Arshi SS: Chiron CHAPTER 3 | UPDATED May 9| pg 25

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

Your eyes saw the stars, mine the cosmic dust.

My fingers were painfully clenched for years, dainty nails lay broken in a fist that hid my existence. Till your sinewy ones brushed mine, finger by finger you unleashed me.

Her mind was a slate on which the words were freshly chalked.

Affliction was never a choice; cataclysm was destiny, bereavement, a bitter reality but triumphing it all was my druthers.

Your small hand in mine was my survival.

His soul had voiced.

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

My Greek mythology fetish (if at all a fetish) limits itself to naming. It could be a circumstantial locution, well, who cares whatever it is. Those of you familiar would recognize Chiron as the centaur, son of Kronos popularly known as "The Wounded Healer". He was an oracle, a healer and a teacher who ironically couldn't heal himself.

Chiron is a recently discovered (1977) celestial body, perhaps a comet though that is debatable but in astrology, Chiron in our native charts refers to our deepest wounds or sorrows spiritual in nature and our power to heal them. It is often also attributed to one's grief that empowers one to heal others.

Index

1. Prologue (above)

2. Convict

3. Cacotopia

4. Coffins In Time- I

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

Ria, exquisitely elegant words that instantly pull a reader into the protagonists' minds. Her desire to want to see the cosmic dust' as 'stars', his want to grasp' for survival in the midst of catastrophe.

Can't wait to read more ...

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MOnamy11

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Posted: 10 years ago

beautiful prologue:-) hope and wish eagerly that you will continue a hundred flukes !

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MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 10 years ago

Lace roomaal

You sure you aint a professional writer or someone famous in guise ? Because this is not one would sexpect in the fanFREAKINGfiction forum. Whattey calibre ! Few sentences of the prologue and am already intrigued.

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prpk525

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Posted: 10 years ago

Oh Aman new story!! Girl I missed this...

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MOnamy11
beautiful prologue:-) hope and wish eagerly that you will continue a hundred flukes !

Monu my dear, thanks a lot. I know I have been stuck for a long time in AHF, though it still is the highest on my priority list. I am working it out and hopefully would update before the month ends.

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prpk525
Oh Aman new story!! Girl I missed this...

And I missed you, love. P, how are you? It's been so long that it's almost painful. Miss the old days.

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MsDroolKanthan
Lace roomaal
You sure you aint a professional writer or someone famous in guise ? Because this is not one would sexpect in the fanFREAKINGfiction forum. Whattey calibre ! Few sentences of the prologue and am already intrigued.

Astha behen I am really humbled by your words and also terrifically thrilled. If I am able to write a few good lines, all thanks to this amazing forum and it's writers that have me inspired. Thank you so much behen. Love you loads.