The Last Place On Earth/Arshi SS/ LINK thread 2 on Pg 148

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Amazing !!!!!!!!!!

chap 2

We got a glimpse of Old Arnav & khushi , oh that was a passionate kiss . Khushi is deeply fallen for this man , she is trying not re-visit her past with Arnav , but the situation is not helping either . The night is still young , why do I have a feeling that this night will be long ?

loved it

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

story slowly but surely building up...will arnav pursue her now as he is successful in his career

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

well this makes sense dont it

why she doesnt wanna speak to him

or let him know how vulnerable she is when with him

dude what did you do

wow that was some tense times for arnav

when he couldnt find khushi

what was she thinking

when he told her not to go

he was worried about her

how can he not

were they poachers

i think so

must be right

damn the drive to the party was tensed

well of course it was

poor arhi

they tried to ignore the other in party

but he kept his eye on her

IPL really well he cant talk about what he saw in forest

not here and not now

oh arnav what did you do

waise the song in end was appropriate for sure

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Chap 3

This chapter gave a brief insight of Arnav - khushi's past .They both had mutual attraction for each other . In a blind race to prove his father that Arnav is right in choosing his future he has lost khushi's love .After so many years both are having same feeling for each other , hope they will address this time together .

The song was so apt for the situation

lovely update

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Disha this is totally ramanchi you said you will update on Thursday and you updated on Sunday!!!! Anyway early update is always good!!!!!! 😆

That was an awesome debut D, I loved it 👏 You said probably this is your last update no way you need to continue with a new short story as this is really good 😊

Coming to the update, we got sone glimpse into their past and hopefully we will know their story more in next update!!!!

Loved the song selections, they were apt for the situation!!! So the smuggling plot thickens, when will they get caught????

Cannot wait to for the next update!!!! 😃

Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

awesome update...both still having sparks...but past is stopping them...i think arnav needs to take the first step now...beautifully written dear...very nice