ABCD Drabble OS by Sanskriti - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
okay--sorry i'm late--
and i'm confused--need to know more to understand whats going on i guess.

so update soon.

nice way of writing girl.love it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Yaar Sans. This was completely different piece of work.
are you going to continue this?
I loved it. nice work
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
So,Finally m commenting..I really like all ur Works Di..I want u to continue dis one as a FF! Pls do continue 😊!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Sanskriti,
Brilliant job dear,I really loved ur writing here..Though previously i was confused,didnt get anything but after 3 times read,i got it woh bhi completely that its just beautifull..U conveyed each n every possible spices of writing here..I know it is very difficult to write on condition and words but u did so well..If we look as charactervise i loved the way u potrayed her character,How beautifully u shown her emotions and kept her basic essence as a character..We all know ki intensity and SwaRon are like "Choli daaman ka sath",So i like intense swayam and his dialouge delivery..His character was also beautifully penned..Loved the way u showed his pure soul,feeling guilty..Hijack part was funny to read..In short amazing writing..I always count u as good writer but now i have to say ki ur a great writer..I just loved ur writng style..

If possible then try to convert in short story,I am sure padhne me maja aayega..
Thanx for PM
And sorry for late(Aadat se Majboor)😆



Prateek
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Awsum amazing
I luved it alooot
Would love to read more aapi
Plzzz do continue plzzz
And very sorrie for the late comment
Do update next part sooon and do pm me
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
I Luvd it.. 😊
Awesome OS 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
I realy loved it...cms interesting...her dream & d way u hve discribed the guy...do continue it...

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