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[A/N: Alright, Yeah I am Back! A new work that too FF ;) Excited? :*
Okay people... ONE MAJOR THING, You guys need to wait till first 4 chapters for getting a clear view of story line :) ]

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Chapter 1

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He was losing control, his senses were not responding, everything came to a sudden arrest around him. Only thing he could see was a girl sitting on the other end of bridge, with moonlight adding feathers in her beauty. Her hairs were effortlessly tied with a little ribbon, holding a bit of them and allowing rest to flow in air. He lifted his foot from accelerator, not recognizing that he had already stopped driving.

She looked religious, with her face shining in moonlight, breeze playing with her hairs. He just couldn't blink and it was a thing of surprise for a person like him- so conserved. In years, he hasn't dated any girl, because...He just didn't have any strength to harbor anything he could lose. But today...He wanted to fall in love...It was strange, he just couldn't rationalize anything and what was he thinking? He just didn't know...As if he was spell bounded and she was the spellbinder.

He involuntarily jumped out from his caravan truck and started walking towards her.
She appeared feeble...as if she too was torn apart by the hurdles of life...So fragile. A thin sweater was hugging her body, which could barely protect her from these cold flakes.
Who was she? What was she doing so late on this forbidden bridge?
He walked towards the other end of bridge, numb. He could hear the clear splashes of water hitting the rock, flowing passionately with air current. And he stood still upon reaching behind her, trying to figure out what thought was occupying her mind so badly that she wasn't even paying any attention to him, She seemed to be lost in her own thoughts.
She adjusted herself on the last edge of bridge, with her legs hanging in air with tear drops caressing her cold cheeks.

"Hey..."

He mumbled, trying to make her register his presence. But his try was futile. She didn't turn back.
And this time he said it loud, placing his palm on her shoulder.
And it turned out to be worst reflex; she jumped up, losing her balance on bridge.
She was on the edge with her on leg on the cemented pillar and other hanging in air along with her body.
Hearing her scream, for a moment, he felt as if he lost everything- yet again. He opened his eyes, looking at his stretched hand, looking downwards, towards the flowing water...and looking in her scared eyes. After realizing the reality of situation, he noticed his hand, tightly holding her fragile wrist.

"How dare you! You idiot...Pull me up..."

She braked, sucking her tears, and struggling with gravity.
But only thing he could see was- her eyes...so beautiful...but somewhere he felt pain rush through his veins. All he could witness in those beautiful orbs was- Pain and Tears.

"I wasn't me...sitting on the edge with lost senses"

He replied with anger, pulling her up...For a moment she was his only Goal, her life, everything related to her...In one meet he had attached himself with her, why? Maybe because he saw his own shadow in her soul filled of grief, just like him... He tried with all his might, to pull her back.

He took a breath of relief when he got her back, panting.
He looked at her, she was still crying, catching her breath, giving him deathly glares.

"What were you doing here alone?"
He asked, jerking, squeezing her shoulders.

"How Dare you? I will call police... You were trying to Murder me? Who are you??"

"Ugh... No! I don't even know you... And I just saw you alone here and..." He tried speaking but was interrupted by her.

"And you wanted to take advantage of situation? Eh?" She spoke and in return he gave her a look of disbelieve.

"Why in world I will do that? I have pretty good things to do rather than...whatever..."He scoffed.

"Disgusting!" She screamed from the top of her voice. He had enough of it, firstly it was him who helped her she should thank him, but here completely opposite was happening.

He pulled her close, pressing his palm on her back. And for a moment, everything stopped. She couldn't understand what was happening around...All she could see was his shining orbs, magnetic, hauntingly beautiful.
He could have handled this in much sane way but ended up like this, staring in her miraculous eyes, so deep, with dark brown patterns just like the fine grain structure of 10 years old pine trunk.
He cursed the chilly winds for breaking his gaze and bringing back to reality. He took a step back, watching her straighten her sweater.

"Umm... I think you should go Home..."

He said after assembling adequate courage, did he really wanted her to leave?
And for his reply, she simply turned around, bending down from the edge of bridge, looking at the water. Her act in turn making him scared again, Was she thinking to jump off? Eh?


