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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Starting with...The banner is amazing!!! :D

And moving on...this chappy left me suprised yet again šŸ˜†
I had kinda concluded that this story is going to be something really heavy (as of Kriya's state in the start)...
But this chapter cleared a part of it all.. It turned out simple yet touching.. Just the way I prefer 😊
and yess.. finally my confusions regarding the photographs are solved too :D
Do i even need to mention...yess all the feelings were depicted beautifully! :**
I could actually relate to the pain of being left alone...with no one to care and love us! :')
And now Im not assuming anything about Rey's past..waiting for it to unfold with the story. Though I'm guessing a part of it is really similar to Kriya's...from his pov!
continue soon!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
awsmm update..
too eager to read further..
update soonishh..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Awesome update..

so,, Kriya n Rey both have a painful past n both of them lost their nearest ones!

hope Rey will take Kriya with him n fulfill her dream to be a professional dancer!!

waiting for next chappy

update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Its wonderfully written..

Such a beautifull start.. Looking forward for the next updates.. I am sure the story is gonna be more intriguing ahead..

Their first meet and incidents followed ahead.. were superb..

Loved the querying part.. getting to know the other...

He wants to drop her home.. indirectly uska address haath lena tha issre toh..

ab kya harr dusre din 'accidently' uske ghar tapak padega...

Thanks for writing a new FF..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Chapter 3

Bury all your secrets in my skin
Come away with innocence and leave me with my sins
The air around me still feels like a cage
And love is just a camouflage for what resembles rage again.

*

She opened her eyes when the vehicle came to a sudden halt. She looked out trying to register which place this was, and she was left shocked.

Everything went numb for a moment. She had mentally prepared her for this but still watching her place again was almost heart wrenching. The same place where she had made those hauntingly beautiful memories... The place where she gave up on Dance... The place where she gave up everything she had.

She turned back to face him, who gave her one of his most promising beam.

"This is your home, Right?" He said with genuine smile. And she nodded with dry tears brimming.
She pulled the blanket off, stepped down, shutting the door.
She glanced at the building, a two-storey building with outer brown stone work and several climbers covering every arch.

A little tear drop prickled down her cheek which she quickly wiped away and turned back at him.
She tried to smile, hard but somewhere she knew it wasn't possible after whatever happened. Still she plastered a smile on her face and looked at him.

"Thanks Rey..." She spoke.
He smiled, when he saw a deep satisfaction in her eyes.

"You are welcome Kriya... One more thing... Never think there is no one for you..." He said feebly in his comforting tone, but before he could complete his words, he heard a girl coming out from house screaming.

"Kriya..." Sharon screamed with teary eyes, embracing her in a bone crushing hug. "Where the hell were you? We searched for you everywhere? Where did you get down? Why?" She shouted, still weeping."And how dare you!" She added slapping on Kriya's shoulders.

"I am sorry Shar..." Kriya stated but was cut in midst by her friend's angry words.

"You know how much tensed we were... Couldn't you inform once where were you going and why?"

Kriya bit her lips on hearing the word Why' from Sharon's mouth. Definitely if sharon comes to know the reason of disappearance then she was Gone!

While showering her angry love on Kriya, her eyes traced on a face inside the car. She stopped ranting immediately.

"Kriya... Who is that Guy? Your boyfriend? You decided to run away with him?" Sharon asked shocked, though in a much slower tone, but he was able to hear everything. He chuckled and waited for Kriya to clarify.

"No Shar... I was lost... he helped me instead and I am standing fine in front of you because of him." Kriya reasoned.

"You were LOST? Wow!" Sharon sighed angrily. "I need every detail and apology from you!" She ordered. And Kriya nodded feebly in response, scared. No matter how much Sharon was angry, she could see care in her eyes, and love too. That was her Sharon- Bold, beautiful beyond words.
She hugged her, trying to calm her anger, and it worked like each time.

"I am sorry Shar... I promise I won't do this again to you..." Kriya muttered in her pleasing voice.

"Okay... Now go inside... Hot brownies that too chocolate with hot sauce are waiting for you"
Sharon spoke to Kriya.

