arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
R😊 Really nice one
Food and Flower [Khushi]

meri jaan...this is a great combo for any man to awake him from slumber...😆😆😆 and you are talking about Arnav who already is ready for everything...haath pakd keh seedha mandup

NK has a very short life...😆 Arnav is def going to kill him..

She is in his designer saree and he is with sohara🤣 🤣 🤣

a tough combo ...both are gorgeous ...aww he broke soha's heart and held Khushi close and shivered her through her spine with his touch and at the top in his husky voice said ...I am not done...but he is never done...with her...is he????

You really described all the layout of the function and the prep for food ...very nice...

poor fidgeting Khushi and our over happy Soha...Soha I am with you in this...🤗

Hey devi maiyaa what a comment Faiqa di.. I love your comments on my story.. thank you sooo much..

haha seedha mandap le jayega.. I am thinking anyway since we are too busy on the BFTP threads next chapter I will make Arnavji take her straight to the mandap and get married.. will make sure pheras also happen and legal document also signed.. bas story khatam and ASR bhi khush.. hahaa

Poor Sohara is worried that ASR might not have liked her.. hahaha.. and you are with Sohara matlab you also want to dance? I will make you someday..pakka..

Sorry i took time to respond was too tired with the blast thread..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: sohara
My finger was itching to type. Firstly thank you very much for dedicating this update to me. But I'm mad, why didn't you scrap me? I wanted to be the first to comment. And look I guess I am the last one who commented. You know naa, i was busy writing my take on BFTP thread.
"what the"
dedicate kya or insult bhi! ye kaisa treatment hai bhai! I know I am a bit behsharam, but itni bhi nahi ki peck him on his cheek without his permission. Just kidding. I am trying to feel his cheek. By the way you didn't mention, was he clean shaved or a little stubble was there. I won't mind stubble, it reminds me of Khushi's dialogue, "apki dari chubti hai." And he kissed her there when his stubble prickled her creamy skin.
OK he refused me and went to Khushi! No problem I can sacrifice him for my Khushi. I will not mind to groove with NK, he looks a bit effeminate, but cute.

enough of my incoherent bakbak. let me come to the chapter. You have written beautifully. I was feeling good that they arranged party in some five star hotel not in RM. In the show they used to do everything inside shantivan. haldi, mehendi, shadi, reception even they made shantivan the venue of fancy dress competition.😆

So Khushi's babuji is also lachar in your story. as you are telling story about Payash wedding, I just can't resist myself to comment about Khushi's babuji. When he saw Anjali, did you remember how he convulsed! In forum a girl commented that he was actually the BD of mithun in disco dancer.

In teri meri though Khushi looked really pretty in the green saree. But that saree was a bit cheap. As ASR gifted her this designer piece and you said it's too expensive to make it wet so I thought to make her wear this saree

See no wonder I dedicate my chapters to you Sohara.. Am rolling with laughter since yesterday when I read the comment. BFTP thread has gone crazy and I was too tired to even come and reply to you here. Sorry about that..

Awww I thought it would be a surprise that is why no special notification.. but since I made you be a guest in their party I will maaf karo myself on your behalf..

And by the way only Khushi is jealous of you, ASR told me he liked you very much. And thought the kiss was sweet. He told me himself so you don't need to worry. And if you want him with stubble he most definitely had stubble. After all you touched his cheek you would know, isn't it?

hahaha even fashion show was in Shantivan? Those days all the more they had no money I think. And how would they have money when tycoon had become House husband..hehehe..

And I can imagine Sanaya in this saree.. she is thin and fair.. everything suits her except those dresses they made her wear.. those were horrible.

Am very very happy you enjoyed Sohara. I always enjoy talking to you. This was my way of saying thank you!

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

edited mu comment on pg 31.
when r u updating nxt part???

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Btw just realised i forgot to ask u something.
Akash kisi kaam ka nhi rehta when he see payal. Does the same happen to arnav too? Hmm..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
Awesome update. AK dance was beautiful, it always leaves me mesmerised. Wanted to dance myself after reading dis update.
Arnav's genuine care for khushi's parents was widout any pretence or need to impress them.
As always loved AK cat-mouse game this time wid pinch of jealousy (thanx 4 making khushi jealous).
Feel pity for NK. He wanted to dance wid khushi but had to do wrestling dance wid buaji. Haha.

Eagerly waitn 4 their second dance.

P.S. Aarween, sorry for late & short comment. AD is taxing and asking for its part of flesh.
P.P.S. Aarween is it ur real name? If not, what is? Btw myself Shalma.

Hi Shalma nice to know your name. No aarwen is not my real name. I am Rhea. And please don't apologize for reading late at all. hope you get to outwit AD and come right back to SKD

That in orange is a wonderful observation. I think I have just now fallen more in love with ASR's character haha.. yes yes he definitely is koi kaam ka nahi once khushi is here. Even in the show if you remember once he got married he stopped going to office.. no work at all.. I think in some offscreen segments even barun and sanaya would joke of that..

Yes really you had read my mind about making Khushi jealous part. Feels good that the way the character reacts in your head is how the readers see them also.

I am laughing at your comment about NK. And as always you have made me super happy by saying you also wanted to dance. There is more dance coming up so keep that green saree ready.

But sorry might not be able to post by thursday. We have been celebrating the clifftop episode on our blast from the past thread and have been busy with that and got no time to write the next chapter...I will try but if not will definitely post over the weekend.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#236

so he doesn't like arnie and not even laad governor... hmmm.

and she gets goats ready for sangeet.

okay.

this has to be true mad love that they are dancing together but um him forgetting sohara's name, rhea... you're in trouble in think. teehee.

those over dressed ladies that checked him out, you know i was there, yes?

garima and shashi and their to be son in law was a traet to read.

love the way you are making dhak dhak dhak dhakl a signature.

please update soon. i need to know what he did with the girl in green. and shyam? yikes? what's he up to?

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: indi52
so he doesn't like arnie and not even laad governor... hmmm.

and she gets goats ready for sangeet.

okay.

this has to be true mad love that they are dancing together but um him forgetting sohara's name, rhea... you're in trouble in think. teehee.

those over dressed ladies that checked him out, you know i was there, yes?

garima and shashi and their to be son in law was a traet to read.

love the way you are making dhak dhak dhak dhakl a signature.

please update soon. i need to know what he did with the girl in green. and shyam? yikes? what's he up to?

Indi di its like am talking to you for the last hour in different places.

You have an uncanny knack to catch the lines I write specially for you. That in pink.. all there in my imagination..

The garima shashi scene.. I was thinking about Darcy and how he was respectful to elizabeth's aunt and uncle and she realizes he is not all arrogant. his servants spoke well of him and that was also a high compliment. these small things I feel tell you if a person is worth it. And ASR in my mind will always be apart from the crowd because that is his persona. But he is also awfully sincere in whatever he does. of course seeing him, all my sincere khayal turn into only bure khayal..

haha I thought Sohara would fit right in at that party.

You want an update soon. me thrilled. thank you di. You always compliment the little things that I put in. Very nice reading of the story.. makes me go dhak dhak dhak for you..