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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

So arnav let go khushi in the past when she had a crush on him!!
A big fool.
Poor khushi ...she must be reliving the pain of rejection when arnav is near...
Glad khushi found a friend in aman ...
The smugglers seemed dangerous but they are unknowingly brought our arshi closer...
Need no to mention the rain part...awakening of desires.
Loved the update...
Waiting for more

Edited by sarun22 - 11 years ago

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

That was excellent update...

So Arnav is at fault, he is the one who distanaced himself from Kushi...

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

I know I'm late, but better late than never, right?😳

Chapter 1

Okay, I was all wrong when I first assumed that this is going to be a lighthearted and hilarious story. After reading the first chapter I realized that this is something beyond of what I imagined. Now I'm completely sure that this is gonna be one of the most amazing journeys😊

Khushi and Joy's camaraderie was really a treat to read. The cute teasing sessions, along with being mature enough to figure out the dangers lurking around them, I must say they make an awesome pair to work together

Do I need to say what my sixth sense is hinting about Shyam. He is creepy. And him being a father of two, talking with sugar coating words and all, I'm sure he is the one who is doing illegal stuff😡

What amazed me was Arnav's character. When I read the teaser, I thought Arnav was hating the idea of having Khushi around, but after reading the chapter I realized what the real case was. He was surprised to find her there. Also the protectiveness was what was asking her to not be there as its not safe. But I can see past baggage in between them, which is holding them back from being open with each other. And I can sense Khushi still having a special place for Arnav in her mind. Lets see what you all amazing writers have in store for us😉

Amazingly beautiful chapter Ananya. Loved it❤️

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful update with us🤗

Will comment for chapter 2 soon😃

Edited by V3Od - 11 years ago

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Read the three chapters together..

& they are absolutely fantastic..

I like the title, banner and storyline..

& 'Enchanted Silence' chapter reminds me

a beautiful poem..so I thought I'd share this

poem with you...

Barish, Badal..Tum aur Main

Khushboo , Mousum..Tum aur Main

Kaley Badal, Rimjhim Barish

Neela Anchal...Tum aur Main

Behti Nadiyan, Girta Pani

Ankhein, Aansu...Tum aur Main

Dur Kahin Koyal Ki Ku Ku

Gehra Jungle..Tum aur Main

Kaandha Tera aur Sar Mera

Pagal Si Chup..Tum aur Main

Edited by Chandni.. - 11 years ago

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

nice update

arshi moments...😳

Waiting for arnav's action against smugglers

I m in love with this story

Continue soon

Bye

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Russell

@russelskhushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

wow... got alot to know from this update... specially Arnav's POV... loved it...

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amv63

@amv63

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Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Congratulations on your debut as an IF writer Disha. You totally rocked it, girl! 👏

"...she had become a lasting fixture in his memory and spirit."

So he was as affected by their last encounter as she was. I completely support him in his decision to not get into a relationship at that point in his life, but I don't agree with how he went about it. Instead of taking the easy way out and just ignoring her and what happened, I wish he had taken the time to sit her down and explain to her why they couldn't take this relationship any further, at least for the time being. That would have been a more gentlemanly thing to do than just running away from her and what they could have had. And perhaps she would have agreed too, seeing as how she herself wanted to work as an environmentalist.

"...and her self respect was more significant to her than a silly little crush." Good for you Khushi.

Edited by amv63 - 11 years ago

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#408

awesome update!!!

the way both of them are strong headed...

looking forward!!

nicely written didnt seem its your first time Disha!! all the best

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Chapter 2

That was really amazing beyond words. I loved the update a lot❤️

The turmoil Khushi's going through with her feelings for Anrav was very well described. I felt they had a one sided love story in the past. But the flashback scene cleared my confusions and now its crystal clear that both of them had feelings for each other. Wonder what made them distant this far😔

The moments both Arnav and Khushi spent together were really beautiful. It was the best scene in this chapter. I loved it when he asked her to let him know the next time she clicks a pic of his so that he can face it directly. Also the way she got lost in his words up to an extent where she was ready to accept that she was the culprit shows how much Khushi feels for him. And I'm sure Khushi has the same effect on Arnav as well. Wonder when they would give in to their feelings😳

Thank god, she barely got caught. I was so glad that Arnav got hold of Khushi before Shyam. Khushi should be really careful next time she eavesdrop, because Shyam sounds trouble, and I don't want her to suffer because of that slime bag😡

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful update with us Anupama🤗

Off to read the next chappie😃