TaaRey: Ek duje ke Vaaste- COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello taareyans!!
its such a great news to hear that taani is coming back in D3...
finally our wish is coming true...
i personally dont hate KRIA's character, bt i love taarey more than kriyaansh.
so my this imagination is for taarey...
haters please avoid.



my story starts from the day when team D3 performs in some professional event offered with highest price till date.

Rey (thinking): its being two years since taani left me.
i hope wherever she is.. she is fine and still loves me as i love her...and misses me as i miss her..
his thoughts gets interupted by his cell ring.

rey: unknown no.?????
hello...
unknown: hello, m i talking to mr. reyaansh singhania
rey: yes. may i know whose this?
unknown: sir, this is rajeev bhatia from A.P groups of industries..
rey: ohh... how can i help u sir??
Rajeev: actually we have an important event tonight. and unfortunately our dance troop is not available at this point. so i just called u to offer this event.
rey: sir this so kind of you. A.P. industries ka offer, its really big thing for us.
but itne short notice pe setting a routine and performing is quiet difficult
rajeev: mr. rey we are ready to offering you rs. 300000 for this event.
and your performance will be the main and the last one..
rey: sir i wil discuss with myt friends and let you know.
rajeev: sure.
the phone disconnects.

rey discusses the offer with the gang:
sharon: i think its a great opportunity, as we have been with the highest price till date.
and above all performing for A.P. INDUSTRIES will be very helpful for us to establish our roots.
gang: yes!! sharon is right
rey: ok then its decided that we are performimg tonight.
rey then calls rajeev and informs him that they have accepted the offer.

Evening:
the gang enters the venue and meets raajeev
he welcomes them and shows the way to the hall wher the event has to take place
the gang is in awww... after seeing the decoration. its just so elegant and strictly professional.

rajeev: this is the stage where you have to perfrom
rey: thank you, its really of you for considering us.
rajeev: dont thank me, our Chief financial officer (CFO) recommended your name, she said you all are very talented and personally very nice people.
rey: (surpeised) thats so sweet of her too..
bt how come she knows us personally.
rajeev: i dont know much... anywaz now you guys enjoy, and all the best for your performance.
gang: thank you sir..

gang goes towards the green room, and from the other way the CFO is coming...
rey is thinking of what rajeev said, and suddenly he bumped into someone...😉



Ok people so here it is the first part... i end it here... as i m also including re entry of kriya also in this ff... so its upto you to guess and tell me who is the CFO... taani or kria...
and pls repply ur views it really makes me feel great...
happy diwali...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Awesome concpet
nd taani left rey
kriya comeback
seems interesting
but pls send this link to other TR fans tooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Superb start
i think its taani
waiting for next part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
nice update yaar
next time pm me also
pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Taarey: Ek duje ke vaaste (PART 2)
hello friends,
i m really greatful that u all liked my ff...
so the next part goes like this...

Rey was walking in the corridor, when he bumps into sumone.
he sees up and gets the shock of his life... its was none other than KRIYA...

Flashback:
When kriya went back to deheradun, there she joined different college, and stopped dancing and used to smile for her mother's happiness. bt her mother knew that she was not happy bt she also dint want to loose kriya just as she lost kriya's father...
after kriya completed her studies, her mother informed her that she has changed her mind, and that they are going back to mumbai and also she allowed kriya to dance and be with rey...
when kriya came to mumbai she went to college as she missed her college very much, bt she went there she she saw rey at basket ball court, she thought to go to him and ask his forgiveness, but that very moment she saw taani going to the basket ball court (remember the episode where rey asked taani as to why she is not supporting him at night in the basket ball court during dance ban)
kriya heard tthe entire convo bt she was confused as to why rey was allowing to girl to be so close to him, and above that he was looking intensely into taani eyes...
then she saw taani leaving the basket ball court and was moving towards rey, when again she heard something which made her dropping the idea to join st. louis and come back to rey...
she heard talking to himself about taani and also that he likes her alot and wants her to be his side...
though she was in mumbai for these 2.5 years but she naver came in front of the gang.
then she came to know about taarey's breakup and also how devastated rey was after taani left...
she completed her further studies and got a job at A.P. Industries, and is their CFO... she learnt that the gang has started a professional dance team and are very successful and she was happy with this news... she onli recommended D3 name to rajeev for the event dance...
Flashback ends...

rey was completely shocked and so was kriya, she planned to leave the place before anyone could see her and she ultimately banged into rey...
REY: KRIYYAA...!!!

