arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
Rhea, update by update i m falling more in love wid Hamesha.
Finally Teri-Meri. Loved it.
Arnav doesn't like rain but Khushi does, so now Arnav too like it for bringing the ethereal glow on khushi's face.
Arnav loves to see a blushing khushi & i love to see arnav making khushi blush. Me & ASR think alike. 😉
Shyam the crazy cuckoo, the creepy insect is upto something but thankfully whatever he was planning, it backfired on him (coz it brought AK more closer).
Nani & Anjali knows abt arnav's jealousy. Will they use it for their life's only purpose?
Khushi & her crazy blabberings makes me amused just like ASR.
Aww Arnav brought jalebi for K & she hugged him being happy & overwhelmed seeing his care.
Everyone tried to tease Arnav but he is ASR & cool & sly like a cat who just finished a bowl of whipped cream & milk.
I guess even in mandap of his marriage wid khushi he will be saying 'I m not going to marry khushi'.
PS. U didn't tell what happened after khushi's unexpected hug.

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
I love arnav's protective streak for khushi other than for anjali.
he wants to preserve & protect khushi's innocence, dreams & aspirations (if any) frm this cruel world.

Shalma your each comment gets better than the previous one. i will put that line in bold up for everyone to read in my next update.. I fell off the chair reading it..

You came even before I sent the PM. Thank you as always for all the love you shower on hamesha.

am happy you liked teri meri.. and ASR making Khushi blush.. I love that too.. in fact I love him yelling at her..or going shh.. or shut up.. or get out.. yes am pretyy much crazy about ASR as you can tell..

haha life's purpose.. naniji and anjali told me they absolutely agree with this comment.

About Shyam.. will explain more next chapter..

the hug.. nothing exciting afterwards..hehe not yet.. babuji started to cough inside and Khushi might have had to rush back.. or ASR might have got a call and had to hurry back to his SUV.. but guess what? next update is going to be exciting.. very.. lagi shart?!

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Prettycool
Full on goosebumps !! Swear I was blushing while reading thr sequence and I was getting weird looks love it hopefully ASR will royal ass after finding Shyam and use his "shatir DiMag" instead of trusting that Shyam

sooo sweet Prettycool.. and smiling happily reading that in orange. And I can imagine ASR in full on scary mode once Shyam's truth is out. Thank you dear for enjoying hamesha..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: Linsie
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Wow khushi trying to convince arnav.. he enjoyed
until anjali break that...
nice choice

Originally posted by: Linsie
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lamksmiji ... so cute

so he went to ecplain but confess to mami.. his feeling

nice...

interesting update

Linsie thanks a lot for taking out time to comment on each chapter and leaving behind shiny dancing gifs.. thrilled you are enjoying.. lakshmiji is cute isn't she? but not as cute as mamiji when she is in matchmaking mode..

Oh and I forgot to mention love your signature..mr khan and ms farukhi.. and pizza..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: anjs
this is a very nice story...but does khushi n payal arent aware of shyam being there ??

hi anjs.. they do know about shyam.. but like IPK they haven't told anyone.. yet..

in this world most probably the truth will come out sooner.. I never did like that Gupta family kept the truth from the Raizadas.. soon the truth will come out for sure.. hope you like how the story will unfold..

thanks for reading..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: asha_mehta
Awesome part.
Khushi is touched to see arnav taking care of her babuji. Nani is indeed very intelligent...she sent Khushi and arnav alone with babuji so that they could spend some time.
Arnav is so happy to see Khushi happy and spend some time with her that he does not feel irritated with everyone teasing him.
Continue soon

you know when nanis try matchmaking they almost always succeed? haha..

asha am very happy you are continuing to like hamesha.. thank you. Yes Khushi sees how much he cares. And in this newfound happy state ASR does not care about his family teasing even.. how wonderful is this phase of their love!

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: mayurisb80
😊 Teri meri sequence of Arnav and kushi beats everything. ..its so sweet to see all of them plotting to bring arnav kushi together. ..an ASR enjoying the same ..lovely update

mayurisb80 you are back... yeaaa... am glad to see you.. and grateful you enjoyed the dance and update. its actually your last comment that reminded me I should put in some more matchfixiya into this chapter.. so thank you dear..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: KeerthiRajkumar
i came across ur story through indi 's pm
i loved it totally
i read the full story
that is really awesome
pm me if u can i will send u a buddy request

I am very grateful keerthi that you decided to try out hamesha on Indi di's recommendation. And very happy that you say you love it..thank you.

I have accepted your request. Will sure pm updates. I usually try and put up a chapter every Thursday..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: MehreenB
you did not pm Rhea😲
RES

unres

Wonderful update.👏

Teri meri and the dance is the best ever milestone in their life and that is where we are heading to in their relationship.He wants to hold her and also wants to feel her presence in his life.Moon, stars and all is the part of their stories and you have used all very nicely.

Shyam def did something to make that poor old man suffer.😡

NK , a confused soul is really providing fuel to the fire which is consuming Arnav but Arnav's care won Khushi's heart

you have the most profound observations mehreen. you know as I was writing the dance I realised it cannot just be about them dancing together. There had to be an increasing level of feeling. And so the pause, the rain drops. Also in the show it is after the dance that she sits and realizes he is always around to help. and that let to the following mehendi week which was the sweetest and most playful portion in their relation up till the 2nd wedding.

And so I ended up with the shooting star. and she wishing for his happiness. I wonder if he wished too. might not have wished in words. but every particle in him wants her safe and smiling. isn't that itself a wish?

That is orange. I was trying to hint that shyam was involved which is why shashi gupta lost control. thanks for catching on. more details next chapter.

And this time. definitely a pm as soon as I post. thank you for following and feeling hamesha so keenly mehreen.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: Aplihs
I just came across your hamesha and have fallen in love with it...this is the arnav khushi that kept us hooked and cannot seem to fade away and you brought it all back with plenty of smiles...thank you thank you

Thank you for the sweetest comment aplihs. I am ecstatic that my story brought back smiles that IPK brought out in us. Yes, they were something else weren't they? miss them so much.. and thank god for IF that we get to share our love for this show with others.

pleasure to meet you aplihs.. hope you continue to smile reading hamesha..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: jazz.kaur
as always...a lovely update...

Hi jazz.kaur I know you have been following the story right from the start. thank you for continuing to enjoy the tale. Its not very serious, but I try hard that the reader feels the love and leaves with a smile.. see you soon..

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