ArHi SS: Weight of the world - Chapter 3: Pg 18, 01-June

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Summary: A story about a woman who has battles all her life with weight and the issues it entails. A story that tells the struggle of people - physiologically, socially and psychologically when the alienation comes from not meeting the societal standards of "looking good".

This story is Twiggy's idea. We have brainstormed over the content that's going to come. I agreed immediately to this idea is because how easily I could relate to the story.

One update a week - Sunday / Monday


Genre: Drama

01. Prologue - Page 01
02. Chapter 1: A suitable boy - Page 06
03. Chapter 2: A betrayed girl - Page 11
04. Chapter 3: An apologetic mother - Page 18
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Prologue

Its late afternoon on a rainy Friday and the school corridor is unnaturally busy. Children aged between ten and twelve are hanging around their classes in clusters that hint at the subtle nuances of social evolution that the children have unconsciously succumbed to. Its annual health check-up day; a day suspended from all teaching activities across the middle and primary school where the children get their routine check-ups done by the hospital affiliated with the school. The check-ups include a routine height, weight, eye, motor system and ears.

A seventh standard girl leans across the staircase chatting with a boy from different section. They are old friends who share thoughts about books they have read and the music they listen to. She is talking about the concept of loading vegetables and cheese on a flat bread and calling it a meal. She just doesn't get why The Hardy Boys love it or is the most common food that she has come across in western fiction.

"They make pizza sound so...awesome, you know?" She exclaims, arms making a complicated gesture to ascertain her prerogative.

"And all the cheese..." The boy sighs in response. "I wish it wasn't so expensive." He bemoans tragically.

"Congratulations Khushi!" She turns around when a boy's voice loud enough to cut through the plethora of noises around them calls her. She stiffens when she recognizes the owner of the voice.

"For what, Karan?" Khushi asked softly, hoping it wouldn't be what she thought it would. It was a yearly ritual that started three years ago when they were only nine years old. She had hoped that now that they were twelve, her classmates would forgo the insults that came her way during every health exam.

"You made the school's top ten list!" The boy, Karan, swept his hands in mock jubilee. Khushi groaned internally. "You have dropped from being number four to number nine though," Karan continued with a studious expression on his face. "But whatever," he said cheerfully. "You are the ninth fattest student in the school!" He shouted the last bit. At that his cronies yelled cheers and clapped loudly inviting dubious stares and teasing chuckles from other children nearby.

Khushi swallowed the insult and humiliation but didn't bother to respond. She knew if she ignored Karan long enough and didn't engage in his act, he would soon get bored and walk away to bother someone else. She grinned sheepishly and shrugged. Karan waited for handful of seconds debating internally to continue the rant he had or find the next kid on his list. Throwing a sneer at her, he walked away shouting yet another Congrats fatso' in her direction.

Khushi's shoulder slumped in defeat and her friend pats on her back gently. "Don't let that stupid boy get to you Khushi."

Khushi gave him a watery smile and nodded.

She hoped she could forget Karan, his stupid fat-list and the stupid incident in coming few years. She prayed fervently to God that she would lose this baby chubby cheeks one day and don't have a bulging stomach anymore so that stupid kids like Karan wouldn't mock her anymore.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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What can I say ? Its something that happens to say many girls.. even boys, for that matter. And it is only getting worse with time as peer pressure increases and the media relentlessly thrusts the false idea of "beautiful" and "normal" on these kids. How are they to differentiate between right and wrong at that young age? They end up internalising it and this kind of abuse/discrimination/insensitivity just keeps growing. There is little awareness and only a stigma.
Thats the sad truth. I am so glad you are writing on this issue. It needs to be told and it needs to be heard.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Like Twiggy I too feel this topic needs to be written about.
Kids these days are starving themselves in order to have model like figures.
Its sad how they ae mocked and made fun of because they are overweight.
Its more tough when they are at an impressioanble age and such remarks lead to anorexia.

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what i can say...i got one friend who is fat since her childhood, but she married a gentle soul who love her as she is...i hope khushi loose her fat as she grow or may be like my friend she will find someone who will love her as she is
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Uh-oh. This one may be too close for comfort!

Bracing myself. You know when you stand in front of a mirror and there's a mirror at the back and there are infinite images...Ermm yeah...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prolouge
looking forward to read more
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such kinds of mockery become the laying stones for ragging, discrimination and in most case violence in high schools...😭

wish schools gave importance to this issue to help in grooming a better tommorrow *sigh*

thanx for the update...pls continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mocking someone for being obese has become such a norm for today's generation. Its awful how today's generation are obsessed about being slim and callously mocks and make fun of not only who are obesed but also who are just slightly over weight.
People who are overweight are ready to take extreme steps to lose weight under peer pressure so that they are not mocked or targeted for being fat.
This is such a sensitive issue..
Prologue was @wesome.. Who was the boy khushi was talking to before karan tried to mocked her?
Continue soon..
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Your email came as an early Xmas gift. There has been bullies since the beginning of time who like to hide their insecurities by calling others names. In this case overweight probably being the most sensitive word for a child about to hit her precocious teenage years where self image becomes so important. Not to mention that modern image of a beautiful woman is portrayed as waif thin models or actresses in all media outlets. so the combination of the name calling bully at school and the media projection of an ideal beauty can lead to serious damage to this child. I can't wait to see how you explore this and the debate we can get into on this topic.

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