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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update...
Drr desires for each other is justified..aftrall who can redist a wet arnav..a wet khushi..having desires bubbled up in each other!!

They r so broken from within dat nly dey both can heal each others wound by loving n caring each!!
😃 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heyy disha!!!!! I think you write amazing! You should definitely write more!
LOVED the update <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all, congratz on your first attempt Disha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have done a pretty amazing job🥳

Coming to the update, it was full of tension. Tension of being caught by those smugglers, and tension that was brewing between the two ex-more than friends😊

I was so glad that both managed to save their lives without being caught so soon. And I understand why Arnav didn't let anyone know what he witnessed, because as of now, all are suspects

The moments Arnav and Khushi spent together were romantic along with being intense, although they were irritated with each other for very good reasons. The desires seems to grow with each passing day, and I wonder for how long they will be able to keep their calm around each other. If I'm right, not for long😳

So Arnav's the reason behind them growing apart. Well, during our college days we tend to take irrational decisions, which we later regret. And its the same case with Arnav right now. But I'm glad that he now knows what's important for him, and now is the time for him to take the first step before it's too late. Hopefully, he will begin to amend things between them soon😃

This was a wonderful chapter. Loved it a lot❤️

Thanks for sharing such an amazing chapter with us🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

Update soon😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update.
really liked it.
superb.
fantastic and fabulous.
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Posted: 11 years ago
i think u did a very good job, Disha...the chapter was very good...i could feel their emotions very well...

Is Khushi gonna doubt Arnav regarding the smuggling...i think so, thereby hurting him...so eager to read more now
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey dear...that was an amazing update...you should definitely consider writing more often J. The tension between ARSHI was depicted wonderfully but the attraction still exists. So, Arnav is at fault, he is the one who dissociated himself from Khushi...is it because he wants to be in the forest. Now we are waiting for Arnav to take action against smugglers. It was full of tension, tension between ARSHI, tension being caught by those smugglers, beautifully written dear. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh nice. I am loving it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow this was another beautiful update
Fabulous update 👏
I love the two songs. The first was perfect for the enthralling weather and the next suited the mixed emotions and feelings of Arnav and Khushi.
The mystery behind the smuggling is getting very interesting and it's increasing the curiosity.
Waiting eagerly for the next teaser.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: V3Od

First of all, congratz on your first attempt Disha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have done a pretty amazing job🥳


Coming to the update, it was full of tension. Tension of being caught by those smugglers, and tension that was brewing between the two ex-more than friends😊

I was so glad that both managed to save their lives without being caught so soon. And I understand why Arnav didn't let anyone know what he witnessed, because as of now, all are suspects

The moments Arnav and Khushi spent together were romantic along with being intense, although they were irritated with each other for very good reasons. The desires seems to grow with each passing day, and I wonder for how long they will be able to keep their calm around each other. If I'm right, not for long😳

So Arnav's the reason behind them growing apart. Well, during our college days we tend to take irrational decisions, which we later regret. And its the same case with Arnav right now. But I'm glad that he now knows what's important for him, and now is the time for him to take the first step before it's too late. Hopefully, he will begin to amend things between them soon😃

This was a wonderful chapter. Loved it a lot❤️

Thanks for sharing such an amazing chapter with us🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

Update soon😉


And thanks a lot for being the first one to understand Arnav s' state of mind when he decided to move away. He had been young, just too much under pressure and lost. :(
And thanks again for all your wonderful comments. :') Loved reading them. :')
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Posted: 11 years ago
All the best writers of the forum are writing this wonderful piece of work ...
Chap 1
ASR as a forest officer , very interesting (he would look damn hot in this avatar ) of course KKG has to land wherever ASR is present . So she has come for research & friend with him since college . Shyam Jha , once a snake ,always a snake . Atleast khushi guessed him as a scum , well that is a relief , we don't want another 6 months marriage .
loved it

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