Hey , here I barge into this new thrilling world you created by your writing 😊
I am late and not for a second I felt bad for being late as I went on reading. Because otherwise not only cat but even I could have been killed by the curiosity had I followed the story from start. And I am against the idea of dying as an unmarried girl. 😉
Well, now coming to the story. The thing I like about your stories most is their strong plots. You are always confident about what you wan to convey to the readers and confirmed how the story would proceed. Then there are characters of your stories which are substantial. Not even for a single update you let them act against their frame of sketching. And this story is too no exception for all these.
But here I need to mention that I am for the first time more fascinated by Akash and Payal's characters than Arnav and Khushi's. Or may be you have deliberately shifted reader's focus on them at start owing to this is a thriller story. Whatever might be but I really liked both of them even they are exactly opposite to how they had been portrayed in the show.
At the start I could not digest the fact that Arnav is schizophrenic and left to the mercy of his Nani and wife. I felt pity for that man. And for God's sake the word does not go well with Arnav Sigh Riazada no matter what. But I was a fool to believe that you would leave him to only that.
After interlude,the man reappeared with such a glory that I tightened my buckles for a roller coaster ride. The sharp, shrewd brain back in action. Now I am all set and excited for what unfolds before me next.
You going well with the story still my small suggestion. No matter what is genre of the story but one Arnav-Khushi wala romantic Rabba-Vey to banata hai yar 😳
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