ABCD Drabble OS by Sanskriti

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Ankita

@anki_22

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

WOW..!😊
well, yes, this was the thought came in my mind after reading it...
very well-written, amazing use of words and a vey attractive writting style...loved it to the core..
it left a LOT of openings...like, really LOT... and I love these kind of stories.. it gives us a dissatisfaction, along with a satisfaction of imagining on my own...So yes, this one is in my favourite list now...
Loved the way you described the Man...😊
would Like to read more of this kind of story, if possible..
A splendid job indeed...👏

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Beautiful write-up.
I luvd d imagination. Fab work.
Plz continue it if u cn. Wud luv to read it as a complete story.

Edited by Thats.me.Guni - 11 years ago

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

First of all thanks for the scrap..otherwise I would'nt have got the chance to read this os...😃

Must say that u hav cleverly used d words...
Short n nice...
It had dat x-factor in it...
great work :)

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Smart and short OS
I liked how you used the words and wrote an OS on such an interesting concept.
I wish you would continue it.I really liked the whole concept and the potential of it to turn in an amazing SS or FF.
Loved it

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Its amazing kriti di 👏. You definitely did justice to the words

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

hey wow...

it was quite amazing...could u please try to continue this?

i really loved it...😳

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

that was a wonderful and superb os... loved it

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Abay

@ikki215

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

ok !so what should i say ? lets go with Swayam style "predictable is boring..hai na?"...but then boring is sometimes fun so i will say what i usually say abt ur works..first big hugs🤗 ...awesome track and it was penned beautifully by you ! the story which in the end you converted into a dream fantabulous...hayye maza aa gya OS pad ke and SwaRon ko imagine kar ke :D

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

amazing!!
beautiful os!!
and of course u did full justice to the words!!

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Good work Kri i liked the thinking you put in your Os innovative and fresh it was good..👍🏼.

Reading an intense Swayam was quite a treat to me coz i personally love intense Swayam too..❤️.

the entire hijack sequence and abduction part was fun to read and very very intriguing to me and most importantly i would want you to continue this one because it is an interesting concept and you have written it well and also i would want clarifications as to what had happened with Sharon which she does not remember so yes a definite yes to conversion of this Os to an SS..😊.

Love,

Kashmi🤗.