A Blast from the Past- An Unwelcome Guest

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Hello Everyone! I am back! Sorry it took so long to deliver my promise. But sumayyah1 reminded me that I should continue what I started. So here it is. It's an SS on Virika! This too starts on the night of Dabbu's wedding but the story will go in a completely different direction. There will be some new entries and some twists that some of you may not like. But I have had this idea for a while and I want to see how it goes down with everyone. So here goes Part 1!


Jeevika felt like a weight had been lifted off her shoulders. Swamini Bua had forgiven her and she again felt like a wife to Viren. In the past few days whenever she looked at him she didn't feel like she was looking at her husband. His attitude, his behavior, his anger, everything about him made him seem like a stranger. She didn't know what to expect with him anymore. And this really saddened her because she used to know him like the back of her hand.

But everything was fine now. They were fine. They were a family again. And she was going to go back home with him the next day. She smiled at the thought of how now Rishikesh didn't feel like home anymore. Chandigarh was home. Chandigarh was where she wanted to be. With her husband. With her family.

Just as she was thinking about all this Jeevika spotted a face she didn't want to see. Not today atleast. "What on earth is she doing here?"

Jeevika walked across the room and made her way to the entrance. Blocking her way to the room Jeevika said' "What are you doing here?"

"Hey Jeevika! How are you?"

"Don't be coy with me Sheena! Tum yahaan kya karr rahi ho?"

"Tumhaare bhai ko wish karne aayi hoon, aur kya? Tum mujhe pasand nahi karti, lekin Dabbu. Who toh aaj bhi meri koi bhi baat maanega. After all main uski badi behen ki itni acchi friend jo hoon." Sheena smirked.

"Tum aur main dono Jaante hain ki hum friends nahi hain. Kabhi nahi they. Aur Dabbu se tumhe koi farak nahi padta. Yeh sab games college tak theek they. But ab hum college mein nahi hain. I don't want you here. You should leave."

"I will. But ab aayi hoon toh sabse ek baar milke hi jaaungi." Sheena started to walk towards the bride and groom and there was nothing Jeevika could do to stop her. She couldn't tackle her in the middle of the wedding hall. Suddenly Sheena stopped in her tracks and turned around, "Heard you were tried for murder. Way to go jeevs. And here I always thought I'll be your first victim. Hey Maanvi!"

Jeevika turned around and saw Maanvi fuming at Sheena. Maanvi was about to slap Sheena when Jeevika stopped her and let Sheena go.

"Mannu jaane de."

"Di! Aap sunte kyun ho iski. Sheena hamesha se aapse chidti thi. Aapne use andar kaise aane diya?"

"Chodd na Mannu. Dabbu ko wish karke chali jaayegi. Humaare parents best friends they. Use Beeji ne bulaaya hoga. Beeji ke guest ki insult thodi na karr sakti hoon. Jaane de."

Just as Jeevika and Maanvi were having this conversation Jeevika heard someone call her name. "Jeevika! Viren kahaan hai? Hum bohot der se use dhoondh rahe hain. Humein toh kaheen dikh hi nahi raha!" Swamini was trying to get Jeevika's attention.

"Buaji aap rukiye. Main dekhti hoon."

Jeevika scanned the wedding hall but couldn't spot Viren. She looked for him in all the rooms and even went to his car but couldn't find him. His car was right there but Viren was nowhere to be seen. She called his phone but Viren didn't attend the call. Instead he cut the phone. Now Jeevika was worried. This was not like Viren. He never vanishes like this.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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whooo!! im first!! :) :)

res!!!!!!!!
***Unres**!!!
like the idea of the story and also chapter one!
its different and its nice!
gud concept!! :) :)
thnxx for the appreciation!
and thats not a problem! :)
cont sooon!
plzz!!
thnxxx for the pm!!

Edited by sumayyah1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start...:)
Interesting...Looking forward to see what happen next :)
Thanks for pm :)
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start !!!
Its gonna be different from all !
Thanks for Pm ! Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
So different concept
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb start
A way to different concept
Can't wait for next
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...the start is so good... 😃
Please continue soon..
And pm me please.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
loved the whole update
totally
amazing
superb
fantastic
mind blowing
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guyS! Here is the next update! I know it is really late and that is why I have kept it really long. It doesn't have any Virika scenes but that is only because it is the base for the next chapter. And the next update is ready. But I shall only post it if i get enough responses. It really feels like no one is reading these posts.


"Hi Dabbu!"

"Sheena di? Aap yahaan? Aap Rishikesh mein kya karr rahe ho?"

"Tujhe kya lagta hai? Teri shaadi miss karr deti main? Tune toh mujhe bulaaya nahi. Lekin dekh main phir bhi aagayi"

"Arre di, aapko kya pata... itni jaldi jaldi mein hua sab kuch. Sach mein agar Viren jiju aur Virat jiju nahi hote na toh yeh sab tayyari bhi nahi ho paati. Sab unhone kara diya...! World ke best jiju hain dono."

