A Blast from the Past- An Unwelcome Guest - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

126

Views

16.3k

Users

25

Likes

306

Frequent Posters

Nishtha.Relan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#71
First of all, a BiG sorry for reading ur
Awesome
New concept
Mindblowing
Superb
Lovely
Unique
Story so late...
Its aweosme, loving the new idea which u have potrait! And the way viren and jeevika acts! The previos update was awesome godo, the way jeevika understand viren and want to stand by him side forever. Cant wait tooo see virika gets better n together. Its hard for jeevika but viren would make her understand.
Cant wait to read moreee
Plshhh updateee soniishhh
Thankkk u for the pm's and updateee
Waiting eagerly
suju143 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Fabulous update...:))
Awsame !!
The whole update was just Mind blowing...Jeevika still upset with viren :(
Hope viren convince jeevika that he loves her a lot...& they patch up soon :)
Last part was amazing...Viren Shirtless ๐Ÿ˜‰
Egarly waiting for next update :)
update soon :)
Thanks for pm :)
MyKryan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Wow! WHat an update
Loved it
Jeevika's changed behavior like Nothing happened is confusing. Want to know the reason behind that. Hope viren convince her to come home with him.
Don't want the rift to Continue so plz end it and write the patch up scene with some romantic scene ,as u know viren was shirtless in the end.
Continue soon!
kryanfan1 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Woah... What an Update..!!!!!๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Loved it..
Hope they patch up soon..!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Waiting eagerly for the next update...
Update Update Update.
Petal.28 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Jeevika had no idea how long it had been since she had been staring at him. She had been married to him for almost 2 years now but he never ceased to take her breath away. Through all this time he had always told her how beautiful she was but the truth was that she was more amazed by him than he was by her. His perfect torso, sharp cuts, amazing build and to go along with that his angelic face. She had often heard that a person's eyes are the window to their soul. She didn't know about the rest of the world but his eyes were definitely the window to his soul. Atleast to her they were.
Jeevika had always taken great pride in the fact that she was Viren Vadhera's wife. And even after everything that had happened last night, atleast that hadn't changed. She was still looking at him, his body still wet from his shower, jeans hanging loosely from his waist in an oh-so-perfect manner and water droplets slowly falling of his face. She could feel the back of her throat go dry.
"Virenji" her voice was a whisper, barely audible to her ownself.
"Jeevikaji" Viren said as he etched a little closer to her, if at all that were possible. She could feel his breath on her lips as well as he could hear her heartbeat getting louder by the second.
"Aapka charger bed pe pada hai."
"Accha? Maine toh dekha hi nahi." Jeevika could hear the smile in his voice and She had no idea what was happening. Viren slowly lifted his hand off the wall and tucked a strand of Jeevika's hair behind her ear. He leaned in closer to her ear and slightly kissed her below it taking her by surprise.
"Aap kya karr rahe hain?"
Without moving at all Viren said "Tum Chandigarh nahi aarhi, toh tumhaare saath kuch time spend karr raha hoon." As he said this looked moved his face half an inch back to look at her. Her eyes were closed and her lips were parted. Viren was completely aware of the effect he had on her and was planning on taking full advantage of it.
"Waise tum Chandigarh kyun nahi aa rahi?"
"Woh Virenji... ummm..." Forget giving him a convincing reason, at that moment Jeevika couldn't even remember her reason for not going back.
Viren slightly pulled Jeevika from the wall and spun her around such that her back was to him. He pulled her hair from her neck and put them over her right shoulder so as the clear her neck and left shoulder completely. He placed a soft kiss on her shoulder and could feel her shudder in his grasp. "Bolo. Sunn raha hoon main."
"Woh dabbu... sweety... Beeji..." Viren smiled as he placed another kiss at the nape of her neck and Jeevika understood his game. He knew that she ouldn't be able to even think straight in such a situation forget lying to him. That was something she was incapable of even when she was in her full senses and Viren's presence was intoxicating to her. This wasn't fair!!
"Yahaan Sweety ko meri zaroorat padh sakti hai. Aur mujhe kuch aur din Beeji ke saath bhi rehna hai."
Viren again spun Jeevika around to face him. "Aur tumhaare pati ko tumhaari zaroorat hai, uska kya?" She looked at him, his face, his expression and she could see the anxiety behind his expression. She could see he was worried about her, about their relationship and she was reminded of everything that had happened in the last 12 hours.
"You'll survive", She said as she freed herself from his grasp.
"Without you? I really don't think so!"
"You'll be fine!" Jeevika turned to leave.
He caught her by the hand and stopped her. "Jeevika tumhe mujhse baat nahi karni hai mat karo, mere se jitna naraaz rehna hai raho, lekin tum ek din aur yahaan nahi rahogi. Ghar toh tumhe chalna hi padega."
"Mujhe yaheen rukna hai."
Viren took a deep exasperated breath and let go of Jeevika. He went to the bed and started packing his bag. "Theek hai. Yaheen ruko. Beeji ke saath. Dabbu aur Sweety ke saath. Main ghar jaa raha hoon aur ab tumhe lene nahi aaunga. Jab aana ho khud aajaana."
She couldn't believe her ears. "Kya kaha aapne? Aap mujhe lene nahi aayenge? Koi farak nahi padta aapko?"
"Arre tumhi ne toh kaha ki tum yaheen rukna chahti ho. Tumhaari hi baat maan raha hoon. Ruko yaheen. Tum ladkiyan na bohot ajeeb hoti ho. Baat maano toh mushkil na maano toh mushkil!"
"Aapko sachmein lagta hai ki yeh chahti hoon main?" Jeevika walked towards Viren and pulled his arm to turn him around to face her. "Itna hi jaante hain aap mujhe? Aapko sachmein lagta hai ki yeh chahti hoon main?"
"Haath chodo mujhe packing karne do." Viren knew exactly what he was doing. He knew convincing Jeevika would have never worked. She could be really stubborn when she wanted to.
"Main karwaati hoon aapki packing." She opened the bag Viren had just zipped up and started taking out all the clothes from it. She could barely see what she was doing through the stream of tears that was building up in her eyes. She started throwing everything out one by one, aiming them all at Viren. "Mujhe yahaan chodke jaayenge aap. Khud aajana'. Samjhte kya hain khud ko?" Viren could barely hold his smile as he tried dodging everything that was coming flying his way. He had never seen her like this.
"Jeevika.. Jeevika.. Jeevika.." Viren was struggling to get a word in.
"Haan haan aap toh chahenge hi ki main yaheen ruk jaaun. Sheena jo Waapas mil gayi hai aapko. Main hi pagal hoon jo soch rahi thi ki sab theek ho jaayega... "
"JEEVIKA! BASS! AB MERI BAAT SUNO!" Viren grabbed her by her arms and pulled her towards him. "Bohot ho gaya! Sheena Sheena Sheena! Kal raat se ek hi baat ko lekar baithi ho. Bass ho gaya ab! Dekho toh ki kya nikaal nikaal ke fek rahi ho mujhpe."
Viren wiped Jeevika's tears off her face to and made her look around. It was then that Jeevika realised that Viren had actually packed her bag and she had just thrown all her saris and suits at Viren one by one.
"Itni heavy saris tum pehenti kaise ho. Pata nahi kis kis mein kya kya laga hua hai. Mujhe lag jaati toh?"
Jeevika looked at him in surprise. "Ab iss sab ko waapas pack karo and tayyar hoke bahar aao. Mera bag already car mein hai."
"Kyun"?"
"Kyunki Hum ghar jaa rahe hain." Viren said with a smile.


