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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Loved loved loved this update!
The way Jeevika handled everything! Bow down to her
Just loved every single sentence.
Waiting to know what and how Viren will tell jeevika and make her understand.
Plz update soon and next time a big one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
awesome update
loved it
loved the whole update
it was a shocking update
waiting to read more
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
it was another amazing update!!
I m loving this unique concept of the story!
Totally feel jeevika and even viren
hope all goes good!
Cant predict anything!
Amazing one again!!
Keep udaiting!
Loving It :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Awesome update..!!
I want to see how will Viren convince Jeevika that he loves her only..!
Update soon dear
Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Fabulous update
Amazing
Thanks for pm :)
continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Nice update
Really interesting
Superb!
Waiting to read more
Continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Viren slowly entered his room. The wedding was over and all the guests had gone home. Dabbu and Sweety were in their room as was everyone else in the house. Jeevika was still in the kitchen and Viren knew it was to avoid him. She had been avoiding having any discussion with him ever since Sheena left. Rather... Ever since Sheena had been thrown out. Everytime he approached her she walked away without a word, or engaged in a conversation with some random relative whom either of them could care less about. Viren knew what she was doing. But she was going to have to talk to him eventually. A number of thoughts ran through his head. Will she be able to forgive me? Will she understand? Will she let me even explain myself? Although he knew at the back of his head that this is Jeevika. She loved him. She wasn't going to stay angry forever. But they had just gotten through such a hard time. And now this. Sheena's words ran through his head, He chose Swamini Bua over me, just like he did with you.' The clock was ticking and Viren just paced up and down the room waiting for Jeevika to come back.

Jeevika on the other hand was determined to not enter the room till she was certain Viren was asleep. She did not want to talk. About this or about anything else. She could not even bear to look at Viren right now. She trusted him. "I would not have had a problem with a past if I had known about it. Why didn't he tell me? So what if he had a girlfriend? Everyone has relationships in college.' But she knew... She knew this was more than that. This was not just any ordinary relationship. He was in love with her. He wanted to marry her. He didn't cause she didn't want to stay with a big family. With Swamini Bua. The same way he asked Jeevika to leave because of Swamini Bua. He chose Swamini Bua over me, just like he did with you.'

He. Slept. With. Sheena.

It was 3AM. Jeevika was certain that Viren must be asleep by now. She slowly entered her room to find him dozed off on the chair. Careful not to wake him she tip toed to the washroom, freshened up and changed into her night clothes. When she came out she saw him again. His beautiful face resting awkwardly on the back of the chair. His hands folded across his chest over his white kurta and his black silky hair is the usual disarray. His legs were clamped together and his shoulders were slightly grouching inwards. She knew in a second that he was feeling cold. He picked up the red blanket from the bed a wrapped it around him making fully sure that he doesn't wake up. She turned around and started to walk away just as he grabbed her hand from behind and stopped her.

"Jeevika"

She turned around to look at him. His eyes boring into hers peeking threw his long eyelashes. Her hands in his while he was sitting on the chair. Instantly the situation reminded her of her first Diwali with him when he went down on one knee, held her hand and asked her to marry him. It also reminded her of why he did that. The misunderstanding he had had about Mr. Manan. When he had refused to marry her cause there was an iota of doubt that she was not being honest with him.

She wriggled her hand in an attempt to free it from his hold but he wouldn't let go. She was looking and their hands, her hand struggling to break free and his grip getting stronger with every wiggle of her fingers. His eyes meanwhile did not leave her face. He was trying to read the emotions on Jeevika's face. She had always been so transparent, especially with him. He never had to think twice to know how she was feeling but today he felt like he was trying to read a closed book through its cover. There was no emotion on her face. She didn't even look at him.

"Mera haath chodiye."

"Jeevika Please mujhse baat karo."

"Mera haath Chodiye"

"Please"

She yanked her hand with her jerk and said "Mera haath chodiye... Aah!" Her gold kada was cutting into her skin because of his hold and hurting her. He immediately let go and said, "Jeevika, tumhe lagi? I am so Sorry."

She looked straight into his eyes and said emotionlessly, "Out of all the things to apologise for!"

Viren stared at her for what felt like an eternity. She had never seemed so distant, so cold. She had put up this huge wall and Viren was standing on the other side of it trying to get in. Jeevika turned on her heel and started to walk away when Viren said "JEEVIKA MAIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTA HOON."

Without blinking or stopping she said, "Woh toh aap Sheena se bhi karte hain."

And Viren just looked on she went and lay on the far corner of the bed and closed her eyes. All Viren could do was stare at her, at his wife who suddenly seemed like a completely different person."



PMs have only been sent to people on my buddy list. sorry if anyone was missed out. I am running on a lack of time here. And guys please let your friends know about this story, since I don't have as many friends it is difficult to reach out to everyone.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
wOAHH...!!
An Update finally...!!
And that too such an emotional one... 😭😭
None of them seem to be wrong.
Both of them are right in their respective positions and I feel so bad for both of them.😭
Very well written...👏
Plz update soon.
Waiting Waiting...
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Great update!
As amazing as ih was ih was so emotional as wel
This the first time jeevikas been so cold towards viren
Hope everythings gonna b ok soon
Thanx for the pm
Continue really soon
Wil b waiting to c wat happens next
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Omg I read this all one sitting and damn its good!
The storyline is so different and very emotional
Hate hate hate Sheena she can go to hell!
What really got to me though was how jeevs remembered how viren was ready to break off the engagement because he thought she and Manan were a thing
That's really heartbreaking
She's totally right to be upset at viren
Excited for the next update!
Do write more soon :)

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