Kriya: Rey????😲
Rey: tum... bt before rey could say anything else she leaves...
rey went to the gang and told them everything happened with him..
gang was also shocked...

before gang could say anything they were called for their performance...
as their permance ends, rajeev informed them to wait in the hall itself as the owner of the company is transferring his company into his sons and his son's best friends name...

Owner: may i have your attention please??
today i m very happy.. its a great day for me as today my son has finally proved that he is my son...
my son is taking the responsibility of this company and the Chairman... and his best friend with whom he has done MBA from banglore is joining our company as CEO...
please a round of applause for my son SAKET and his best friend TAANI SHEKHAWAT...
hearing taani's name gang was shocked...

Taani and Saket comes to the stage... and then the owner says:
i would like to call the main dancing stars of tonight on the stage... so may i please call upon team D3...
now it ws taani's turn to get shocked...
D3 team goes on stage...
taani couldnt control herself and said bhai!! and ran to swayam and hugs him tightly,,,,

Saket is surprised to know that swayam is her bhai...
swayam has tears in his eyes,

swayam: taani, kahan thi tum? tumhe apne bhai ki yaad nahi aayi??
itna oaraya bana diamujhe??
ek call karna bhi zaruri nahi samjha??

taani ws continuously crying..
taani: bhai!! aisa nahi hai...
maine apko bht miss kia...
bt main apna career bana chahti thi... isiliye maine banglore se apna MBA complete kia and usi bich meri mulaqat saket se hui n mujhe mera dusra bhai mil gaya and usne mujhe apki kami mehsoos hi nahi hone di, wo ek bhai ki tarah hamesha mera sath deta,


now taani sees rey...
small smile comes to her face...
rey had tears in his eyes... threy look into each others eyes... LLHH...

swayam breaks the eyelock and says: chalo ab ghar chalo, maine aur ghar ne tumhe bht miss kia...
taani: yes bhai... baki baat ghar chal ke karenge...
and then to the gang:
aap sab bhi chaliye main aap sab ke liye coffee bana dungi... bht kuch share karna hai aap sab se... maine aap sab ko bht miss kia...
gang: humne bhi,
vicky: specially rey ne
(oh oh... serious environment)


they all move towards taayam house...
in all this as evryone saw taani they forgot about kriya..


so guys here is the second part... i hope u all like it as i tried my best to show both kriya's and taani's entry together and its effect on rey's, swayam's, sharon's and the gang's life...
do comment and like...
love <3
















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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
hey its awesome⭐️
taani & kria
both enter
together that
was so cool
rey stil loves
taani soo cute😃 😳 😳
kaash show mai b aisa he ho
update soon dear

Edited by navk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb concept
Both Taani nd kria has enter into his life
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
hello guys...
i know you are excited on how i showed both taani and kriya's entry at the same time... thanks alot for the response, but trust me... its just a part of imagination and how i want the track of D3 to move on...
heres the third part... ENJOY!!


evryone reaches taayam's house...including saket...
taani: it feels so gud to be back here, and hugs swayam
i really missed you alot bhai...

swayam: i missed you too taani... ab kabhi mujhe chod ke mat jaana, tum nahi janti tumhare jaane ke baad ye ghar mujhe bht ajeeb lagne laga tha, aisa jaise isme jaan hi na ho...
taani: i love you bhai
swayam: i love you too meri cutely wierd behen...

saket: kya yaar taani lagta hai tears se hi kaam chalana padega, coffee toh milne se rahi...
gang starts laughing...
vicky: haan yaar taani!! nht time se hamne tumhare haath ki coffee nahi pee...
taani: theek hai, aplog baitho main abhi le ke aayi

here taani goes to kitchen, and everyone starts talking among themselves, and no one noticed that rey was standing in one corner, he ws confused as how to react after seeing taani afta such a long time...