"Apne Jiju chorr. Apni biwi se toh mila dabbu. Shaadi karli aur meri bhabhi ko apni sweety ko chupa ke rakha hai?' Sheena started teasing Dabbu."

"Kya di.. Aap bhi !" Dabbu started blushing. "Parr di.. aapko kaise pata ki uska naam Sweety hai? Aapko kisne bataya? Infact di.. Aapko kaise pata chala ki meri shaadi hai?"

"Ummm... aa... arre woh.. haan bahar likha hua dekha na... itna bada bada.. DABBU WEDS SWEETY.. Sabko pata chal gaya teri biwi ka naam."

"Oh! Haan.. :P Aur Shaadi ke baare mein?

"Chal na! Zaada sawal mat pooch! Jaldi mila apni Sweety se!"

"Arre haan.. aao aao!"

Meanwhile...

Manvi and Jeevika found Viratand started questioning him.

"Nahi Bhabhi mujhe koi idea nahi hai. Maine bhi bohot der se bhai ko dekha nahi hai."

"Kya Virat! Kaise bhai ho tum. Apne bhai ka dhyaan nahi rakh sakte? Mujhe dekho.. mujhe hamesha pata hota hai meri di kahaan hai!" Manvi started yelling at him.

"Tumhaari tarah chep nahi hoon na main, ki hamesha chipkali ki tarah apne bhai se chipka rahoon. Tumhe aadat hai.. jab dekho bhabhi ka khoon choosti rehti ho."

"Kya kaha tumne? Tumne mujhe chipkali kaha? Tumhaari toh main..."

Virat started running and Maanvi started running behind him.. "Ruko tum!! Virat .. Ruko !!!"

Inn dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta. Kuch bhi situation ho inka bachpana nahi jaayega" Jeevika laughed to herself when she heard someone calling her name.

"Jeevika Di! Jeevika Di!"

It was Dabbu! Looking at him she realised that the walking talking pain in the ass Sheena was also in the same building. Aaargghh.. what did she do now?' Jeevika thought.

"Kya hua Dabbu? Sab theek hai na?"

"Haan Di ! Sab theek Kyun nahi hoga? Bass di Sheena Di mujhse milne aayi thi aur main unhe sweety se milaane le gaya. Main do minute gulab jaamun khaane ke liye muda aur who dono pata nahi kahaan gayab ho gaye. Tab dhoondh raha hoon. Mil hi nahi rahe"

"Pata nahi kya ho rha hai.. Yahaan Virenji nahi mil rahe aur wahaan yeh Sheena gayab ho gayi hai?"

"Jiju? Who toh shaayad terrace pe hain."

"Terrace pe?"

"Haan Di! Main unse baat karr rha tha, suddenly unka phone baja aur woh jaldi jaldi mein terrace ki stairs ki taraf chale gaye."

"Accha! Tu ek kaam karr. Tu Sheena ko Dhoondh main Buaji ko Viren jee ke bare mein bataati hoon. Who bhi pareshan ho rahi hongi."

As jeevika started walking towards buaji whom she could spot at the other end of the room. As she was walking she kept getting interrupted by guests whom she met and greeted again and again. It took her 20 minutes to get to buaji. Her brain was running at full speed. Sheena was in the house. Jeevika was never fond of Sheena. She just never got a good vibe from her. Because of this they never got along in college also.

"Buaji! Dabbu keh rha hai ki usne Viranji ko chatt pe jaate hue dekha hai. Aapfikarmat kijiye. Waheen honge. Main abhi check karke aati hoon."

"Nahi Jeevika. Tum ruko. Hum bhi saath aate hain. Aise thodi na party chorr ke chale jaate hain. Yeh Viren bhi na."

"Chaliye Buaji."

Just as they were heading towards the stairs Virat interrupted them. "Nahi Bhabhi. Aap log kahaan Jaa rhe ho. Maine dekha hai. BHai chatt pe hi hain. Pareshan mat ho."

Buaji was however not convinced. "Parr Virat aise koi party chorr ke thodi na chala jaata hai. This is not correct. Main abhi Viran se poochti hoon. Arre itne mehmaan hain yahaan. Viren iss ghar ka Daamad hai. And uska koi pata hi nahi hai. Yahaan tak ki Jeevika ko bhi nahi."

"Haan Virat. Unhone mera phone bhi kaat diya. Chaliye buaji."

"Arre Bhabhi jaane do na. Baad mein daant lena. Abhi aap guests ko attend karo na."

"Virat humein do minute lagenge. Kyun rok rahe ho humein?" Buaji was starting to get annoyed.

"Arre Bhabhi Chorro na. .. Bhabhi.. bhabhi.. buaji..." Virat started walking with them as Jeevika and Swamini went to the terrace. What Jeevika saw up there was not something she ever wanted to have to see. It was a nightmare that she had never even had...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Waiting for the next part :)
Do cont soon

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