arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

that was a really romantic update. good going

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: Sindhuramakrish
that was a really romantic update. good going

Isn't ASR drop dead gorgeous when he decides he has to dance with his girl? Thank you Sindhuramakrish for letting yourself get swept in their love story.. see you soon..

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Mehreen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Beautiful Rhea.😊

You made Sohara as Arnie's fav.and she made Khushi jealous.Wow...So may things for the party.Mouth watering dishes but for me it was Khushi who wore his sere to make him breathless.He was jealous of NK and he is showing her who is a real players.

Khushi never can handle his touch and he knows it and can hear that too.

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Shweta1691

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Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Brilliant storytelling!!!!

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tanvi_arshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Nice story...read in one go...loving it..

Edited by tanvi_arshi - 10 years ago

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: MehreenB
Beautiful Rhea.😊

You made Sohara as Arnie's fav.and she made Khushi jealous.Wow...So may things for the party.Mouth watering dishes but for me it was Khushi who wore his sere to make him breathless.He was jealous of NK and he is showing her who is a real players.

Khushi never can handle his touch and he knows it and can hear that too.

ooo that line in orange makes me think of ASR when he is ready to play with Khushi Kumari Gupta. too hot to handle.

Happy you enjoyed the party Mehreen. Thanks lot for saying the chapter is beautiful. Needed a nice girl to make Khushi jealous and decided who better than our very own Sohara!

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Shweta1691
Brilliant storytelling!!!!
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Thank you so much Shweta for saying you are enjoying my writing.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: tanvi_arshi
Nice story...read in one go...loving it..

tanvi_arshi that is so sweet. all chapters in one go..really? thanks a lot.. will pm you the next update. hope to see you when Khushi and ASR dance again..

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#229

R😊 Really nice one

Food and Flower [Khushi]

meri jaan...this is a great combo for any man to awake him from slumber...😆😆😆 and you are talking about Arnav who already is ready for everything...haath pakd keh seedha mandup

NK has a very short life...😆 Arnav is def going to kill him..

She is in his designer saree and he is with sohara🤣 🤣 🤣

a tough combo ...both are gorgeous ...aww he broke soha's heart and held Khushi close and shivered her through her spine with his touch and at the top in his husky voice said ...I am not done...but he is never done...with her...is he????

You really described all the layout of the function and the prep for food ...very nice...

poor fidgeting Khushi and our over happy Soha...Soha I am with you in this...🤗

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#230

My finger was itching to type. Firstly thank you very much for dedicating this update to me. But I'm mad, why didn't you scrap me? I wanted to be the first to comment. And look I guess I am the last one who commented. You know naa, i was busy writing my take on BFTP thread.

"what the"

dedicate kya or insult bhi! ye kaisa treatment hai bhai! I know I am a bit behsharam, but itni bhi nahi ki peck him on his cheek without his permission. Just kidding. I am trying to feel his cheek. By the way you didn't mention, was he clean shaved or a little stubble was there. I won't mind stubble, it reminds me of Khushi's dialogue, "apki dari chubti hai." And he kissed her there when his stubble prickled her creamy skin.

OK he refused me and went to Khushi! No problem I can sacrifice him for my Khushi. I will not mind to groove with NK, he looks a bit effeminate, but cute.

enough of my incoherent bakbak. let me come to the chapter. You have written beautifully. I was feeling good that they arranged party in some five star hotel not in RM. In the show they used to do everything inside shantivan. haldi, mehendi, shadi, reception even they made shantivan the venue of fancy dress competition.😆

So Khushi's babuji is also lachar in your story. as you are telling story about Payash wedding, I just can't resist myself to comment about Khushi's babuji. When he saw Anjali, did you remember how he convulsed! In forum a girl commented that he was actually the BD of mithun in disco dancer.

In teri meri though Khushi looked really pretty in the green saree. But that saree was a bit cheap. As ASR gifted her this designer piece and you said it's too expensive to make it wet so I thought to make her wear this saree

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