First of all I am truly disappointed to miss the place on 1st page by few seconds...
chalo koi baat nahi next time 😊
It was perfect enclosure to the story but I wished the story not to end so soon.
A chapter or two more could have done full justice to the build curiosity and doubts in readers' minds. Like Payal trying to escape through the maze Arnav created around her and needle of doubt shifting towards her or then Khushi suspecting the whole thing n trying in her own way.
Well that does not mean that you did not pulled it off well. In fact even though the story is of only 10 parts, you successfully developed the necessary plot including its characters, their flaws, past history to the T and till the story ended you forced us to sit on the edge of chairs while biting our nails in nervousness through your interesting narration. It is just that I wished to read of it more.😃
It is said ...So sonahar ki our ek lohar ki...it is all to say about the final blow planned by Arnav. No matter how much Akash tried to manipulate him , he proved that he is the real ring master and hold all the reigns in his hands. Khushi too supported him in such crucial time without doubting him.
Payal was a mere pawn so no much to talk about her.
So Picture puri hui dosto...
Bacche lok taliya bajao...
Ab phir milate hai agale Shukrwar nayi picture ke liye 😛
Edited by praj.shrish - 11 years ago
