arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: pooja102
awesum

thank you pooja. 2 chapters where they danced.. wonder what I should write next to beat that.. haha..

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome update. your beautiful updates always make me happy. 👏
Teri meri song dance sequence, i love it. When they dance, world stop and it is always wonderful and looks new no matter how many time we read or see it.😳
Babuji mucles are moving. this means his progress in health can create a chance to reveal shyams true nature. i feel so sad for anjsli. She love shyamfrom all her heart like a true lover but she doesn't know his real face. i hope you will show her strong when her husband reality will come in front of her.
aww a shooting star scene.
i like akash and payal sharing a cute moment. They lloks so cute together.
the ending of update was very well written, khushi's thoughts for saree, its speciality and her cute talk with devimayah.
i am eager to know how romantically arnav and khushi love story will unfold now.

a lovely comment like always..thanks javeria for taking time to mention the details that you liked.

I actually copied lines from what I wrote about the teri meri dance in the bftp thread ..haha..

profound thought about anjali. she does love shyam. In fact I liked her denial when mamiji said she had seen him and Khushi talk about divorce. I mean would khushi believe anyone if they said ASR wanted to so something like that? Then how can anjali believe that about her husband? I was reading Indi di's comment somewhere that no what which story anjali always has to go through heart ache.. but like you I hope in my story she turns out strong.

you liked that shooting star scene? I very very badly wanted them to have such a scene in IPK. after marriage or some time when they were in gupta house. how beautiful would have been.. sigh.. well atleast I got to write it in hamesha..

haha payalji and akashji also deserve some rabba ve moments.. both are too cute..

You made me super happy by saying the updates make you happy. Thank you!

Edited by aarwen - 10 years ago

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

read all the chaps in a go ...and must say very very interesting...fun story :)

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: pinky_sathiya
oooh, the dance was awesome. Shashi is getting better. good update.

hey pinky_sathiya.. good to see you.. thank you for liking the dance.. yes shashi did something nice this chapter.. we'll come to know more in the next..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: shiv456
lovely update

thank you shiv456. always feels good to know a reader liked the chapter.

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: lalarukh
read all the chaps in a go ...and must say very very interesting...fun story :)

oohh.. a new reader.. lalarukh.. making a guess you came seeing Indi52's link.. haha.. how exciting for me that you hamesha in one go..

thank you so much.. I did want to write a fun story.. and am smiling widely seeing your comment.

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monakaran

@MONAKARAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#277

i just came across this FF listed on a different story as a recommended read. All I have to say is wow!! Beautiful portrayal of Arnav and Khushi - love the craziness of Khushi - definitely hooked. Hope you continue to update as often as you do now...

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shalini

@bablushalu

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#278

please make arshi more romantic😳 and marry tthem😉

u must make tat shayam suffer to much😡

ur stoory is verry nice😛

all the brst for ur 👏work

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Tiramisu_coffee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#279

First of all, big giant thanks to Indi for mentioning this story!!! This is absolutely beautiful!! I m reliving all those Rabba-Veys that made me fall in love with IPK!! Can't wait for next update!!!

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#280

very very very pretty chapter.

i was in mild to racing dhak dhak practically right through... even akash is getting romantic, nice.

like the family's involvement.

love the gaunt still face asr and the asr who looks at a girl's face and wants to wipe raindrops.

a sense of romance right through... and teri meri intermingled with not just dance but the story of his life... very nice.

thanks and let's meet soon, rhea.

he is not marrying, no, he doesn't need a sherwani.