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@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Darling,

That was a neat and perfect conclusion to "Twisted". The story when it started, through Khushi's POV, I found it interesting and yes, you did a good job by slowly unraveling the surprises - the twists in the story - for eg: Arnav's condition. I think the part which I loved most is the Arnav-Khushi talk before marriage..

Nani, Payal both ladies had had their dialogues, importance and smartness...

Akash's villianessim was beautifully done...and I loved the end he met with...he deserves it for manipulating and cunning nature...

In the last update one part made me laugh - Arnav returning Nani's favor by keeping her unaware of Akash's real situation like she did to him to protect him...that was a nice touch...

Though this kind of suspense thriller is not my cup of tea, I enjoyed reading your work Chaitu...Looking forward to more from you..

Yours greedy fan,

DM :-)

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#562

wonderful part

awesome ending

loved it

I will miss it

thanks for the mail

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

WOW... Akash's fate came as a surprise... It's twisted and wonderful... Loved the way u've written the whole story... It's been an exciting journey... Until the end... Brilliant piece of work... And plz plz, ek epilogue toh banta hain...

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Perfect ending !!!!!!

Arnav did not make his hands dirty by dealing with Akash . However Arnav made sure Akash gets what he deserved . Payal is a opportunistic women who settled with hefty amount . Khushi's trust & faith in her husband won . khudos Arnav , he succeded in fighting his disorder & saving his family . loved it

Waiting for epilogue