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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Nice update. .
I loved the way u expressed both kriya n sharon's emotions...especially sharon's. .
N 2 no's kiski no's hai voh. ?
Anyway continue soon

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

eee...

you updated this...

this was awesome..

so both krisha have unresolved feelings..

awesome... ^_^

and i really loved the angsty touch to it...

lovely it was...

and then how you brought those unknown feeling wala thingy.. ^_^

and starting was awesome... beautiful...

PS: unres on one of my OSs which you have resd for quite some time... -_-

PPS: sorry for short comment

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Greeshma

@pulu1995

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

It was beautiful but short :-/

that too after a long time.. i know i'm complaining :P But awesome update, plss continue soon

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Nice update sharon is very much hurt by swayum krisha both are shatter n hope this documentry bring happiness in their life

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

M loving dis story..u r portraying evrything very well..excellent job...

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

awesome...loved the way u expressed krisha's feelings...update soon...

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

great one..
and now I suppose there is going to be astrong Kriyaansh convo coming up

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

awesome update

totally loved it

pls update next part soon

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

nyce part... 😃

Seems like... sharon have a past with swayam... 😳

Isse itni kya problem rehti hai swayam ke isse janane se... 😆

Now I feel.. kriya will be back to dancing... for sharon's sake... 😉

I was really missing this story.. thanx for updating upu :* 🤗