"And...Thanks for helping my friend" She extended her regard to Rey, watching Kriya step inside the house.

He watched her step inside the house. So it finished here? Humm...He smiled, nodding in assurance, pulling up the seat belt.

"Won't you come inside with us?" Sharon asked.

"Erm... I would have loved that but right now I am in hurry... I need to reach a place..." He said apologizing.

"But wait a minute" He stopped, and staring searching for a piece of paper in the bundle of sheets.
Finally getting a one he was looking for, he extended that slip to Sharon.

"Can you please tell me the way for it?" he spoke.

Sharon held that slip in hand and she was left breathless for a moment. How can this be possible?

She just couldn't believe for a second.

"It's a Dance Academy... Well..." She hesitated.

"Yes... "

"Well, You are almost there...Just go down from the next lane and there you can see hoardings of it..." She replied still not sure of her own thoughts.

"Thanks...Favors are paid off now" He giggled."Btw... I am Reyansh Singhania...Nice meeting you."He spoke and quickly accelerated the car.


And Sharon stood numb. Reyansh Singhania!! What the hell just happened? She had heard this name somewhere. And it didn't take much longer for her to solve the puzzle.

Reyansh Singhania- The Chief Director of the famous Dance Documentary".

This person was supposed to give a quick visit next week in their Academy and he was already here...and she wasn't even was pre-informed? She was the cultural head of that f**king Academy, Ugh! She stomped her foot in disbelieve.


She immediately dialed a number and rushed inside the house emitting fire balls.
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[A/N= I know what you are going to say- This Girl have lost it completely. :P
But I can't help... As I was free this weekend I could do nothing but write, knowing that I cannot write in week-days due to travelling and college work.

And Regarding this Update, Can I just say that.. I love Sharon So much ? ^___^

Haha... Okay.. Enough.. After posting this I have to get back to writing as now my Update Bank is empty :P

Akku and Sonia :D * I hope that's your name* I'll get back to Nile soon ;)

And lastly, One Important Note to Readers. Friends I'v send Buddy request (New readers) to those who have commented here.

My PM ID is - "Upasna_PM"

If you haven't added it yet, then Kindly add it. :D

For rest of the notification Kindly Like the Page mentioned in Author's Note ( On First Page)

Thank You For lovely Comments.

Do tell this time too šŸ¤—

Love! :* ]
Edited by Incandescence. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
nyc chappy...though it was short bt upto mark...both e sailing in d same boat, both r alone...bt y kria is hesitate abt her profession..? so many thots regarding dis have arised in my mind...hope will get the nxt part today itself...
ye lo..mene to abi 2nd chappy ka review dia tha nd got the 3rd one...
dis chapter cleared my most of the doubts, seriously i thot sharon isnt nyc bcoz of her nd kria's cs...bt u changed my whole thinking process...another doubt...wat's up with sharon now...? bt waiting patiently for the nxt as u said u hv 4 chapters ready already...šŸ˜†
by d way...gud shot
Edited by ayeshaKR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
res
unres..

wowiee itne jaldi 3rd chappy bhi milgya..
yupiee..!!
wow dii awsum update loved it alot..
haye sharon ka gussa by god..
rey ko kriya ka boyfriend hi direct banadia..
awsum nd in end sharon lil hyper
awsum update
update soon..
hosaka toh aaj hi dedo..
btw mujhe bhi nile ka update chaiye..
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Chaptr 2 n 3
Read dem Jzz nw...
Der r awesum...
U describe everything so well..
Dat I feel like m watching it
Rather than reading it...

Do cont soon..
N do pme me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Re
unres
upi upi meri pyari upi
:* :*

awesomee part
lol
me toh loved it bohot se bhi zyada

sharon...aahaaa i just love her...mast character hai
and u showed her attitude and care both very well

oh wowww now this is amazing
rey is coming to the same dance academy
gosh just fabulous

continue sone
love you dher saara :*
thanx 4 the pm
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Awsome ff
Loved it
Waiting for nxt
Cnt sn

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