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millee18

@millee18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

That was another amazing update.
Loved how you described their feelings so well :)
Hope they sort out everything soon
Cont soon

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aayushi

@sweet_aayushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Amazing one again!

Well Jeevika being angry is justified and Viren getting hurt too.

They both are right at their own side!

Their point of view of seeing the situation is good!

Hope they sort out this soon,cant see viren hurt or jeevika being sad.

Hope he makes her clear everything and he listen to him :)

Amazing one again!

Update really soon :) waiting!!

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Amazing update!
Your style of writing is wonderful and I'm feeling Virika's pain as clearly as though i was watching it
As i said before Jeevs' anger is totally justified
But I'm feeling like there's more to the story than Sheena's version
Hope we'll get to hear Viren's side of it soon!
Thanks for this lovely update
Hehe time to start writing that next update of OfP&P...

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Priya

@Priya_ashvik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Another amazing update...Thank you soo much...

Waiting for the next pretty soon...

Cant wait to see how the truth unfolds about Sheena...

Viren cant love a girl like her...

He was and is made for jeevika only!!!😊

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Shrutikryan

@Shrutikryan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

amazing update the way you describe virika emotion are justified and waiting for next update hope jeevika listen to viren and the two of them will happy together again

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suju143

@suju143

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Such a Amazing Update :)
virika's convo...Fabulous
Loved viren Said to jeevika that how much he loved her <3
Superb
Awsame
Hope they patch up soon...want some virika moments :)
Thanks for pm :)
continue soon :)

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Pankhuri Malik

@Petal.28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: KryanVirikaLuv
Amazing update!
Your style of writing is wonderful and I'm feeling Virika's pain as clearly as though i was watching it
As i said before Jeevs' anger is totally justified
But I'm feeling like there's more to the story than Sheena's version
Hope we'll get to hear Viren's side of it soon!
Thanks for this lovely update
Hehe time to start writing that next update of OfP&P...

Yes I read your update! I am in love with your story! A love that starts like this will be so epic in the future. Just like the book!

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dolly thakur

@dauli987

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

it was amazing...
I really wanted this kind of track in the show..
I read all the updates today n it was awesome.
pls keep updating ..

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Mansi

@MyKryan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Amazing!

The way you described everything was perfect

Loved it

Really Hope that their misunderstanding solve soon!

Jeevika's behavior is confusing as at one place she want to lessen his pain and at other she's not ready to forgive.

Waiting for next part

Update soon

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Pankhuri Malik

@Petal.28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: MyKryan
Amazing!
The way you described everything was perfect
Loved it
Really Hope that their misunderstanding solve soon!
Jeevika's behavior is confusing as at one place she want to lessen his pain and at other she's not ready to forgive.
Waiting for next part
Update soon

She loves him you know.. she can't see him hurting.. but she also can't understand why someone who is her love would lie to her. I personally feel bad for her. :p

Edited by Petal.28 - 10 years ago

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