ABCD Drabble OS by Sanskriti

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is a neutral OS. So free to imagine on anyone.
My words are Orange, Hijack, Linger

She woke up with a heavy head. She blinked her eyes to adjust to the dim light. There was a window in the corner of the room through which faded sun-rays were entering. It was time of sunset n the sky was all covered with orange color.

She tried to remember what happened. She was in her private plane going to Delhi. They had stopped on a place between n after which the plane got hijacked. The pilot was also included in their plan of kidnapping her.

She heard some footsteps nearing. The fear overpowered her senses.

A guy entered the room n she started moving backward. He called a servant n he gave a plate of food. The guy forwarded the plate in front of her but she shooed it. His anger seemed no boundary. He twisted her hand with tightening grip. She winced in pain.

"This is not your home that u can do what u want. Eat this food right now."

She didn't dared to look in his eyes n quietly gulped the food.

He stroked her tear stained cheeks n wiped her tears. She got shocked n shot her head up. She could see a soft emotion in his eyes but in a moment it vanished.

He walked out. She was confused but she wanted to reach her home as early as possible. She started searching the way to elope n found the window best for it.

She walked till window n her breath got stuck. It was some 35th floor from the ground.

"Planning to run away girl?" He whispered in her ears. She flinched sensing him so close.

He picked her up n she tried to stop him but in vain. He laid her on bed.

"Why don't u let me go? What do you want from me?" She asked angrily.

"You need not to know this. Just sleep" he said in a harsh tone n gave a quilt to her. She closes her eyes but sleep was very far from her eyes she was silently weeping for her fate. Also fearing the guy, whose touch was still lingering on her skin.

She woke up next morning to find all darkness only thing she was scared of. She got up from bed but got stuck in something n it made a loud sound. Instantly lights were switched on. She was lying in her room. She was confused as how did she reach her home.

She saw her dad standing. "Dad..."

But her dad cut her off "It was a bad dream. Forget it n freshen up. We have to go to office."

She could see mark on her wrist where he has twisted her hand but sensing the situation she believed her father n walked to washroom.

Her dad sighed. Why don't she forgets that dreadful incidence? Why can't she be normal like before?

It pained his heart that she was punished for the mistakes he committed leaving him guilty forever for his lifetime.

I hope I did justice with the words. Thank you for reading.

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nidhi1998 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
yipee
me first post
awesome os dii
i always like the way you write
and a neutral one is much easier
imagine
id ask you to continue this into and ss
if you were free
i loved it
it was short and sweet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres
it was an exceptional piece of writing
i must say you as a writer hav grown by leaps n bounds
it was intense, fierce n strong story
i luved how you showed the black n grey shades
of swayam's character
the beauty of tis os is how her cruel reality became a dream for her
the last part was amazinggly penned
do give swayam's pov
update soon 😃

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
amazing os.really liked it.
u wrote it so beautifully.
plz continue this os or turned into ss.
i really want to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
It was really very sweet...😊
Loved it !!

Very well written...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was beautifully written :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's just amazing work I literally loved it. Are you going to continue it or just left it hanging for us to guess what actually happened to girl, what sin her father committed etc. I know it's OS but I would like you to continue and answer the questions.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A really beautiful OS
you wrote it really well
i really enjoyed reading it
the story was amn amazing.. well thought
cha gayi tu toh 😉👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dii its amazing...
Loved it...
Osum concept...plane..hijack...dream..nd the guy...
Fantastic...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
beautiful
n very sweet os
loved it
thanks for the pm

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