"Or...Let me drop you home? As you aren't going to get any Bus or car at this late hour...Look I...Have no bad intentions...I was just worried watching someone alone in this abandoned area.. As while driving here...Since past 1 hour I haven't seen any person...so..."
He said, hoping that she will agree, It was the easiest way out from this situation. He will drop her home and then carry on with his journey, that's it! He featured it out... That's it...That's it... and with each time his resolution got weaker, that's it? Really? A moment before he wasn't willing to see her leave and now he was dropping her home? Perfect!!

It really gave him immense relief when she nodded with a Yes'.


"Come then...It isn't safe to stay out here..."
He said, looking downwards at water, and then at her shivering frame. It was really cold out here.

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She saw him open the back gate of his caravan truck, at first she wondered what he was doing. But then when she saw it from inside, for a moment she hesitated.
It wasn't huge from inside, but was pretty comfortable for two persons to stay together, with a small shack in a corner carrying ready-made food articles, a small confined corner with curtains, a comfortable couch, and his work desk which was filled with pictures...Lots and Lots of pictures... papers, files , and camera..

Wait? A Camera? He might be some photographer, or sort of that. She concluded.
She gently pulled a blanket from a bundle, watching him read the address she just had given to him.
"Okay... So I don't know about this place much...As I am from Mumbai...And here in Dehradun for a project. But don't worry I will manage"

"Don't Worry...I will guide you"

She replied with a beam, walking towards the front, settling adjacent to driver's seat.
And he stood still, watching her lead, what the hell just happened?
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*Disclaimer- I don't own any character, they belong to their Creatives. I only own the story line :)

*Characters- (A brief Over view of the Main characters of this Story - They will be explained in Detail in Story :)

Sharon Rai Prakash- Cultural head of a Famous Dance Academy, Frozen Beats.
Kria Ghai- Ex-lead dancer of a dance group under the above mentioned academy.
Reyansh Sighania- Chief Director of a famous Annual Collaboration, Dance Documentary.
Swayum Shekhawat- Head of the team of professional Photographers.

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Chapter 1 (Posted Above)





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Superb One Psto...
The way you desribe nature None can describe it as beautifully
The Bridge sounds really wonderful place..
the first feel just a touch and she shutters to fall and Rey hold her up fab...
The doubt kriya gets is she too much depresed to doubt even a stranger ?

And now Rey from Dedhuran sounds interesting!!!!

Great one...
Me eagerly waits to see this FF roll
Edited by -FrozenRain- - 11 years ago
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OMGGG 😲

How come u manage to woo us again with new concepts everytime?šŸ˜†

Well, the concept was fabulous...

I always adore the style of ur write-ups ALWAYS!šŸ˜†

It was good how u portrayed a girl sitting on an abandoned bridge...

Rey relating to her becoz she reflected his soul n living in her..

Pain and tears...have 2 figure out the reasons😃

Thank god, u didnt made her slip away from the bridge n he jumping for her rescue...

Good dat he pulled her up before she lost her balance

He asking her if he would drop her in home...

She agreed ..

The description u gave me about the back of the truck left me dazzled..

I didnt expect it...

Rey n Kria sitting besides...hmmm...

Ur characteristic of chars gave me lil idea of d photographs thingy in his truck n d plot idea too...

Fab Concept Pasto..

Loved it :*

- Snigs :)
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awesome concept di
and ha update fast
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interesting concept...

loved the way you portrayed everything..

phew! he saved her on time..

like Kriya even I'm amused with the description of the truck..

waiting for next..
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omggg my dietician is back
haayee upi i misd ur updates too much
thanks 4 writing this

wowww
amazing start
woww first i thought they are somewhere in foreign land but nai india hi hai lol
and rey oh god dekhte hi pagal hogaya usse hehe

i loved that small tu tu me me thing between them...
Nicely written

continue soon

thanx 4 the pm
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intrstng cncpt re :D
luv it <3

fabulous update :D
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wowieee...!!!
upi dii..
its just awsum..
loved it..
awsum..
update soon
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wowww i mean woww...

that was such a beautiful writing...

the way you described each and everything...

i felt i was actually there...

and the story concept seems fresh...

the way he was mesmerized by her just watching her...

characters are still a mystery...

waiting for the story to unfold...

lovely update dear... (:
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