ABCD Drabble OS by Sanskriti

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

this one is good...

You know, in respect with the fact that you didn't get the strange love feeling anywhere..

Because its very much rare to encounter one.. and in such cases you can't even dare to encounter one..

So that made sense to me..

Because initially I thought you will make them bounce on the bed... But thankfully it didn't happen so..

And I was glad it didn't happen that way..

But I liked it when you depicted.. that she knows it wasn't a dream but she opted to believe her father..

Suggestion: You can continue this, only if you are willing to.. Because anyway its complete enough.. But I am just curious to learn his part of the story..

Quote

Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

its amazing
loved it
the concept was brilliant

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Ooohhh... thriller n mystery ... 😈

she was kidnapped .. but for what??? 😛

the guy didn't seemed to hurt her... instead I thought he have feelings for her... lol.. *romantic minds* 😉 😆

Ohhh... she was dreaming ... poor gal... but she had surely witnessed it once... 😵

what sin??? ... business rivalry me bahot bure loche hote h ... galti kisi ki saza unke bachho ko 😭