splendid arhi works so wl wait for the story to unfold..
. N wat about your ipk ff on A Hundred flukes .. It was a pleasure to read ipk all over again in difrent style ...Have you stopped it..

Phirsht phirsht, no no behen, I haven't stopped AHF. There was a series of too many things happening at the same time and I just couldn't get my hands on it. Now I have finally found some time and then idea of Chiron occurred in last four days and I couldn't sleep. So decided to first let this off, now that one chapter is done, I'll be writing AHF. I'll start tonight and this time for sure. It'll probably take at most three days to put together an update because it's been long.

I have promised myself never to leave a story once started unfinished. So AHF won't stop till hundred flukes have been counted and registered.

Now to Chiron. I know right, Arnav Sexy Raizada doesn't fit in the image we have of jyotishis. 😆 That's why Arnav precisely talks about images and stereotypes. But there's a lot to Arnav than this profession. He's not really the so called godman.

Also it's a rather sad state of affairs that most of the spiritual gurus we see are of dubious character. Recent events have made all of us extremely skeptic of them but I do believe that in a crowd of a thousand there'll be one genuine person too.

Rest the story would gradually unfold.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Jyotishi Arnav Singh Raizada? Really? :D

Aah this forum is a happy strange place to be. But I love it. 😆

You've left me very intrigued and very curious!
This is different from any other fiction I've ever read so, really really looking forward to how it will shape up. :)

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amus5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

"main khud apne thakdeer likta hoon" insaan is today predicting the destiny and to a certain extent "doosron ki thakdeer likh raha hai" and quite aptly put in the slot of Chiron with this notorious case 😉

I'm not gonna say that this ASR is of the likes of fraudulent swamijis as that would put our hero in bad light (and we definitely would not want that to happen 😆) nor am I gonna put him in the class of guru-jis (as that would put him in the slot of an ascetic which is against our heroine 😛) Astrology is a science without a doubt but how dubious or authentic our hero is - only time and author can tell and so, will wait for that time 😉

coming to this notorious case which is quite a rampant issue among so-called swamijis, its easy to typecast a person who practices that trade without being heard and I cannot blame our heroine for doing this. let's put it this way, all fingers alongwith the hand seems to be nailing ASR as the guilty and our heroine has just reiterated the fact...

In Ipk ASR was the one to initially pass judgement against KKG and here it is a role reversal...also it was bcos of ASR that KKG was stuck in the scandal with the media but here ASR is already in that mess...interesting...

will wait for the story to unfold itself 😃 pls continue soon 😃

Edited by amus5 - 10 years ago