ABCD Drabble OS by Sanskriti - Page 4

wow!!!
awesome work di...
Just oved ur work :)
as like always :0
Plz update soon and Pm me as well

lovely os i so wish ki ye ek long os hota but anyways love it

Hey just finished reading this os...

Before i can say anything abour the os...i want to say that first reaction of me after finishing the read was a shocked expression...you know why because i felt this one wants to convey so many things in one little write up...

There is a girl who just wakes up remembering a dreadful incident she faced...she is really not able to decide what she felt about that because one side she felt the pain of being involved there but suddenly she felt those eyes of the person who was the person responsible for her condition, what took her by surprise was the eyes gave so much to read inside that person yet somehow it never reveled what it meant to say and that was the best part about this mystry boy character...

The boy was shown feeling guilty that the girl got punished because of his mistakes...and you can straight away say that the guy has this pure soul attached with the girl...

There so many things unsaid and to be captured by readers was like the boy and girl were attached due that pathetic incident which unfortunately was outcome of the boy's intentions...and other side that girl changed totally because of the incident...she didnt know the reason was it because she was so close to die or was it the pain that she will never get to see that boy again and know what his eyes actually meant? there is a question left can she fall in love with a guy who took her to the condition she was in? and was the feeling guilt because somewhere deep down he felt love for her and thats why he was away punishing himself for destroying a girl's life?

If there is another part to this one i would surely like to read to know the answers of questions that rose in my mind...

Thank you for pm...

Pratik

an amazing os!!!!

Sweet and simple is what I will name this OS :)

Finally done..actually i want to give my detail feedback so i am reserving for now..will be back at night..

Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry!
I know I'm very very very late

Feedback about the OS Hmph!! Kahan se shuru karu?!
It was exceptionally A-M-A-Z-I-N-G 👏
Wow! Sans I can't tell you how much impressed I am with this piece of writing
With all the restrictions and words you came up with something like this!!
Mahn it was just OUTSTANDING!
I have seen how you've evolved as a Writer so stop underestimating yourself 😛
I loved how you worked with each detail of showing the grey character of Swayam
In a seconds time I felt the heart-wrench when I read it was a nightmare as she yet hasn't got over the incident
Great going girl!
Want to read more and more from you

P.S Thanks for the link 🤗