Guys please leave comments also! These updates take up alot of time and your comments actually make them feel appreciated. There is no other incentive to continue them otherwise! Thank you ! :)


Edited by Petal.28 - 10 years ago
Priya_ashvik thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Awww...
Thank you for such a lovely update..
Viren know her too well!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

First of all intoxicating her and all and then saying she can stay as long as she wants!!!
๐Ÿ˜›

Finally viren convinced her to come back!!!
Now this sheena story is going to unfold!!
Too excited for the next update...
Update pretty soon!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
wal43 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#77
such a lovely update
loved it
awesome
cute
sweet
adorable
mindblowing
I hope we keep getting these cute updates
and Jeevika goes with Viren and clear all the problems
and I hope sheena goes to hell๐Ÿ˜‰
๐Ÿ˜Š
kryanian thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Awww...such a lovely update
Haayee...there romance ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Totally loved it
Loved the whole update
Superbly written ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Thank you for the pm
Loving the story
And can't wait to read the next update
Update as soon as possible ๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by kryanian - 10 years ago
kryanvirika05 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#79
I am in love with this story!
Loved how he convinced her, they really are unique (and hot)
He really does know his wife very well!
Hope sheena leaves their minds soon and everything will be okay!

Loved the update, continue soon xx
VirikaLuver thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Amazing update
Ih was so cute the way viren convinced jeevika
Love how he knows jeevika so wel
It was so sweet n cute
Hope the next update comes quick
Hope in the next update thers no mention of sheena wat so ever
Update soon
Thnx 4 the pm
๐Ÿ˜Š

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".