rey (thinks): i need to talk to taani, and goes to the kitchen...
taani is making coffee...
he gets lost on seeing her so close to him afta such a long time...
and then comes back to his senses and says taani...

taani turns...
and rey: i m so happy... mera fake break up ka idea was superb... aaj tum itni successful ho... one of the leading industries of india A.P. Industries ki CEO ho... congratulations... and suddenly he hugs taani...
first taani is shocked but then she hugs him back...
rey: i missed you so much taani... i missed you so much...
ab please kabhi mujhe chod ke mat jaana...
i cant live without you taani...
i love you... i really love you alot...

taani: has tears in her eyes...
and then breaks the hug, then lokks intensely into rey's eyes...
and then says...
rey i missed you too... maine bhi apko bht miss kia..
and main bhi apke bina nahi reh sakti...
i love you too...
bt rey hume hamare relationship ko thoda time dena chahiye...
ab main wo taani nahi jo jaldi mei wrong decision le loon...
now i really want my life perfect... with you...
i dont want to loose you again... isiliye ab hum cheezen slowly slowly aage bhadayenge...

rey: taani ye tum kya keh rahi ho...
we are already in a relationship, and we both love each other...

taani: rey i know... but main nahi chahtii ki aap fior se ye socho ki apke and apke dance k bich aa rahi hoon, ya fir main apko apke friends se dur kar rahi hoon...

rey: i know taani maine tumhe bht hurt kia hai...
taani: nahi rey, aapne mujhe hurt nahi kia... wo circumstances hi aise the that hum dono mei problems hui...
bt ab hum dono badal gaye hain, thats y i think we shud take some time before giving in our relation...
Rey: theek hai taani...i promise i wl wim ur heart back... i wl prove that i really love you alot...
taani: main janti hoon rey ki aap mujhse bht pyaar karte hian, i love you too...
and they both hug...
breaking the hug they move back to the hall...
oblivious to the thing that swayam heard their convo...
when taarey dint turn up for a long time, swayam came to kitchen to call taani, bt then he heard the convo...
swayam his happy that his best friend and sister are ready to give their relation a chance and also that their love dint change even after such a long time...

tarey goes to the hall... rey sits besides nil, and taani sits besides sharon...
sharon: congratulations taani... finally you have proved yourself... i m really happy for you... and the h hugs her..
taani: thank you bha... i mean sharon...
sharon(blushes)... reyam notices this...
sharon: (in taani's ears) its okay u can call me bhabhi bt only when we are alone
taani: (surprised) kyaaa??
sharon: haan i love swayam...
taani: wow... thats a great news...
sharon: haan.. bt abhi swayam mujhse naraaz hai, maine usey hurt kia hai...
taani: dont worry bhabhi ab main aa gayi hoon na, i will help you..
sharon: again huga taani and says thank you...

simmi: sharon kitna hug karogi taani ko...
hume bhi taani se milna hia
sharon: haan toh ilo na...
simmi: hugs taani... and says
taani we really missed you soo much...
taani: maine bhi aap sab ko bht miss kia...

the gang started chitchatting... and taarey and swaron were having little LLHH... in between...
then all leave to their respective homes... leaving taareyam...
as rey was staying back with taayam...

swayam: taani tum bht thak gayi hogi... tum ja ke so jao... kal se tumhare office ka pehela din hai,...
taani: haan bhai.. bs jaa hi rahi thi...
gudnite bhai!! gudnite rey!!
reyam: gudnite

when swayam said about taani's office that very moment rey remembered abt meeting kriya in the same office...
now he was very tensed...
rey: swayam, room mei chal... i need to talk to you!!
swayam: haan chal...
reyam goes to swayam's room and closes the door...😕



so guys here was the part the part 3... i know there was nothing much in this part, bt as i m focussing more on taarey than kriyaansh.. i think convo between taarey ws necessary... i hope you enjoy reading my story...
please letme know ur views...

gudnite... shubh ratri...
loads of love to all my friends...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
I think its taani
Plz update soon
I don't hate Kriya but its just like that
I love taani more than Kriya
So I think it should be taani
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
third part was
also awesome
conversation
b/w rey & taani is
good

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