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Posted: 11 years ago
I'd not commented on the last two chapters as I had no idea of what I should comment, seriously! So decided that will wait till the story finishes. 😳
Firstly, this genre didn't interest me that much. Maybe because when it comes to ArHi, I like reading their love story more, even though the genre is suspense thriller😳
But but but again, since you were the writer, I had to read it😃
And I am glad I did.
You managed to keep suspense till the last chapter, of what arnav was going to do with akash, without raising his suspicion about the same. I've to give it to his shaatir deemag, to play this game better than akash. 😃
Last two chapters got me thinking if arnav was really schizophrenic! You surely know how to play mind games making me
Aant bhala toh sab bhala😃 Congratulations on successful completion of yet another story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I thought Aakash would be behind the bars .. aapne toh gave it a new surprising twist.. wasn't it a little cruel (even for Aakash) ?? but chalo, at least payash are out of the picture ..
what a roller coster ride!! thoroughly enjoyed it .. keep writing .. :)
Edited by farha_ipkknd - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was so perfect. Really twisted. Still cannot believe it's the end. Brilliant.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Is an epilogue coming up? If yes, we get to read some more. If not, then i have all the time to unres.
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Posted: 11 years ago
So a determined Arnav win against disorder so far and his greedy cousin.

Khushi trusted him this time and believed in his words and explanation is what saved Arnav.

A perfect ending to a twisted tale. What a relief my twisted mind finally got. At least I won't be imagining possible theories of what's what and who is who in this story.

Thoroughly enjoyed and loved it.

P.S. Now when you mentioned a 'Beautiful Mind' and John Nash I'm remember the movie and shuddered at the thought that what your brain can lead you to believe and hallucinate.
Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful Update.
I was so worried for Nani from the beginning but Thank God, she is safe.
And Arnav's plan was mind blowing.
So finally Khushi believes his husband.
Payal is so greedy woman😡
Awesome ending...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Twisted ended without any twist😊 it was awesome ending... everything falling in places...Arnav's perfect plan to teach akash lesson first declaring him death and then making him handicap...khushi trusting arnav boasts is confidence to live a proper life..as a writer you were able to keep us at hook👏 and why arnav be schizophrenia been answered thank you😃
Can we get epilogue for twisted pleaseee
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was one brilliant story, Chaitu.
And I had fun trying to think of different theories about Aakash.
You definitely had our minds tangled and twisted.
Very good thriller, I must say.
Aakash needed to be put out of the way.
And thankfully Payal too is out of the picture.
Loved reading it.
I hope you'll start another one now that exams are out of the way!
Edited by 1chilly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely ending of a brilliant thriller.. loved it.. 😊


thanks for mail.. but will always be waiting for a new FF or SS from you.. Best wishes 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read the story and the note! It was BRILLIANt! Kept me hooked right till the end!

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