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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res Kar lun? :P

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...and Chaitu di goes straight for the Kill this time!

Even as i read the title, nothing could have prepared me for this.

For a minute, i was back in the 'conjuring' moment.😉, almost like what's happening!?

Khushi's haggered, drenched state as she woke up and then the whole atmosphere around her spoke of an eerie, ghostly, calm silence, very disturbin yet very quiet.

And then at the description of chandelier and her faltering steps, Sheesh Mahal, it almost made my heart jumping.. 'Dude ab kya hoga types of situation'!


At night, you are even afraid to disturb the silence and thats why she went towars Arnav rather than calling him out.


And he.. He pushed a knife in himself😲? How? No why?..

Is it a Mirage? A dream? An illusion?.. Anything!

P.S: Horror or not, i'll have a almost sleepless night tonight, just visualising the scene.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For a moment I thought it was a ghost story...am scared of dark and the description which you gave of the lovely Mahal and Khushi's midnight walk was...well! kind of scary for me...and the knife and Arnav...what the hell??? suspense and thriller...wonderful combination which means you are planning to send me to a panic attack state...well! bring it on :-) will see ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my god
why would arnav do that
Cant wait for ur thriller
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow a suspense thriller, one of my favorite genres :)

Loved the prologue and intrigued by the title.

The last scene was spine-chilling and extremely well written.

Looking forward to reading it and wondering as to what will be shown twisted here, life, fate or mind!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woah!!!that prologue surly gave me the jitters!!!!!
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I could feel the emotions Khushi was undergoing as I read the prologue. Why did Arnav do that??
Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamymaya

For a moment I thought it was a ghost story...am scared of dark and the description which you gave of the lovely Mahal and Khushi's midnight walk was...well! kind of scary for me...and the knife and Arnav...what the hell??? suspense and thriller...wonderful combination which means you are planning to send me to a panic attack state...well! bring it on :-) will see ..



Very interesting start
I can't wait to read more of this. I really thought it was a ghost story but I'm relieved to hear it's a suspense story. I can't wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omgg d prologue gav me goosebumps...aah if its a happy ending i vl read on
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting prologue !! Do pm me when you update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg Chaitu that was an awesome and intriguing prologue!!!!!
First of all congrats on the new story!!!! Thank god the story will have a happy ending as I am not big fan of sad endings 😃

Cannot wait for the first chapter!!!!!! Update soon 😊

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